FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1 - Page 96

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

I am if dazzler now muhahahah lol
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heartly congrats dear!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats dear you are IF DAZZLER

LOVE SANA.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Keyama Where r your updates????????????😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Waiting and hoping everyday.🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱.Please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
update na keya...... pls pls pls.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

just finished reading all 21 parts, i never wanted to read it before i never liked Geets one night stand but seems like story is going to change .Loved it so far like your other FFs but why have you stopped Intezaar plz cont. All your FFs are good i liked Esoteris the most.Please update faster and plz cont. Intezaar.PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
anyone fancy an update… :D
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Posted: 14 years ago


part 22


Maan looked at geet lovingly... He smirked with bite of apple... Geet turned her back towards him... Out of bloom she did started to enjoy this different lifestyle... Completely different... It's nothing same as her night club...
Tani- bhabhi What's you favorite color?
Geet- umm... I don't have any.
Tani- what? Don't you like any color?
Geet- no... I am not in to shopping.
Tani- bhabi what are you saying? We are girls... Shopping is our first priority.
Geet- umm... Na not for me.
Maan- don't worry Tani now she will start doing all the Girly stuff... Because that's my favorite.
Geet- what makes you think I will do anything that is your favorite.
Maan- do I have to mention?
Geet- yes.
Maan- like You wearing a blue color wedding set.
Geet looks at the designer.... Choose any color except blue.
Designer- red?
Maan- my favorite on you.
Geet gets irritated- no red or blue.
Desginer- green?
Maan- green brings out your beauty....
Geet- no... No red blue or green.
Designer screeches her head...
Desginer- pink?
Maan- perfect color for girl again my favorite on you....
Geet looks at him irritatingly- tell me a colour that you don't like...
Maan- actually I have nun.. I love all colour on you.
Tani- owo bhi you becoming more romantic day by day....
Maan- can you remember when I wasn't?
Tani- bhi... You are to good!
Geet gives him one of those I want you look....
Maan smirks further....
Desginer- done.... Wouldn't you like to choose what Designee each cloth should have?
Geet looks at maan.... Her eyes wasn't moving from his lips... She wanted to taste them badly...
Geet- Tanni you may have the pleasure to do that.... With those word Geet disappears in her room... Telling Maan to come with her with her eyes.....
Tanni exited... She have the best bhabi ever....

After 10 minutes Maan walks in....
Soon as maan walks in she closes the door.... It was broad day light... And they had perfect intention to make love again... Something maan start to have dought she is only here to make love... Nothing els..... But he ignored the thought for that moment....

Geet comes round and puts her hand round his neck...
Geet- you looking very hot today...
Maan- hmm.... Don't I all the time?
Geet- yes... But today extra...
Maan- acca....
Geet smirks- far as I remember you never ever seen me full naked in the broad day light.... She bites his lips....
Maan- that's something for us to do after wedding..... He slides his hand round her weist....
Geet- hmm..... Well after wedding we can find something more interesting to do....
Maan- yes we can.... I have big plan....
Geet laughs- bless those plan.... They will all go in vein....
Maan- maan sing khuranas plan never goes in vien... And with that word he kissed her tight....
Geet pushes him way... With a smirk...
Geet- you have to seduce me...
Maan- hmm...
Geet removes all her hair to one side and unzips her string... Moving round the room while maan not removing his gaze from her dark deep eyes... Geet through her dupatta towards him... She was waking hid monster up in him...
Geet hides behind the changing door... Taking of everything one by one... Maan looks at her through the loop holes...

There life was in a position where everything seems like a dream... There was something defiantly wrong here...

Geet slowly walks out.... Maans eyes were looked in her... Gazing her up and down... Even though they made love so many time before... But this was something new... Like she is a Pari.... Perfect... Beautiful... Lascivious.... Sexy.... Maan couldn't remove his gaze... He couldn't.... He wanted to feel her every part... Every curve that made her look this sexy... He walks towards her... Slowly... He strokes her private part then gently moves his hand upwards...
Maan- you are really....
Geet- sexy....
Maan nodes negatively...
Geet- then?
Maan- beautiful...
Maan slowly cresses her cheek....
Maan- I could never stop to explore you....
Geet- who have told you to stop....
Maan smirks... A naughty smirk... There was mischief behind those lips...
Geet comes close and pushes him to the bed... Sitting on him... Slowly taking his shirt off kissing him....
Maan stops her.... Even though he wa loosing him self... He stops her...
Maan- not today...
Geet- why? Don't you find me attractive enough? She bites his lips...
Maan- if I didn't love you I wouldn't have gone through this much hassle...
Maan covers her with the spread... Before he could loose him self completely…


next- shive is bc😲



helloo.. i have shower of updates… 2day… for this heheh… back to keyama styly… but only 2 for now… then 3-4 parts 2 night :D

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also i am starting my new shower update with my new FF… soon as i finish our ANIMOSITY… :Dxxxx


leave comments love keyama

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love u for all the one u lot left

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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantabulous update Keya...👏

Yipee i'm first to comment!

I think its time for Geet to crave for Maan's touch!!!😉

Shiv is back????? Nooo... Problem ye hai ke i can't hate Shiv!!!!😭

Anyways... I'm waiting for the shower of updates!

dunno if i'll be able to comment first on the next update as well....

Anyways... open a new thread babes!!!!

I'm going to the market and coming in 15 mins!!!

Love u...

Mina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow......yeah wat to say...gr8 as usuall....first to comment i think....lovd it...maan staying away frm her n she getting more hungry....
oh no precap.....shiv y is he back now....gosh...do upd asap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice............scared after reading precap...........but i think geet is now in love with maan so doesnt matter.

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