MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 17

Hmm so Mayank finally met his daughter...and he feels a connection to her which he cant figure out😃

He has a feeling he has seen those eyes somewhere but whenever he tries to think of it, Nupur interrupts with something....though i hope he realises soon....

I loved his short convo with his daughter and his feeling of happiness on seeing Nupur smile😃😃 And wow, for the first time in 8 years he slept without pills....because he was thinking of Priya...is this an indication that Priya will be the cause of the peace between her parents???😃😃

And Nupur, for some reason unknown to her, doesnt wish to discuss Mayank with her daughter....

Everyone is going through a havoc of emotions in this story...diferent ones, at that.....

Loved the end, where both Mayank and Nupur are walking towards Priya....waiting to see the conversation that takes place next😃😃

And congratulations on starting cooking lessons officially dear😃😃

forgot to congrate u as ur learning cooking
all the best
it is 1st time that i came to know ur name is kinza also 😃

recheck my coment!!!!!!! :p :p

mind blowing update mehak plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

It was sweet to see Mayank connect with his daughter, but somehow the mere image of the horrible past does not escape my mind and i'm made to think of it over and over again whenever you mention mayank. Anyway he seems like a loyal worker...and he kinda of made nupur smile so i give him that but otherwise theres still venom in my heart for him.

Nupur and Priya moment was adorable. this mother and daughter rock!

Cinderella awsome update.

Sajjal

PS: you started to learn to cook today, how wonderful.😛

they are walking and my heartbeat is increasing... update the next part fast...

Missed ur ffs so much...Got fever so culdnt come here...I know its late but congrats for the new ff and wish u a brand new year with full of happiness...
This ff is very diff from ur other ones...And even though mayank is realized his mistake i cant take his side and prefer him...He ruined not only the girl's life also her full family...He commited the biggest sin and i hate him here for this...Beautifully written...U portrayed nupur's pain so beautifully that i literally had tears in my eyes...
Loved this ff and thnx for writing on such a realistic topic...
Im lil inactive these days so may be culdnt comment in every part but u keep pming me...I love reading ur ffs and will surely comment whenever i come here...

Hi Kinza So Lovely part

i forgot to ask, how was your cooking class? kab aaoon khane pe?