MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it!
finally everything is alright!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
loved the family reunion
yay maan told pia he loves geet
anu's reaction was so funny
cant wait 4 a next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it but maan still has to manofy geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update yaar
love maaneet
lovely precap
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Posted: 14 years ago

superb
awesome
luvd it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part!!
Continue soonnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago

UPDATING

45 mins
HAppy Valentinesday =)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 18

Pia- Ok , you propose her then I will take out a date and leaves from there.

Maan goes to his room and looks at his mobile, Geet hasen't called him once..

Maan- Kaha tha iss ladki ko ke mujhe phone karna, par nhi yeh to Geet hai na!

He calles her but she cuts his call.

Maan- What the hell! and tries again and again she cuts it..

Maan- Abh dekhtha ho kaise mujhe phone nhi karti...

Maan messages her

Geet takes up her phone and looks a message from Maan..

From Maan
To: Geet

Geet, please pick up the phone.
Bohot zarori baat karni hai, mom ne meri shaadi fix kar di hai aur tum bhi na mera phone nhi uthar rahi ho.. Please pick up or call me back.

Geet- WHATT!!! How can mom do like that and calls him back

He cuts her phone and she tries again..

MAan- Hello
Geet- HOW DARE YOU CUT MY CALL?
Maan- Sorry woh ghalti se cut ho gaya tha na, and acts very sad
Geet- Why haven't you told mom anything about us?
Maan- ey, back in his own voice
Maan- I was just joking with the message alright.. Kitni jaldi phone kiya abh mujhe
Geet- aahhhhh Maaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!! Don't ever say something like that!
Maan- Why you weren't answering my phone?
Geet- Woh you said that I should go back home that's why
Maan- TO kya faraq partha hai jaan..
Geet- -.-
Maan- I said it because I wanted to get you back to this house but as a bride
Geet started to shy and look down
Maan- And please stop shying and smiled to her
Geet- How do you know what I'm doing?
Maan- Please Geet, I know what you are doing and when you are doing something..

She started to look around her if he was near her..

Maan- I'm at home, I don't see you
She stops - Maan I know that.. Woh to main kuch dondh rahi thi
Maan- Acha in his sweet voice
Geet- yes, Maan mujhe bohot neend aye hai abhi ok, Good night
Maan- Ok Good night

Next day Maan wakes up and thinks how he will propose Geet.. Soch Maan soch.. He was thinking how Geet would like to be proposed but that was not easy eithar.. he thinks and thinks ida call Taani

Maan goes to Anu's room where he is talking with Taani.. Maan snatches the phone

Maan- Taani bhabhi
Taani- maan? Kya hua where is Anu ?
Maan- Woh I took the mobile from him.
Taani- What happened?
Maan- Woh, I wanted to know if you could help me
Taani- With what?
Maan- I'm goiing to propose Geet, So I want to know how she want to get proposed.
Taani- awwwwwwwww... Geet is so lucky ... Ok I will tell you.. It should be very romantic and start telling him.
Maan- Thanks bhabhi you are the best
Taani- Why are you calling me bhabhi?
Maan- You are going to be soon my bhabhi so I'm practise..
Taani- Acha, bhabhi ke chamche
Maan- thik hai thik hai.. I have to go now or else she will start aruging with me for not talking with her..

Maan goes to the flower shop and orders flowers and goes around whole day.. He didn't have time to go to the office and Anu had to take care of everything..

Meera called jay to ask if he evan has feelings for her or is she just spending her time for nothing.

Jay- haa MEera bolo
Meera- Jay, tell me honestly
Jay- hmm
Meera- Do you even love me?
Jay- Kya matlab?
MEera- Woh mera matlab tha ke I love you alot and maybe you have seen it..
Jay- Meera tum pochna kya chahti ho? I don't get you
Meera- Woh kuch nhi and cuts the call..

Meera- uff Meera, itna muskhil bhi kya hai?

Jay wonders what happend to her and drives to her place.. He sends a message to her and tells her to come down and she does..

He takes her to a coffee shop and orders coffee for both

Meera- I don't even like coffee, why did you order one?
Jay- Oh sorry.. I will change alright.
Meera- No it's fine
Jay- Meera what were you saying at the phone
Meera- Woh.. Kuch nhi.. and looked down

When the waiter comes back with the coffees Jay whisper something to him and waiter smiles to Taani..
After 10 mints Jay stood up and went to the waiter..

All light in the caf was gone, one spotlight at Jay and one at Meera..

Jay- Meera

She looked up to him

Jay- Meera, I don't know what to say about such a wondeful thing god ever had send down to the earth to me. First day I meet you it was like only a duty to me to get you back normal, and when you were normal I started to fall in love with you. I know that it sounds unromantic cause it's true I'm very unromantic person. hehe. But I want to ask you something..

Meera Handa would you like to be mrs. Meera Jay Khurana?
Will you marry me?

Everybody in the caf started to clap

Meera was shying

Everyone - Say yes, comon say yes

Meera- Jay, I don't think you need my answer.. It will be yes for sure

Precap- Geet helping Taani for her bridal dress.. New Entry

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Edited by SaVni - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wowwwwwwwwww jay n meera r in luv n luved d way jay proposed meera
maan learn smthing frm ur big bro
n waiting for maans proposal
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Posted: 14 years ago

waiting to knw wat maan how planned to propose!!!!!!!

wonderful part.......

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