Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice OS
great storyline
loved Armaan and Riddhima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg..... I loved ur OS... Its so very awesome & touching.... All elements together..... Awesome story....
& very realistic too.....The family scenes were scary... I was shocked & damn scared when I read it... U've written all the scenes very nicely... I could actually imagine all the scenes in front of my eyes...
Please continue wrting....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey awesome os
like the concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a cute love story!! enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved
hayeee
im in love wd dis OS!
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Posted: 14 years ago
res! i told u i will comment! *edited*
OMG this is well awesome!!!!
i love the entire concept bout forced marriage n escaping!woowww
i felt soo sorry for aliyah!all she wanted was to live a normal life n nt get married to a man double her age!im sure thts good enoguh reason n she had full right to hav those widhes! her death was just brutal! such a evil way to die!how cud a father do something like that?! to his own daughter aswell😡just for his reputation! i felt sorry for the mother she had to go through all tht watching the child she gave birth to,brought up die right in front of her eyes! its her own child i understand why she didnt kill her husband right then coz shes scared poor woman she cudnt even bury her daughter properly!😭 n riddhima OMG she just watchd her sister she grew up with die! then she has to marry the man her sister was gonna marry W*F😡🤢 thts disgusting the man is such a pervert! urgghhh🤢 he was literally perving on her n threatening her OMG some pathetic guy!😡
riddhimas very clever to escape like tht she thought of nearly everything to nt get caught! lol i lovd the way armaan woke her up😆 HAYYEE my armaan! where do i start with him??!!!😳 well im nt gona go in to too much detail or i will go on wiv myself😛but WOWWW!!! i love him!! hes such a flirt lol! wooww hes so caring he just met riddhima n he was travelling n helping her like he knew for ages how sweet!lol i lovd him irritating her along the way! wooww lovd the river scne😳
awww lovd him caring for her n soothing her when she was crying!! how sweet!😊
Thank God! her dad is arrested urghh i hate him!😡 i hope he gets punished for all he did! im glad tht riddhima free of all tht pain n so is her family :) finally her n armaan can be together😃
awww i loved their confession! it was soo adorable! i loved his line:
miss Riddhima who just got a new life. Will be my girlfriend? Then after a few years my wife? And then after a few years the mother of my kids and then after a few yea'
how sweet!
lol u ended the OS with a funny line!
loved it all Sani! wooww u r amazing at writing
do write some more AFETR u update yur ffs starting with Sinster love😛😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
par kamino isse to mein kab ka update kar chuki. comment kab edit karoge?😆 sexy churel is a very impatient soul 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

par kamino isse to mein kab ka update kar chuki. comment kab edit karoge?😆 sexy churel is a very impatient soul 😆

lol dont worry hum edit karenge when we get an update on ETH 2!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

par kamino isse to mein kab ka update kar chuki. comment kab edit karoge?😆 sexy churel is a very impatient soul 😆

We are impatient aswelll! sexy churail update kitna jaldi dti haina??🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Yu make us wait, our turn now!🤣 ;D ;P
UPDATE THE ODR ONE ND SINISTR LUV FIRST!!!!🤣🤣🤣
then we'll give yu big comments pakka!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chocolatefreak

We are impatient aswelll! sexy churail update kitna jaldi dti haina??🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Yu make us wait, our turn now!🤣 ;D ;P
UPDATE THE ODR ONE ND SINISTR LUV FIRST!!!!🤣🤣🤣
then we'll give yu big comments pakka!

yeahh well done rida! its payback time!😈 oh n update my mr A n gmabled with our lives too! then we will think bout editing it!😃🤣🤣

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