Deceived- MG FF ~Part 13~ on pg 66 & impt note

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ursrithika

@ursrithika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

very nice dear...... still waitng for more looooooong ones.... too much slfsh na mei.... ;)

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

it seems at present this like button is not working DW i'll hit it later

the update was nice

last part awesome DUST DANAV

liked it most👏👏👏

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

OMG!

Continue cotinue!!!

Thanks for the PM

Take care

Love,

Ashu

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

read all parts awesome pls add me pm list pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

awesome update

loved it

loved the quick bonding between annie an geet

geet calling him a Dhust Dhanav

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Shamima

@-shamima-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Haha it's so funny to see geet in this avatar and how she's not affected by all this and awe how she called maan dusht danav and he smirked that was so cute anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

loved it especially whn she said dusht danav and all the others started laughing

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Great update! Looking forward to read the second part 😊

"bhabhi I know bhaiyya khadoos hain per don't worry main hun na or dadi bhi hai. Humari bhi same opinion hai." 😆

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

hiiiii

awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 da wedding

con when u can

i understand

thanks 4 da note and pm

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Hi,

This is very interesting story! I can't belive Geet has no clue abt Maan's feelings...not possible. She needs to pay attention to what he doesn't say.

I requested u as buddy...pls PM me when u update next!

-Sona