Dont Let Me Go . A R || PART 9 PG 90 || 20/June - Page 21

Originally posted by: star_fan

Commented. For rest of the comment check out page no. 25.

Originally posted by: star_fan

Hmm.. From where should I start ?
Well it's definitely amazing part, in sense of the way it was written.
Honestly, you have improved a lot and no doubt I could say you are amazing writer.
The way you have written have grace, decency and a beauty in it and all these things have given an mind blowing look to your story.
Each scene was written greatly.
Not much about story I should be commenting right now coz the couple haven't met yet.
That guy with whom she bumped twice was 'The Guy' ?

Update soon.. I will NOT be waiting. 🥱

Originally posted by: SPINKaShFanatic

Lali...Viru will love Jia only if this FF is a happy ending..!am not acpting sad story *shake head* ...

Originally posted by: SPINKaShFanatic

🤣ohh Gosh...i knw am such a talkative gal...evry1 knws at home..Gosh dnt eva call me Basanti...in frnt of Deep u knw...she always call me Basanti🤢 and i hate tht name😡call me Jai..or Veeru...😳bcz Nori once dreamt of KSG calling me Veeru..his Veeru ☺️ Thank u SOOOOOOOO MUCH...Now am srsly KHUSH thts its gonna be a HAPPY ENDING😈 Virus flu🤔my buddies at cllge calls me Virus😳 U take care..GWS🤗

i didn't wanted to keep commenting...bcz it felt like spamming here...but u r replying...i cant help😆 So true...tht story hvnt strted n am talking abt ending🤣 shut up...u just started...am sure thre is smthing gr8 abt this FF...So looking frwrd i dont hv a proper sense of humour...how do u want me to tell u comic techniques😳 Ask Maham...she knws better🤣 Why did u put reserved..am so intrigued⭐️

Originally posted by: SPINKaShFanatic

i didn't wanted to keep commenting...bcz it felt like spamming here...but u r replying...i cant help😆 So true...tht story hvnt strted n am talking abt ending🤣 shut up...u just started...am sure thre is smthing gr8 abt this FF...So looking frwrd i dont hv a proper sense of humour...how do u want me to tell u comic techniques😳 Ask Maham...she knws better🤣 Why did u put reserved..am so intrigued⭐️

hehe i cnt stp replying well i dnt think so as long as we talk abt this ff n not abt other stuff then okay na... let me read the rulebook The comments are to be related to the FF so its aloud i think 😳 well let just stop now na.. 😆 thanks even these words mean a lot to me like seriously u knw i dnt consider my work to b good n when u guys say its gud i feel like in cloud 10 soo happy... well i will try to continue soon

Hi Dear

Originally posted by: LOVEDMG-AR

Hi Dear

Finally i read it hehe.

Very nice concept

And the first part was totally awesome

But i was just thinking are Ridz and Abhi a couple? hehe

Precap was interesting

Thanks for PM

Plz add me to ur PM list.

And all the best with ur exams!

LoveSurat

Hi Surat

Originally posted by: .Lali

I am very pleased that you enjoyed reading the part.. eventhough i still dont accept that i am an amazing writer but thank you very much for the compliment and your kind words. Thank you soo much I hope i will continue to be great like you described and continue to entertain you with the story. Ofcourse you will have to wait and see as the story progress further to know what will happen and if it was 'The Guy'

Sure will try to... But after mid Feb of course. Thanks!!

You're welcome. I really like the writing and so I appreciate that.
Oh okay. Waiting to know.