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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Amazing upd8 hazra

Happy new year

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

hiiii

sorry 4 da late comment

been abroad

awesome ff

loving it

love the intro 2 all da couples

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

plz do add me 2 ur pm list

thanks

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

lovely update

thanks 4 the pm

and a happy new year to u😊

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VRITIKA

@karantakiar

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Hey dear jus read ur updts.it ws superb.realy luvd it.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.hey dear plz add me to ur pm list n dun 4get to pm me.
luv u
vritika

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

awesome update

loved it

love all the couples

loving it loadz

sorry for da late comment

went abroad

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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mehr

@missinguonly

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

@divya: thanks dear<3 will update it later=)
@sariska_mnarti: thanks a lot<3
@Armaanksgfan: thanks<3 n ur not dat late, n ofcourse m adding u now<3
@daniella: thanks hun<3
@karantakiar: thanks dear<3 aww u made by day<3 will deff pm u=)
@kashndsel4eva: thanks dear=) u made by day yaar<3
@roknstarz_mjht: tyt<3

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sanaya khan

@.Sanayaa.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

RES!!

*edited*

well i dont know yur name but ill just call yu as missi

the introduction was amazing the concept is too birlliant

Part1

it was good i specailly luved how ridhima neva stop's tlkin 😆

and OMG!! usko kitna burra bhalla kaha 😲but i know sab kuch change hojayega

part 2 wah kya entry thi arjuhi ki but tumne bataya nahee that did arohi win? and arjun buyed the dress?

and wat kind of dress?😳i know main bhut questionzz pochti ho sorry LOL

part 2 LOL how armaan jumped and party yahoo!!! sam is shocked nupur kuchna kuch hamesha chupa ti hai even in MJHt😆waise dear i dont understand 1 thing gunjan kiski friend hia nd arjun aROHI BUT M waiting for the next part egearly cuzz armaan ki feeling change hojayegi and yay!!! samrat wil start.... nd nupur as mayank's assistant! wow awesum!1 plz update soon nd it hve been 16 dayzz yu haventupdate i want a update soon nd do send PM

Edited by Sanaya-luv-arti - 14 years ago

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mehr

@missinguonly

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sanaya-luv-arti
RES!!

*edited*

well i dont know yur name but ill just call yu as missi
the introduction was amazing the concept is too birlliant
Part1
it was good i specailly luved how ridhima neva stop's tlkin 😆
and OMG!! usko kitna burra bhalla kaha 😲but i know sab kuch change hojayega
part 2 wah kya entry thi arjuhi ki but tumne bataya nahee that did arohi win? and arjun buyed the dress?
and wat kind of dress?😳i know main bhut questionzz pochti ho sorry LOL

part 2 LOL how armaan jumped and party yahoo!!! sam is shocked nupur kuchna kuch hamesha chupa ti hai even in MJHt😆waise dear i dont understand 1 thing gunjan kiski friend hia nd arjun aROHI BUT M waiting for the next part egearly cuzz armaan ki feeling change hojayegi and yay!!! samrat wil start.... nd nupur as mayank's assistant! wow awesum!1 plz update soon nd it hve been 16 dayzz yu haventupdate i want a update soon nd do send PM

hi dear, my name is mehr<3
part 2 arjun buyz a dress to arohi,,,,n about what arohi won u will know dat later, thatz y i had put dat part=)
nupur ki to adaat hai na
i know i havent update!! i so want to lekin mere examz hai na but i m trying to update it now😳 so just a bit tym😃
whts ur name again? <3

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sanaya khan

@.Sanayaa.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: missinguonly

hi dear, my name is mehr<3
part 2 arjun buyz a dress to arohi,,,,n about what arohi won u will know dat later, thatz y i had put dat part=)
nupur ki to adaat hai na
i know i havent update!! i so want to lekin mere examz hai na but i m trying to update it now😳 so just a bit tym😃
whts ur name again? <3

my namezz sanaya =D

so i will be waitin nd all da best for examzz!😊

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mehr

@missinguonly

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Part 4 of

red- present
green- past

gunjan and samrat are lost in each other, n finally when they stop
gunjan- sorry
samrat- huh?
gunjan- i meant thanks
samrat- oh np
-n gunjan start walks, n suddenly samrat stops her
samrat- btw m samrat (shaking hands)
gunjan- gunjan, nyc to meet u
samrat- waise ap yaha?? i mean mene ye party ki hai or mene ap ko kabhi pehle dekha nai hai na so
gunjan- oh mujhai ridzy ne invite kiya hai
samrat- ohh okay
gunjan- talk to u later, pehle ridzy se to mil loon
samrat- sure
-gunjan walks away
-after announcing abt new year, ridzy walks out from there n crying
-nupur saw her and follow her
-she sees ridzy is crying
nupur- ridzy kya howa??
ridzy- aaj puray 6 saal ho gaye mere parents ko pass howe way
-armaan was walking from there n heard all this
ridzy- nupur tu jaanti hai, us raat isi tarha hum log party mei ja rahay thay, k achanak accident ho gaya, jis mei mene un donoon ko khodiya!! mujhai laga tha k mene sab kho diya, kuch nai hai mere pass, lekin phir main samrat se mili, jis ne mujhai ek bhai ki tarha pyaar diya, shayad isi liye aaj main kisi ko apne itne kareeb nai aane deti hoon, taake agar unhay main kho bhi doon to mujhai itna dukh nai ho
-after hearing all this, armaan feel ashamed his self, because of what he think about ridzy
nupur- ridzy lekin
-suddenly gunjan cums
gunjan- surprise!!
-ridzy n nupur turns
-n they both goes to hug gunjan
ridzy- gunjan!! omg i miss u so much!! ab to tu yaha 10 din k liye aaye hai na
gunjan- haan ticket to karaye hai..lekin 8 din bhi ho saktay hain
nupur- lay!! is k to hamesha yahi bahane hote hain!!
ridzy- haan lekin is baar iska koi bahana nai chalega
gunjan- tu kabhi nai badlegi
ridzy- waise hum andar party mei chaltay hai, theek hai
nupur- chalo of course
-they walk inside
-arjun arohi dump into each other again
arohi- pehle to mujhai shak tha lekin ab mujhai pura yakeen hai k tum jaan pooj kay mujh se takra tay ho
arjun- oh excuse me, mujhai koi shok nai hai tum jaise bhen jee se takra ne ka
arohi- bhen jee?? tumhai main bhen jee lagti hoon?
arjun- to tumhai kya lagta hai tum hot ho?
arohi- mere hotness tumne dekhi nai hai to apna muu band karkay hi rakho
arjun- aray yaar tumhara problem kya hai?
arohi- tum mujhai har jaga follow kyun karrhay ho?
arjun- main follow karta hoon, wo bhi tumhai?? apni shakal dekhi hai kabhi?
arohi- haan roz ainay mei dekhti hoon apni shakal main to
arjun- tabhi shayad tumhara pura din bura jaata hai
-suddenly nupur see them, walks there
nupur- arohi??
-arohi turns toward her
arohi- haan lekin who r u?
nupur- nupur remember collage mei saath thay
arohi- nupur!! i cant believe it k main tujhse mil rahi hoon
nupur- haan yaar m so surprise
-they hug each other
arohi- waisa tera phone kyun nai milta tha kabhi?
nupur- nai yaar wo number change ho gaya or tera number bhi delete ho gaya tha
arohi- oh koi baat nai ab aisa kuch nai hoga
-nupur sees arjun
nupur- arohi ye kaun hai?
arohi- ye pata nai kaun hai har jaga aajata hai jaha main jaati hoon
arjun- oh hello,,,,wo kismat se mil jata hoon, warna tumhare peeche aoon aise din nai hai mere
arohi- mind ur language
arjun- warna?
arohi- warna main tumhai...
nupur- arohi chor na aaj new year hai uski shurwaat achi kar
arohi- haan shayad tu sahi bol rahi hai, apna tym waste nai karna chaiye aise faltoo logo k saath
-arohi and nupur walks from there
- n this part finished on arjun's face

hopefully u all like it

~**~Interesting in reading next part ~**~
nupurs job as mayank's assistant
all 4 couples dance

p.s: i know i suppose to give u guyx those 2 parts too, but my examz are starting from tuesday n i was not abt to update this part too, but i decide to update half of it, also its 2:00 am in here so i cant write full part now, so really sorry about dat hopefully will not do dat mistake again<3

Edited by missinguonly - 14 years ago