~True Luv Is Eternal#2~AR FF-LastPt Pg13(13/01/11)

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Gaurav Shanbhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

awesome part
congo for new thread
cont soon

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Vindiya hashini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

hey kashish please dont mind ....c, i hav read all ur other ff in the last few days....every concept r different and quite engaging ..especially, tu mera armaan hain.....the way u scripted was superb.....the first half abt riddhi and second half abt armaan...i really...loved it... 2. Armaan ff..i dont remember a lot abt this ff...as i read this long before...i know the story ...that was superb.. 3.Learn The True Meaning Of Love ff... i loved the concept...i know its a mini ff..but still i think the dept of love is missing .....before the love making scene....if would hav scripted some more AR moments ....which shows the dept of riddhima love to armaan..it would hav far beter Arman hav spoiled so much girls life....still his punishment he got is only the matter of month...in my idea,atlest u should hav a taken leap of one year....as he said " i m leaving u forever"...he should hav left...lived a life without his dad's name...and away from his own family....at the same time, learning whats life at each step ...must be more interesting ... 4.~True Luv Is Eternal ff....intial part was superb....till he confessed their love and marriage part was cool after that spice part was missing...i got some engaging part when riddhi confronted her parents..u have many spice like riddhima's ex bf, arman 's ex gf.....riddhi is insecure towards the coming baby..but stilll the story is moving without mirch masala..except the love making scene which was superb .... its just my suggestion...please dont mind...thanks for the wonderful ff..whih added colors in my dry days...i really loved ur one shot ...take care

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

wow amazing update.. luved ridzi's surprise for armaan's b'day.. riddi is so cute.. continue soon

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: diyachill
hey kashish please dont mind ....c, i hav read all ur other ff in the last few days....every concept r different and quite engaging ..especially, tu mera armaan hain.....the way u scripted was superb.....the first half abt riddhi and second half abt armaan...i really...loved it... 2. Armaan ff..i dont remember a lot abt this ff...as i read this long before...i know the story ...that was superb.. 3.Learn The True Meaning Of Love ff... i loved the concept...i know its a mini ff..but still i think the dept of love is missing .....before the love making scene....if would hav scripted some more AR moments ....which shows the dept of riddhima love to armaan..it would hav far beter Arman hav spoiled so much girls life....still his punishment he got is only the matter of month...in my idea,atlest u should hav a taken leap of one year....as he said " i m leaving u forever"...he should hav left...lived a life without his dad's name...and away from his own family....at the same time, learning whats life at each step ...must be more interesting ... 4.~True Luv Is Eternal ff....intial part was superb....till he confessed their love and marriage part was cool after that spice part was missing...i got some engaging part when riddhi confronted her parents..u have many spice like riddhima's ex bf, arman 's ex gf.....riddhi is insecure towards the coming baby..but stilll the story is moving without mirch masala..except the love making scene which was superb .... its just my suggestion...please dont mind...thanks for the wonderful ff..whih added colors in my dry days...i really loved ur one shot ...take care

Hey dear,
Thanks a lot for your honest comment.
Well concerning Learn true meaning of love, it was a mini FF which I written during my summer holidays and I wanted to finish it before my class start, so I had to rush that aspect. :)

About this FF, well this was supposed to be like this, my main idea was to keep this FF a bit away from the mirch masala :p lolz I hope u don't mind it. Apart that, the next part is the last one I wanted to keep this FF as simple as possible that's why but I can assure in a few weeks time I am beggining a new FF, which I hope you'll like because it would be full of mirch and masala :)

To all the other readers, thanks a lot for your precious comments, I really love them they surely make my day. Keep on showering me with your love :D

Luv u<333
Kashish

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arooshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

HAPPY NEW YEAR
nice part
the birthday....bechara armaan but got good return gift
riddhi was so sweet
continue soon

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Asma Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Awesome.
Armaan is such a loving and caring hubby.
Someday I would also start dreaming to eat food cooked by him he he.
His b'day was fantastic.
I loved this part.
Plz update the next part soon.