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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Hey .
This was awesome ... Very sensitive topic but handled so well. Yeah it's sad but true that the forced mrg and that too with a man double of your age is still happening now a days. when everybody talks about how the country should progress and do well , they forget to think about the people.

You wrote it very nicely and i loved Arman in this story. The way he made Ridhima comfortable and then the story progress is mind blowing. The end was cute.. Hawwww He still didn't know her real name .. 😆

Keep writing ...

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arlover_aditi

@arlover_aditi

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani
u know u cracked me up at the bus stop while i was reading this post thru my phone. my sister was like wat r u laughing at. muje jhoot bolna para😆
apni to jaise taise thori aisa ya waisa kat jayegi aapka kya hoga janabe ali😉😆

lol hahah...happens happens...u r lucky that ur sister was der with u....once i just cracked up reading sum1s msg on my cell....n i was standing alone...so obviously ppl started looking at me in a weird way! 😆 i so wanted to scream "what?? cant u see m reading msgs? for heavens sake...m nt mad ya" 😆 bt thn i just shut up...n started walking trying hard nt to laugh again! 😛
hayye....humara kya hoga yeh toh khud bhagwaan bhi nahi jaante...toh hum aapko kaise batayein? 😉😆

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Rockstar is back with a bang..
and wrote a LONG one shot..hmmm...impressive.. ;P
will be back to edit the comment.. :-D

Edited:

hey Rockstar you rock babe👍🏼..so the subject is a sensitive issue about forceful marriage. I have not much information regarding this, so can't comment in detail but yes I enjoyed the love story as the backdrop very much. there was a cuteness, naughtiness and an innocence in Riddhima's character which I found very adorable. Poor Armaan still couldn't get her real name that was fun.😆.. and this was followed by your touch of humor which made the love story quite entertaining..loved it..😃

thanks for the Pm and I hope your exams are going well..
do write more but don't forget about your FF's also..

Love Superstar..😊

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

@mel- will be waiting to know ur opinion.😃

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Nina

@-Nina-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Jaaannnaaaaaa *jhappiizzz*

soorrryyyyy , couldnt replied pehle *holding ears*

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AWESOME OS

WOOWWWWW

you know , i knew that famillies forced their children to marry budhez ,

but never knew that they could behave like that with them, i mean he killed his daughter , just because she REFUSED to marry a KAMINA ?!

and W*H , he then walked proudly on her :@

i so so soooo wanted to burn him right there

Poor Rihana oooppsss sowwiizzz Riddhima , she such a BRAVVEEEEE kudi looveeeddd her a LOT

the way she escaped the "HELL" and then meeting her priinncee hayyyeeee that was <3

but i wont lie , i got heelll scared when , they came down from the truck, the budhez were infrount of them :O

i was like "OH NO !" but thankkkk GOD the bullet didnt touch her *sigh*

Armaan has been so so sooooo SWEET even the word sweet isnt enough to describ him, he has been reallyy brave, and PERFECT

the way he protected her, helped her, flirted with her LOL <3

SUPPEEERRRRRBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB

and then the sho sho shooooooooo awesome and hatke confessionn <3

OUTSTANDIIIINNGGGGGGGGG OS <3

*bahut sarrrii jhapppiiizzzzz*

done maine comment karliya ab to maaff kar sakti ho na ?! ^^

par jana seriously that was the BEST OS everrrr <3 <3

Love, Nina ^^

oyyeee anddd

H A P P Y N E W Y E A R

GOD bless you a lot

and may this new year brings you a lot of Happpiinnneeesssss and peace ^^

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

comment edited above

sorry for such a late reply.. :-)

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Ssssaaaaaannnnnniiiiii Jaaaannn!!!

WHAAAAAAOOOOOO WWHHHAAAAAOOOO WHAAAAOOO dude chill with the amazing one shots now will ya?? Lykkee jeez everytime I frikkin read ur work i end up with yhe stoopidest smile ever and then cursing my self about howw stoopid I was for thinking I can actuaalyyy use the word awesome for u coz thats the worlds Largest understatement ever!!! Immaa mean i dont even noe if that even frikkin makes sense but all imma trying to sayy is that I totallllyyy amazing loved it! Immaa mean i donno if my opinion even matters but who yhe heck caresss??? All I noe is that ur amazing and beautiful from inside out!! N ur one shots are aabsolutely FANTASTIC!! n ily!!

Jinszzuuu!!

P. S. Sorry for short comment but my vocab list is short!!!

P. S. S. Who is this ALI ????
I wannnnaaa noe!!!!!!!!! Dude I want like fulll story!!

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

@jinzy- who is ali?😆 last time i remebered i was still single. hahaha. and bbz thank you for such a sweeeettttttt comment. and yaar tu bohot tareef karti hai LOL

love

sani

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Amazing one shot well written im glad u wrote this i havent cm across a story like dis, these things still happen even 2dy im strongly against it, gr8 story