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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ambbiha

we al want update soon



me also waiting 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


*~My Dark Love~*

part 10


Geet looks in the bag. Long gense. A top with a jacket. Not her usal bikini top. Along with her underwear and boots. Flat nice warm boots.

Geet were everything. Except the jacket and boot after a shower. She dries and strained her hair. As she walks out maan couldn't remove his gaze. She looked outstanding. Again her innocent beauty started to cover her dark side. Maan looked way. He didn't want his feeling to increase again...
Geet- I am hungry.
Maan nodes- let's go.
Geet leaves her jacket and boots on the side and flows maan.

Both ate in silent. Maan just kept looking at her.
Geet- where is my passport?
Maan- why?
Geet- I am going back to India soon as I land.
Maan- you are not going anywhere.
Geet- what do you mean?
Maan- I have just told you. You are not going anywhere.
Geet- look. I don't know you. Or have any feeling for you.
Maan- knowed me enough to spend a night with me.
Maan walks off as they both finished dinner.
Geet holds him back. Making him stop.
Geet- every one I slept with I have only known them for a day... So...
Maan instantly gets angry.... Brings her in his embrace.
Putting his hand over her mouth.
Maan- well there are big difference between me and them. Firstly I don't let anyone use me. Secondly you have used a wrong person this time. Because I won't let you go this easily.
Geet gives him an angry glare.
Maan- you should have thought about this before playing with my feeling.
Geet- why can't you just leave me alone! Go and choose some decent girl and enjoy your life. Because I am not your type. Geet pushes him way. I have told you before that night as well. It's your fault that you decided come close to me. Not my.
Maan pushes her against the wall and kisses her lips tight... Geet didn't care she liked his kiss... Rough or gentle... Geet puts her hand round his neck... Opening her mouth inviting him in. Maan had to control. He closed his eyes and broke apart. Leaving Geet confused.
Maan- don't invite me in then.
Maan left leaving geet all confused. She walked behind him.
Geet- give me my passport back. Otherwise I will create a scene at the airport.
Maan- if I give you any chance then you will.
Geet- look... I don't know what exactly you want but leve me out of your stupid plan. Do whatever you want. But don't try to control my life.
Maan looks at her... Brings her back in his embrace again.
Maan- control to me karuanga. Aese tara Se karunga ke tum kabhi bhi bapas na ja paugi...
Geet looks at him angrily...
Geet- don't even try. Because you have no idea what can I do.
Maan- aca. Let's see.

Both sat opposite of one another. Maan was just hopping she won't get her doppy attack not before they reach England. While geet hopping she will.

Geet- why do you have so much intrest in me. You know I would never love you.
Maan- really. Far as I am concern you letting me control you.
Geet- that's because we are in plane.
Maan- so... You could have jumped. Killing of us.
Geet- I don't belive in killing.
Maan- you belive in hurting and playing with emotion.
Geet- If you let me what els could I do?
Maan- you have no right.
Geet smirks and closes her eyes.
Maan just starred at her for last few hours. Maan couldn't control him self at all. He couldn't let her to end the life like this. He will make sure she begs for him. Beg... He will make sure.

Maan wasn't sure if she will help him to treat her but he will make sure she is cure. then he will plan to take... he couldn't think. he wasnt sure him self why he loved her in this much. all she ever done was hurt him. nothing els. There first night... next morning... maan couldn't believe how stupid he was. she kept telling him... i am not the right girl... not the right girl... but it was me who wanted to be close to her. he closed his eyes... in some way she was right and in some other way he was right. but in this everything... he will make sure Geet is fine.


maan couldn't stop thinking what she will do when this plane land. she is unpredictable. she will do anything. far as he read about heroine addictor they could go in any extent for there drug. could even murder someone...


geet- don't think too much.

maan- when did you start taking heroine?

geet- nun of your business.

maan- everything about you is my business.

geet- i didn't give you any permission.

maan- i didn't ask for any permission...

geet- you seriously think you could control me!

maan- you are not impossible.

geet- good luck. i hope you haven't left ridzy at that place.

maan- what makes it different? she already have slept with so many gyus... maybe few more...

geet- don't you dare talk about her like that.

geets eyes was still close... she barley could look at the bright sun outside. it was burning her skin. but she kept the little windows cover open.

maan- why... i thought you are the same.

geet- we choose... unlike you... we sleep with the guy we like...

maan- i see no difference between you and a S*** .

geet smirks... like maans word didn't have any effect on her. which irritated maan. it was hurting him to call her in those low word. but she didn't care. he was more angry to the fact all the guys she slept with... how low they probably thinking of her.


geet- if you really think this will create some guilt in me... then forget it. it won't. i am geet hand. she opens her eyes. I use people. people don't use me.

maan gives her an angry glare...

maan- well... you have messed with the wrong person this time...

geet gives him a historic laugh'


:D again I LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS :D TY SOOOOO MUCHHHHH' ok' here another part' will update more later on' :D xxx

loved all the comments pls pls pls do leave me some more hehe

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....donno wat maan is planning bt loved to see maneet together for 6 months........pls continue soon......we r waiting.....😊


Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
thanks 4 update😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gosh how Maan will make her realize her mistake ?looking forward to read more about this battle.
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Posted: 14 years ago
simply awesum
luv yr updates
u keep us going
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Posted: 14 years ago
simply awesome👏...........love geet-maan talk too good..........well atleast geet is worried about Ridz.........thts sign of improvement.........there has to be reason y she is like this........im 100% sure🤔
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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DO CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
hay its CCBM
love viren adn nevi… actually viren. lol he is sooo sweet…

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