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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 14 years ago

#251

Firstly Mehak......I am really sorry I couldn't reply to ur PMs.......coz I was having exams......😳😳
& Congrats for the award..🥳

When I saw the title The Dark Magic.... I never expected this storyline...It is just different & mindblowing...👏👏👏👏👏
All the parts were just awesome & awesome & awesome....I don't have words to describe...
In fact I cried while reading..it was as if I was going through the pain...

All the parts(1-7) are fantastic& superb...Hats off to you...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Plzzzzzzz cont soon....I just can't wait for next....

Thanx for the PMs..😃😃

Edited by jes_jade - 14 years ago

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

omg omg omg........😳😃😃😃

i loved d pace of the story...........they bcumin gud frnds n all......awwwwwwww priya is d cutest.........

i loved her staring him😳😆😆😆😆

but again........d past..........

ok now she told him abt it...........but isnt it so soon..........

anyways waiting for his reaction.......wethr he will realise it or not...that she was d one..........n then wat all they will hav to suffer..........

waitin for todayz update........do update soon dear😳😃

n congoz once again for d award ..........u thoroughly deserve it!

tc!😃😳

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

thank u guys..u all really flatter me..🤗

PART 8:

N..i was raped..

Mayank was about to put his hand on nupur's shoulder, but he stopped..the reality he had been trying to deny for the past 8 years came in front of him..he thought that his heart would break the cover of ribs and pump out of his body..

Nupur had started crying bitterly, hiding her face in her palms..and mayank was sitting beside her, waiting for what more she would confess, and what more he would have to bear..what more she would confess...

N..merey school main...

Her constant tears and hiccups due to immense pain were breaking her voice, and not allowing her to speak, and mayank's past was not allowing him to react..

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yar yahan tu nahi..ye tu school hai
mayank dimagh kharab ho gaya hai..school hai ye..

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N..class 10th main thi main..

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hum se ik saal junior hai..10th standard ka class room hai..

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N..wahan uper wala jo classroom hai na..

she looked towards mayank..

N..jahan tm se pehli baar mili thi..wahan pe..

Mayank's breath had stopped its regular breathing...
HE HAD RECOGNIZED THE EYES...same silence..same terror, same hatred..same expression...SHE WAS THE SAME..

N..pata nahi kaun tha..mian..

Mayank closed his eyes...everything was becoming blurred..he stood up frm teh sofa, nupur looked at him, he was having blood in his eyes, his eyes were horrified..she also stood up..placing her hand on his arm..

N..mayank..

mayank jerked her hand away..her touch was haunting him..she had frozen tears near her eyes..her voice was still choked due to tears.

M..nupur mujhe jana hai..

he almost avoided his eyes and went towards the door, leaving nupur in a state of shock and disbelief...she ran behind him till the gate, but maynk was taking long steps..

N..mmm..maaynk..

his feet stopped...helplessness..chock..dejection..fear...and..hope..

M..abhi jane do nupur...

mayank didnt had the courage even to turn back..he left leaving the door open, leaving nupur alone..once again..

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Speed meter..120 km/h...

marne wali bhi ho gi tu hath mat lagana

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thank u sir..

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mujhe mauqa hi nhai dena chaiye tha..

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i was raped..

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breaks ...halt...stationery....

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wo nupur thi...

finally his mind and heart had co-ordinated...

rain drops were falling on the windscreen, as if needles were falling from the sky..pricking his heart..

ab main kia karon..ab kia..

he closed his eyes..a feeling of disguist taking over him..

main ne nupur k sath..

tears finding there way out..he placed his head on the steering wheel, crying..

ye kia ho gaya hai..pehli baar mujhe laga k shiyed main bhol jaon ga tu phir..phir wahin a kar khara ho gaya hon..

he closed his eyes again..everything started to cross his mind..her pain, her silent eyes..priya..he opend his eyes..

mtlb priya..meri beti hai...

tears again brimmed in his eyes..and somewhere the pain started to diminish..

itni pyari bachi meri hai..

her innocence, her smile, her cute gestures..this time he started smiling..

tabhi mujhe wo itni achi lagti thi..kuch tu tha..tabhi jab mujhe us ki itni fiqr rehti thi..tabhi main..

his heart had started filling with warmth..

per nupur..kia karon..main?..

again a shock..

shiayed maaf kar de...main maafi mang lo ga..

a flicker of hope lightening his heart...

nahi maaf kare gi..

his heart was adamant..

wo nafrat karti hai us se..

he re-called her voice..it had so much determination..

lekin mujh se..mujh se tu nafrat nahi karti..

he remembered all the eye locks, all the blush, her trust..

agr main na baaton tu...

he could sense the future..

nupur ko main pend hon..agr..

he jerked all the ideas..

nahi..us ka haq hai janna..per wo maaf kar de gi..main ne us ki ankhon main pyar dekha hai..

he reversed the car and suddenly he felt the weight on his shulders lifting down..he remembered all the moments spend with them..no wonder his heart was beating with such affection...he reached her home and the door was open..may be nupur hadn't closed it, he got out of the car, he was getting drenched in rain..

he stepped in the home

nupur and priya were playing in the rain..

his tears started flowing..the smile on their faces was something he could die for..nupur would picked up priya in her arms they were enjoying..

for a moment his heart was at peace..a peace which he had never felt before..he knew all this happiness was his..it was his..finally his heart said..just one confession and everything is yours..

nupr's and priya's giggles were reaching his ears..

he took a step forward but his mind interrupted..

M..agr maaf nahi kiya tu?...

and his feet froze..

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

😊so finally he knwz d truth............chalo ek darr finished😃😆😆

anyways d update was amazing like always......mayankz turmoil......d famous heart v/s brain fyt........i want his heart to win n he tells d truth to nupur........

but then poor nupur....oh god..she has started trusting him so much......told him d biggest reality of her life......kya hoga wen she cumz to knw d truth...she wud b devasted.........me so scared for her.....

waiting for d nxt part😳😊

eager to c wethr he tells her or not.......

n me likin mayank....but dont wanna😆...hez very genuine but only if he hadnt.......just for d sake of his impression.........god.......

anyways i'll better wait.....😃😳😆

u were awesome,amazing n wonderful as always............i hav said this thousand times already😳😆😆.but will repeat many times more😃

tc dear!😊

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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dhano_Tejank

@dhano_Tejank

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

ressss

oh god .....wat's nxt???

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

Mehak.. update the next part asap.. and I want to see Nupz slapping Mayank.. and then just bombard him with all the possible and impossible questions...

Lovely update...

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563295

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

no way... not done mehak... u stopped at such a part.... ??? gotta wait till tomo....

but m happy that mayank came to knw the truth... plz let mayank tel nupur directly...

let her not come to knw indirectly coz that wud create more misunderstanding..... waitin for ur update... thx for the pm.... n did i tell u dat it was a fantastic update???? dont forget to pm me :)

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

Mehaakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
amazing update dear
finally maynak has got to knw everything
i can understand his condition.
but i know nups wont forgive him easily
i m getting afraid how will she react when she will come to knw that the guy is none other than mayank.
wonderful update dear
Keep it up