Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice consept....so maan was hearing the same voices as geet...also her mom n taiji....do pm me when u upd....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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INTERESTING CONCEPT GREAT PART PLS DO CONT SOON THANKS PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Love the concept

Can't wait 2 read this ff

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

Loved the CS

Wow they are all young

Con soon

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Part 1

Awesome update

Loved it

Poor geet has to wake up so early even being a 6 year old

So maan was hearing the same voices as geet

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks 4 pm loved the concept interesting

doo continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
1st part was lovely...
in hspur geet was being woken up n here maan was feeling it.... superb yaar...
do cont soon...
Edited by SaJan-SaJan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

It has been a week and Maan was annoyed with these morning sounds he heard, he was sure it was not a dream, he just cannot understand what went on,

today he heard the women shouting GEET wake up and their usual blah blah, he thought may be someone is playing some prank on him, but the question was who? May be that idiot Kamya was up to something, he decided he will put a tape recorder in his room the one his father's friend gifted him last year on his b'day with 8 hrs record time.

Next morning was the same he woke up cursing who ever the person was, who was playing this stupid prank, he immediately checked the recorder but found no voice other then his own breathing, he was confused, left his room and went to the gym he wanted to do something that would hurt him, he pledged to enroll in some class teaching different forms of marshal art and also join the Reiki class to increase his will power.

As the days passed he got accustomed to the morning threatenings, but now they have become less loud, whoever was there shouting, no more shouted but the words were more affectionate like a mother waking up her child, he started liking it, he felt like his mother was waking him up.

In HSPur

Geet have become used to waking up at 5:00am, but only wakes up after her mother calls her 5-6 times that too lovingly and affectionately kissing her forehead.
She freshens up, goes to the well with the ladies to draw water, then go to the fields and finally help them in the kitchen. After all this gets ready for her school.
In between many times when her mind was blank without any thoughts she would hear some footsteps but never found the person they belonged to, many times she heard sounds as if some one is moving hands forcibly cutting the air Swish ' Swish ' initially she used to be scared but now she was use to those sounds and sometimes laughed at her imagination.

On a certain day she was totally free had nothing to do, it was very cold and she hid in her blanket, she was almost sleeping when she suddenly heard a voice "chote saab, lunch is ready, will you accompany us or should I bring it here" she looked around found no one and she did not know any woman having so soft and timid almost scared voice. She shrugged hit her head damn my imagination, then she heard similar steps as if they were descending the steps, then heard another voice a commanding one "so found time out for lunch, sit give us your company". She concentrated on the voices but suddenly Rajji came and broke the trance, though initially Geet was reluctant but later thankful for the interruption.

In Delhi

As days converted to weeks, weeks to months, and months to years, Maan knew that those voices only came by when he was totally free, when he was unoccupied; so he made it a point not to be free at any time, he use to keep himself active all the times, either he would workout or meditate, either he would study or do some mental exercise.

Taking all these measures helped him in becoming both mentally and physically strong.

But then also he many a times heard the sound of giggles, bangles, anklets but he was getting use to them, and sometimes he welcomed those sounds they were very soothing and they touched his heart. when he heard the laughing sound a smile use to cross his face, he liked thesoftness and sweetness of the voice it belonged to.

Maan woke up as usual at 5:00am, but did not leave the bed he was waiting for the voice to wake him up,
for the first time in last 6 yrs not a day went when he did not hear that voice, but he heard nothing, he waited another 10 mins, became restless, and was about to pull the blanket
when he heard soft footsteps, then a voice very sweet and soft "Maa, today you did not wake me", followed by a loud shrill voice "Geet what are you doing here, I told you no work and not entering the kitchen for next 4 days, go in your room", the footsteps rushed it seemed who so ever they belonged ran fast. He sighed ok now this new fanda no waking up for next 4 days, cool.

ps: hope u like it I made it short so that you may read carefully and grasp what the situation is ...... if you find something disturbing do write and if you find it nice encourage me by commenting and of course by hitting that LIKE BUTTON

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part 3
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am pretty much excited abt this ff...eager to know how is it gonna shape up..thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shruti
awesome update i thought only maan will b having bt here even geet has
waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb part
thnx 4 d PM
cont soon

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