Deceived- MG FF ~Part 13~ on pg 66 & impt note

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

man i loved this update.. the way Maan finally brought out in the open the tension between them and changed the dynamics..ooOh ☺️..

Love how much Maan seems smitten with her , amused at her antics and that laugh! god! I imagined a 'Maan Laugh' and let me tell you that was nearly the death of me😍 dee-vine!

then the predatory teasing😳, the way she was completely flustered and he was unrelenting , was superb..

ah and the rules, and his repartee to that🤣.. man that shut her up!☺️These two have suddenly sent the temperature shooting through the roof..☢️

please do post the next part soon.😳

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am_sweet_pari

@am_sweet_pari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

fabolous update

cant wait for nxt update

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#243

awesome update...i'm loving this maan

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ninavi

@ninavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

👏

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Sayaka

@ElizaKawa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

can u pls add me to ur pm list

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

woww its so nice...Maan is trying to gradually reduce the distance between them by making advances on her n she is also eager for the same...ab pata nahi Annie kitni baar innko romance karthe hue pakdegi aage jaake😆...hmm...they r playing challenge game with each other...some spice to their romance...that'll be so fun to watch...wonderful update...loved it...pls continue soon...😃

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lively-piia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

nice update deaar...

maan is to straight 4ward and too damm in love...

love the kitchen scene...

do continue...

thanx 4 pm

chao

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

Hayeer yaar. You killed me. Loved it completely.
Your writing style made it all the more beautiful and enjoyable.
These two are shoo cute :D
Loved their encounter in the kitchen :) *blush*
poor geet she felt embarassed afterwards hehe.
Rules setting huh :D great idea lol.
Cant wait to see geet opening up to Maan ;)

Do update soon dear, cant wait for their dinner :)