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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

sach me yaar...i have to give presentation bt here m hooked to mushki deewangi...

babaji presentation me bacha lena ...lol😆
ab sab kuch ap ke bharose...hehehe
hey heer!!! wat u doing????



yaar... Geet se help maanglo..... aaj kal bechaari ko presentation dene ka alaawa koi aur kaam bhi nahi hai office mein....😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

today is the first day for this year in office

i have so many things to do and check but i am hanging in Deewani thread waiting for the update
but i am not really regretting for doing this, actually i am loving it😉😛😳.
Update pudneke pahlehi meri aisi haal hai, i don't know how i will be after reading the update.😛😳😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

My classes are going to start in 15mins but i m still at home waiting for deewangi.pls update it fast ......

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vrsharma

today is the first day for this year in office

i have so many things to do and check but i am hanging in Deewani thread waiting for the update
but i am not really regretting for doing this, actually i am loving it😉😛😳.
Update pudneke pahlehi meri aisi haal hai, i don't know how i will be after reading the update.😛😳😉

mera bhi kuch yahi haal hai...!!!
febin@ sure yaar...ab to geet se hi help leni hogi...lol
mushki@ pls yaar...jaldi karrr...u see after reading update..i have to come back from maneet world.😍.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😉😉😉😉😆😆😆
so pls pls update soon...!!
and
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Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 26

maan left from the Mr. Sharma's office & rushed immediately to the KC. He was really longing to see her & tell her about the meeting. Before maan could reach the office daadi had already got a call from Mr. Sharama regarding his visit.
Mr. sharma - bhabi ji, maan ko dehk ke aapne yaar ke yaad aageyi
daadi's eyes welled up.
Sharma - bhabi ji, kitna sincere aur dedicated hain, I am really expecting a lot from him
sharma couldn't stop he just went on & on narrating every thing about maan, his confidence, his attitude, how he didn't take advantage of their personal relation. He even complained that maan addressed him as Mr. Sharma, but felt nice too about it, that how professional he was.
Daadi was speechless.
Daadi - thanxs bhai shahab
sharma - thanks kis baat ke liya, I am just looking at my profit. I am sure maan will not disappoint me.
Daadi smiled looking at daada ji photo & shots quick thanks to babaji.
Daadi calls munshi ji & tells him about maans achievement. Munshi ji was very happy & delighted. He knew maan will bring success to the company but didn't expect it so soon. When maan walked into the company every one raised & clapped for him. Maan shot a stern look to every one around slowly making them hold their joining hands to fall down.
Maan - munshi ji I want the requirement list of the modernization within 1hr
he turns at the design team - I want to know the time it takes for Khurana's to get an approval
he looks at the marketing team - I want complete market review today
there was complete silence that just obliged to his orders & moved back to their seat
maan looked at daadi who approached her with a warm smile - daadi I will not be able to come back with you, aap challo I shall join you later. Daadi smiled & hugged him. CONGRATS
maan - not yet daadi
still maintaining a look with no emotion. Daadi felt really sad that bitterness in his life is taken away the child in him, & now the youth in him. She wondered what more will he lose because of his father, her son she hated even the thought that she bared him for 9months.

Maan went looking for geet who was unaware for his achievement. He stood near the door & admired her. She was lost solving her homework. She calculated some thing in the finger tip & then hit the pen on her cheek & then thought for a while, then wrote the answer. He probably just stood watching her for 10mins, when she suddenly turned to look at him, he broke away & pretended to have just come. Geet ran to him in excitement - kya huwa? Did you have your lunch mujhe pata tha, dehk main ne bhi nahi khaya, challo we will have it together. She pulls him & makes him sit. She opens her tiffin & offers him a parata that was rolled & wrapped in silver foil. He eats a bite & she takes that parata from his hand - mujhe yeh wala khana hain. He smiles & gives it to her. He knows she will always want to have the one he has tasted. He loved it too, it was more of a routine now, to an extent that if she didn't take it, he would feel hurt. Munching her parata she asked him about the meeting. He was really excited that she asked. He went on explaining every detail about sharmas how big a company they are, & how beautiful & organized there company was. He told about the project they offered feeling really proud, for the first time expressing his hidden happiness. Her eyes twinkled in joy as she stood up instantaneously. Holding his shoulder sachi main he gave u a new project . I love you, love you, love you, love you a lot !!! Whole new project... Wow aap kitne smart ho!!! first meeting main itna impress kar diya, she kissed him all over his face & hugged him & fell on his lap. He could feel him self losing it, his emotions were at peak, happiness of success highlighted his senses with her hugging him & kissing him all over his face again & again was no more childish, he felt it beyond. He didn't want to though, but it was difficult for him to control himself around her. He was just 17 not sure how to express himself or to hold back his adolescence urges. His heart paced restlessly, his hands hugged her & while she kissed his cheeks & murmured some thing which he couldn't even listen lost in her touch. His hand moved snaking her back & pulling her closer, she laughed loud - aap mujhe gudh gudhi kyun kar rahen ho, she turned restlessly in his lap, giggling with his touch which drove him further to his flood. He stood up at once almost dropping her on the floor but held her from her waist, not to let her fall. She hugged him tightly in fear & whispered mujhe treat chahiya panting. He nodded patting her head now warmly. She could hear his heart pacing faster, she rested her head on his chest & enjoyed it pacing so high & loud.
Maan - yah kya kar rahi ho?
Geet - shoo!! I am listening to your heart beat. She wondered why was it so loud little while ago & now it was soft in rhythm with hers. She took her phone & called rano & went ga ga about maans new project. She was screaming & giggling & shouting. He straighten himself. She always filled his special moments with her love & warmth, at times with his passion, which he began to love & crave more now.
Geet - I want it to be special for you!!! mujhe aapke liya gift lena hain, mujhe aapke liya ...she went on endlessly. he wondered how much more special she wanted to make it for him.
She tilted her head backward to meet his gaze feeling him not responding. She looked into his eyes for the first time, she looked at them kept looking at them, like she was seeing him for the first time, it was the first time they ever looked into each other eyes. He leaned forward lost in those eyes & placed a small peck on her lips. She closed her eyes automatically when he placed his lips on hers. He looked at her, she was beautiful, innocent & he hoped she remained his and hugged her tighter & closer resting his chin on her head.

PRECAP
OOPS 😳 geet & her doubts!!!!😲

~PREV PART 25 NEXT PART 27~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res comment reserved...thanks mushki for such wonderful update...😊
Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
SUPERB!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet is such a darling...
awesome update muskaan..
loved it to d core..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar.... awsome one .... wow we gonna see the business tycoon maan soon .. precap sounds interesting . geet and her doubts ?? waiting for the next update and also truely magical !
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Posted: 14 years ago
the update is fabulous but very very very short...😭

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