New SR FF:**Tumse Pyar Hai**Part-3 updated (pg-4)!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi!!!!Guyz im new to i-f im die-hard SR FAN........... 😃 I am writing my 1st ff...plz bear with me....... šŸ˜‰
This story starts frm where Dmg ends...... Here it goes~~~~~~~........








A beautiful lady in white gown enters the room which was fully decorated with rose and red colour candles litted in whole room........Her heart skipped a bit whn she turned around and saw angel in white 😳 after seeing a man who was in white shirt and blue jeans she started blushing and her heart started beating like racing car she was unable to control her blush so she turn her back to a man who was in front of her and walked two 5 steps away from him to hid her blush... 😳
Then tht man comes from behind and give her a tight back hug and said......I LOVE U RIDDHIMA..... and then he turned her to face him and take 10 steps back near the piano and he started playing a guitar along with singing a song (Pee loon)&then he steps forward and take ridz hand in his hand and start dancing in between they come so closed to each other that there nose are touching ,he moved strand of hair behind her ear..his touch sending shiver down her spine...Ridz moved closer and kissed him right on his lips passionately.,their breathe becoming heavier and heavier but ridz dsnt want to break this passionate moment so they kept kissing for 10 min...ridz hands cluntching his hair and her lef foot was raised and she was running it on his leg and she was wrapped tightly in his strong arms.his hands was moving up and down at her back.....Suddenly,Ridz opened her eyes still breathing heavily switch on her side lamp and said "Aisa nahi ho sakta mein a-r-m-aa-n se p-y-a-r karrti hoon"............. šŸ˜‰ Im sorry for some grammer mistakes ......Do comments u guyz like it or not.....?????? 🄱 tell me hw bad it is...~~~.. šŸ˜• do i continue it or not.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI....
Nice start....u should continue it n plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey welcum to dis forum😃... Very nice start i liked it plz continue soon... And do pm mešŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it......Please pm me when u next update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please add me to your PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its was nice but to short update soon and add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sure dear!!! Do continue!!! Wanna know what happens next!!! Do pm me!!!

Most welcome to IF!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start
pm me when you update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u so much guyz.....
I really need ur support and do suggest name of ff... šŸ˜†
Part-2 😊
It was around 2 pm in the morning.......
Riddhima was dreaming of sid.... šŸ˜‰ she was shocked to core..she went to washroom and she imagined sid once again who was coming closer to her so she closed her eyes................. šŸ˜‰ but nothing happend so she opened her eyes found sid nowhere in shock she washed her face and sat on bed once again...

Riddhima(thinking):Jab mein sid se pyar hi nahin karti toh phir kyun baar-baar mujhe woh najar aa rah..kyun armaan ke bare mein sochne ki bajay mein sirf sid ke bare mein soch rahin,kyon uska hasta hua chehra baar-baar mere samne aa raha kyun humare rishtey ke khatam hone ke bavjood mein usse aaj bhi judi hoon kyun........Aaj mere aur a-rma-an ke beech sab teekh ho gaya phir bhi mein khush kyun nahin hoon.... šŸ˜•
On the other hand sid had drinked alot at bar along with yuvi and both r unable to stand on their feet....
Sid-mujhme koi problem hai kya????yuvi-nahi...toh kyun????
Sid(making sad face)-dekh pehle tammana aur ab ri-dh-im-a mujhe akela chhood kar chali gayi................................ Sid-tammana mujhe isliye chood kar gayi kyunki maine usse shaadi ke liye mana kar diya tha par ye riddhima mujhe kyun chhood kar chali gayi usse toh maine shaadi bhi ki thi woh bhi en nahi 1 2 (he was counting) haan do baar phir bhi mujhe chhood kar chali gayi kyun bata na kyun(sid was cluntchin yuvi's collar )bata na kyun bata.............
yuvi-arre mera collar chhood pehle.......(sid freed his collar)Kyunki woh armaan se pyar karti hai.... Sid-armaan se pyar karti hai(looking quesniongly at yuvi) arre haan mein toh bhool he gaya tha woh to armaan se pyar karti hai....(making sad face).. abe toh mujhse kya karti thi????????
yuvi-woh mujhe kya pata.?.?
Sid-are haan tujhe kaise pata hoga mein bhi na confuse ho jata hoon kabhi-kabhi(smiling) but i love riddhima mein usse bahut bahut pyar karta hoon..............mujhe riddhima chaiye aur mujhe jawab chaiye woh mere liye kya feel karti hai(saying this he started walking on the road)..........
Yuvi-ruk mein bhi chalta hoon sidd...................... suddenly,a car passed and ..................................................................................................
Continue soon.....!
wait for next update.......... šŸ˜‰
Edited by JERAN_rocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww both parts were grt...hope rids realizes her feelings soon...plz continue soon n can u plz pm me when u update?

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