FF-Mannet***My Dark Lover*** THread 1 - Page 2

Weeee 1st one...

Ok... What? Wha? Who? What?

What have you done to Geet??? OMG one night stand? OMG poor maan... Specially after there one night stand. I am already worried sick. How... One night stand? Actually it's really different. I like it. You have portrayed maan basically in every Chracter as possible now it's geets turn. Lol

Loved it.

Shocking but amazing.

It's like animosity. When I read it first time.

Lol.

Very good. I am glad you will be updating like 3-4 parts a day. That's like our good Keyama. Lol.

Very good. I just can't wait untill maan faces his belive Geet. Her one night stand.

Very well written. Loving it.

X

Edited by BadGirlKiss - December 21 2010 at 5:3

ty babe. always love your comments. hehe yes. well its sena. she wanted see geet in a different chracter. i always change maan... not its geets turn.

Nice update and geets character big tome shocker. But good as something new

ty babe. hope u lot like it further

xx

Posted: December 21 2010 at 5:34pm | IP Logged

Wat hv u done? M shockd to death, Geet wit such a low character, cnt digest it, why why why u hv to do this? Plz dnt mind but i realy cnt think geet n one night stand wit many men, i cn tolerate maan bein like tat but geet, lets see wat u hv in mind 4 ths track, but stil i m stil takin in my mind wat i read. Plz plz plz dnt mind its jst my POV.

no need t say anything. lol its ur POV... it took me time to portrait her in that chracter. thats why it took me ages to update. lol. i didn't have the gut. haha

ty babe always love ur comments

xx

Lol oh Geet- she needs some tough love from Maan haha!

Anyway update soon

Paloma x

haha... yes she does... very tough love. she have to do the inposible to win maan now haha.

x

awesum update

ty hun

xx

Haha that was totally unexpected role reversal nice as I said I like change and geet in this style well there's a first for everything and poor maan who hasn't touched a single soul his marriage is fixed with hers but I'm sure he can change her lol and wonder who the boy was I'm kinda thinking she might have a stand with one of his mates but who knows and haha geet And ridz bossing sameera around lol that was something new to see aswell anyways a really different concept from the usuals and the title is kept me thinking is maan saying it or geet anyways great update and continue soon

haha... lol

always love ur comments. u always analise it hehe. well .. hmm... u never know. and yes sammera.. lol haha i have grt plan for her as well lol

xxxx

ove this update amazing continue soon

ty babe. love the comment

x

Give some tym to digest......... Geet actually i m spellbounded ryt now........ Anyway its interesting......

haha. u have untill 2mx... i will be back with more shocking updates. LOL

xxx

awesome update

loved it

geet's character is a shocker

man her life is messed up

hope when maan comes he changes her

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

np for the PM. sox i havent replied to any of ur comments. but loved them. :D

haha well u just have to wait

xxx

oh my God made Geet one night stand & Maan obedient loving person i hope she stop drugs brilliant as always pls cont soon

hehe ty babe. loved all of ur comments. and yes hopefully.

oh i hope mr. handa gets impressed by maan and asks him to fix geet. that would be aweeeeeesome. it's like secretly dad and maan against geet.

yaara u r on a roll. writing so much but plz plz plz ...i'm actually begging u now..plz don't forget to update heartbeats. it's really a very innocent sweet story.

hay hun.. i havent forgot HB... hopefully maybe one this week. i will try my best. and haha maan and dad gang up against geet. LOL

xx

hopefully i replied… i will reply more when i am bc… hehe enjoy]xxx

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

awesome story line.......OMG geet is totally unbelievable..wy she is like that???????????/

pls pls pls continue....loved it...

Originally posted by: komlika

GEET .....n....Ridzy.......😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲.... ..Poor Maan n armaan😭 ........... i m sure Maan will change geet 😍..........cant wait to read more 😊