FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 - Page 103

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 79 1
Their parting was so painful
Their pain was so beautifully described.
Geet's countdown and innumerable kisses and byes gave
us a glimpse of how difficult it was for them to part.
Without Maan the otherwise warm and wonderful SFO weather
must have been alien to Geet.
Though both were missing each other too much
they managed to mask their feelings during their phone calls
Finally Geet couldnt control and broke down.
Though Maan convinced her not to come the way he
called her back and panicked when she was not picking the phone
gave us a glimpse of his state.

Part 79 2
Rishabh seems to be an interesting character.
Though Naini has strained ties with her family years ago
He seems to be upto date with the khuranas and understand them too well.
Yay Maan is back. Rather the whole family is here.
But nothing else matters to our love birds right.
They were so content and complete in each others arms.

part 80
Rishabh 's confrontation with the family was much awaited one.
Except for his big oberoi ego he seems to be a sensible and protective person.
He came out of his hiding employing all his aides just to get a glimpse of his wife.
He was keeping tabs on her all this while too
i think naini would be aware of this.
Geet's instantaneous questioning first of his identity and his out of country status was superb.
There were huge preparations for the jamai who loved cheerios 😆
The women's curious peeping when the men met
and the breakfast scene were awesome.
Geet and Dadi tried their level best to ease the situation.
Looks like Naini and Rishab had their well needed war of words.
I wish Naini would learn something from our lovers and think of compromising.
Waiting for the next part.









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Posted: 14 years ago
Now that the end is in sight- it left me with a tinge of sadness even though the update was not sad at all. Its going to be hard, bidding good bye to your Maan and Geet, Hasini.

Aarya cleared a few of my doubts yesterday, regarding the previous updates. Today, you cleared any remnants of confusion that were left.

Naini and Rishabh seem to have quite a complicated relationship going- I am hoping Maaneet play cupid and help them resolve their differences. These two clearly seem to love each other still. Isn't it amazing how in our own stubbornness and stupidity- we end up hurting ourselves and the ones we love the most!

One request- Little more of Maan in the next update- please!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update .
But still it is very very very sad to know it is ending. Trust me your story looks more natural, logical and enjoyable than the real one.
Please consider my plea.
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazng part just luv all of dem
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well, I love this ff and this is a fact well-known to you.
It was the first one where i actually started posting comments beyond "great one", "loved it", etc.
So, now, though I can go on with a long comment, i won't because that last line in blue has rendered me hurt and speechless!
take care..
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
Managed to read all the 4 updates at one go, finally! 😆

Sorry, my like button is acting weird again but I loved your updates, all of them! Simply amazing!

Maan's becoming panicky upon not getting through Geet and Geet's becoming restless for not being able to reach him was so nicely penned. He actually came to SF, so did Dadi and Naini. He even called Rishabh's secretary for help...something I feel he would have never done otherwise. When they finally saw each other, it was great! The love was definitely oozing out.

Naini and Rishabh, two obstinate, egoistic people. Lolz. They love and care for each other but don't express the same. Lolz at her name calling...and Dadi's reaction to their antics were just apt. Lolz.

I am saddened by your wanting to wrap up NY Times by 19th of May. I really love this FF and your Maan and Geet...but all good things do come to an end. Hope you start your SS soon and keep writing many more FFs...lolz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates back to back...thankyou so much. can't believe this ff will end soon...but loved it to the core...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏
You're definitely on a roll with the updates... but your going to finish it on May 19th... thats too soon, don't ya think 😉 Actually I'm sort of looking forward to see how this is going to end, but I dont want it end 😆

The longing for each other...was portrayed amazingly, looking at the hairbrush, the bed etc.. those little things that seem to have no special meaning or value when the person is present, but as soon as the person is gone, it's amazing how you take notice of those same things without knowing you ever noticed... do you get what I'm saying ..lol

I'm little confused...where did Geet go..that they couldn't find her?
Naina and Rishabh story is turning out to be very interesting! Is Geet going to play cupid????

Thanks for the 4 wonderful updates!

p.s I miss the conversations on your thread too- that + plus your amazing writing skills got me to write my first comment on IF! Bring them back Hasini ..pretty please!
Edited by arabianpaki - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice updates dear...
but slightly senti too...
naini n abhi part was interesting...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful!!!!
Naini-Rishab story phase is turning on an interesting node.
loved the part,wonderfully narrated.
great update.

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