New SR FF:**Tumse Pyar Hai**Part-3 updated (pg-4)! - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Plz add me also in the PM list.

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****PART-3****

RECAP:Ridz thought why she saw Sid in her dreams like this and tried hard to convience herself that she loves armaan... On the other hand Sid was with yuvi fully talli walking on road kept blabbering about his ex wife..


Abagge::::It was a new morning,birds were chirping and whole mumbains were awaken asthere was a saying that mumbai kabhi nahi soti and we all know very well that mumbai is called a city of dreams and sleeping is not allowed for those who wants to turn his\her dreams true... But there was one person who was still sleeping becose he lost his hope last night,his all dreams shattered yesterday unfortunate night......Sun rays with bright shine reaches his face who wanted to tell him that new morning with new hope comes and its time to awake and move on in your life..he awakend when someone called him...Oye hello utth subah ho gayi hai..dekh mein akhri baar keh raha hu uthja nahi toh......nahin toh kya karega kuch nahin yahan his phone rings he picked it up and exuse himself and came back after 5 min and told him,Sid jaldi se fresh hokar hospital aja dr.Shashank ka phone tha tujhe bulaya haii...mein ja raha hun bye...hospital mein milte hain...
Sid:(thinking)itna kuch hone ke badd doc shashank mujhe sanjeevni aane ke liye kaise keh sakte hain...!par mujhe wahan jana hoga kyunki aaj bhi mein unki utni he respect karta hun...... He gets up and gets ready to go to sanjeevni..a place where he lost his love,his wife,his life,his tendency to dream forever.....a tear forms around in corner of his eyes and falls on his cheeks...sid tu yeh kya soch raha tujhe aage badna hoga r-i-d-d-h-i-m-a ki khushi ke liye.......
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HOSPITAL SCENE:
Sid parked his car and gets out from car and again memory lane starts flooding......Aisa kyun kiya usne kyun pehle nahin bataya mujhe kyun mujhe jhooti umeed deti rahi riddhima kyun????? he starts walking & reached BB court and pictures of last night came in his mind how ridz proposed armaan and confessed that she loves armaan....kya tum mera saath......He closed his eye and someone pats him on shoulder.....................he turned around hiding his tears..Riddhima_oh-hi!how are you?mein... bhi kya..ridz cuts him ye sawal toh mujhe tumse poochna chaiye....Sid.?.? sid didnt say anything.....all turned silence.. Sid looks up and his eyes meets her...they deeply gaze in each other eyes...**Brief eyelock**Time stopped for two facing each other..
SID:(thinking)still this is like when we are together...Why...! (still lost in each other eyes) The silence that usually pervades atmosphere of surrounding was suddenly broken by Armaan face...everything resumed its air of muffeled act while two figures stood in engulfed in silence of another kind facing each other,struggling with emotions,too much for words..this had been their LITTLE SANCTURY..A little corner they had made their own,a SPACE that still echoed with memory of 9 months...last time they had been seen together was over 10 days ago & they were here again together but something was diffrent..he saw her gaze turn icy which broke him and he can see restness and pain in her eyes but no tears.. this had come too far to have any space left for them..
Sid:(in low & firm voice)Im absolutely fine and i knw you are very happy now......Good bye riddhima im going back to houston!! It was too much and she couldnt help it,he had said that what he had wanted to say ever since he gave them thumbs up........But the words felt so hollow and worthless....Mein akhri baar sabse milne aya tha woh dr.shashank ne bhi shayad papers par sign ke liye he bulaya hai....
tears formed once again in his eyes.....BYYYYE!!!He made his way to Dr.shashank before he saw tears,leaving her standing still,like a trance..She had expected to hear it but never imagined it..it would hurt this much tug at her inside so painfully just to look in his when he said it..she had saw equal pain his eyes when he said..she wanted to hug him tightly but those words shocked her to core that he is leaving forever.......she could feel his pain... She could feel her resolve threatning to crumble,this needed to let it out,but had he let it out yes,NO,What could he do now,so that he would,she stood there gathering herself together,all the time moments she spent with him comes in front of her like movie..her dream of being with him for her whole life.......His TOUCH,his KISS.......When her phone rings she glanced at it,it was of armaan but she was unable to think,talk bcz sid's good bye continuosly echoing in her ears,she have such an effect of sid thats why she was unable to pick even armaan's call and her phone went off.....Closing her eyes, thinking for a while she took deep breath and headed towards hospital....
To be continued!!!!!!
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Edited by JERAN_rocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update
update soon and pm me😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oops sorry i hd missed to read te 2nd part nv i noticed it...both te part were awesome i liked it 😳 im very eagerly waiting to read te next so plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
plzzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well both part 2 n three were great!!!...hopefully rids realizes her feelings soon n stops sid b4 he goes to us...bt 2 requests..can u plz send the link along with the pm.. n plz make the updates longer...i love this ff n cant wiat ot read more..thanks for the pm n plz continue soon!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update.
Waiting for next update. Plz Continue soon.
And thanks for PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update n continue son.................
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cool.... update soon!!!!! very short update!!!
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😊amazing update👏
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