FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 - Page 6

Ok now I can call you a true writer this was such a right moment for them to become one and it just flowed from the start with meera telling her about how she should forget her past and take this step as it would show she wasn't taking maans loved for granted and the lead on to geets dream as she kept dreaming about something that happened as she had the fear of him leaving he because she didn't take the step of moving their relationship further and deeper. When she called to find out about the divorce record the happiness was portrayed beautifully as she knew that their wedding was valid and maan is hers forever and I liked how she called him to meet her and then gave him the news where they both became one soul there as their happiness and love for each other was shown but their acts and I think you did that scene justice it was just like a confession but with a deeper meaning and their SR was so symbolic and pure I loved how it wasn't vulgar but expressive and it show the true emotions of two lovers becoming one you really havedone yourself proud because the way you have written that scene was just beautiful and two things that showed that geet was ready was two simple objects but both have hidden passion the nose rin and the waist chain as she took them off in her previous SR as she thought it would tempt maan into something she wasn't ready to do but in this chapter she was and you know when I was reading the SR scene the song mere hath mein from faana was playing in my head anyways a mind-blowing update I must say you are one talented writer and do continue soon 😊

ps sorry couldn't read and comment yesterday as I found the pm I came back from brimingham at 12 and was exhausted as I said I need a nice quiet place to read your updates as they are so expressive

Part 63: "She is my flesh and blood"….awwww!! Me likey likes this so much!! She is him and completes him!! Poor Maan…Geet is so strong, but I wish she would demonstrate that strength in the toughest of situations!! Thank God she has Meer and Maan…varna kya hota?!

OMG! "She was losing the present for her past"…superb sweetie…love this line, so much depth and meaning! Oh man….poor Maan 2 more days, I don't even feel bad for geet right now b/c my heart is crying for Maan!

Good thing I read the SR part or else I would be so depressed…she's on the other side of Manhattan and wants some time to herself…def don't like the song of that!

I don't know why, but I really getting Geet and all this crying….I know life has been rough on her, but seriously how much can she possibly cry! Really Geet…kaali nazar…REALLY?! Uff yeh ladki bhi na!! OMG!! She's calls Dev…GO GIRL!!! A very awkward conversation…esactly how it should be! Wow…she apologized, I hope she finally gets her closure, but nicely done by her!!!!

The log by the sea analogy was purely beautiful! Maneet in the shower….the comforting…amazing!!!!!! Misunderstandings are being cleared…NICE!! He kisses her forehead: YAY!!!

OMG!!! More hugging…FINALLY!!! It makes up for the lack of hugging for a long time…ok it wasn't that long since they hug, but I'm super melodramatic!! Loved how she promises to always be there and support him! When she promises to be his friend and wife, share happiness and remove sorrows….it's like they're renewing their vows!! And then Maan's promises….awwwww!! So chweet!! My fav vow is the "I will be the air that breathes you life, the water hat drives your life force, the land that feeds you health and wealth, the sky that covers and protects you and the fire that wards off your sorrows"….my favorite line…Ama-ZING!!!!

Married again!!! I love the sound of that!!! BARE SELVES…all this still gets me excited even though I've read part 65!! LOL!!! "Fettered souls that bound us for eternity"….beyond brilliant!! Mind blowing line!!! Cuddling and closure and a hug to end the chapter…so wonderful!!! Love this so much!!!!

I loved loved loved this chapter...it was where everything came together so perfectly...finally no more sadness and sorrows...and Geet pulled through! I guess we shouldn't be too hard on her b/c even Maan wasn't making it easy for her! But all's well that ends well!! YAY!!!!

its simply superb
after soo long journey they sorted out their problems

loved this a lot

Song of the Day!!!

wow

Nice update, par, yeh dil maange more. waiting for the next

First of all, my apologies for being so late in reading and commenting😒

congrats to the new thread.........

update soon hasini!!