{ I m back to take revenge~ {Maneet} new updt on 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi dear i am new reader please contii soon please..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Sounds very interesting ... Please do continue ... Can you please add me to your PM list ... Please and Thank you :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi please contii this one also
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh i am really very sorry guys for late update.n u know the reasons . so here the next part.this stroy is becoming very long for me and i did not update the part from a very long time si i just write the part in short description .so thats it.

Enjoy...

~{ I am back to take revenge}~

Part ~ 3

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The bike voice grab every one attention.

The men rid off from bike and walk toward the basketball court were a group pf are playing basket ball match.

P :naintara ( he said)

girls stop playing and looked him.

naintara run towards him and huged him tight

" oh darling i missed u so much" naintara said

while kssing him on his cheeks

" i have too sweety" the person replied

"i love u vivek" naintara said( sorry guys i know u r axpecing maan but dont worry he is not to far now)

" i love u too jaan" vivek replied.

Naintara and vivek are very to see each other not bacause they r meeting after a long period because they r goin to show geet her cruile fate.

vivek and naintara made plan against geet .

First plan " fiendship with geet"

2 try to win geet trust

Vivek start his plan on his first day .

one evening Geet walking through a cirridor when she collied with vivek .

"i am sorry" vivek replied innocently.

" its ok, kisi se bhi ho sakta" geet replied very politely'

vivek smiled and offere his friend ship.first geet hesitent but accept it gladly.and from that day they hit off.they bacome very good friend .pinky always fell uneasy from vivek instent gase. but she cant say anything to geet.she did want to hurt her best friend.

One day principle held a meeting in auditoruim with student and annonce that .Some student from boston are coming for a event organised by the college authurity an this whatever ammount come from this even will to charity of lonavala orphanage.

Every got excited to listen this new after a long time they r going to see some thing intereting.

Many students start thier preperatio for the event. because they wanted everything best .

Some student sstart hepling thier teacher in a purposeto imperess them and some of them did not even care.

Before 2 exactly vivek through a big party for the college in blue waves .bcause its his birth day.

Vivek specially invite geet in his birthday party.

The birthday day

The whole college were present on the party and dancing singingmadly like true adults.

Geet come with pinky in halter neck dress .Boys cant take thier eye off from geet perfect body.

Geet did not want to wear that dress but alas shehave to because pinky insist.Pinky did not want geet to hide her beauty. so she made geet were the dress.

Geet felt really uneasy in her dress, this dress revealing her a little bit her cleavage and and reach upto her silky thighs.

Boys mouth watered to see her long and silky legs.

Geet congract vivek with hug and cut the cake with him becz he insist her.

Party is on full swing pinky leave the party early because she have to reach her home before 10 .

When geet start to leave the part so vivek insist her for a drink first she refuse but after see vevek pout she did not ignore and drink the whole glass.

Every one cheerd for her.

Geet start feel dizzy she did not even know where is she standing when she is about to fall vevek got opportunity .he picked her up and lead her towards the hotel room which is near the club.

Vivek throw geet on the bed and get top of her.

" stop plz dont do this" geet protest .in unconciousness.of drink

But vivek did not hear her protest .He unbuttond his shirt and pants.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO plz D....o..n.tt" geet screamed with her full strenght.

Vivek kissed on her neck and bite hard which make geet screamed in harsh pain.

Vivek bent down to kiss her but from no where with sudden jerk he was on the floor.The punch was so hard that vivek mouth start to bleed.

Vivek look up and saw a very strong men standing in fron of him withrage in his eyes

" how dare u to do this with her" the men said and punched vivek hard again on his stomach.

The scurity of the hotel come and take vivek with them .

The men watch geet still unconsious .He walked towards her , he picked up her in strong arms and take her to his private room.

He made lay geet on bed comfortably.For a 10 minutes he watch geet innocent beauty for wich many wolfs were hungry.

Het cover geet from blanket and he himself sleep on his couch.

Next morning geet woke up with heavy head .she still remeber last night .to have a think of it , her eyes filled with tears and she start crying .

To hear geet sobs a men woke up with a jrek , he still afrai what if anyone again try to harm this innocent angel.

He walk towards the bed and see geet cring heristycally , her face covered with hands.

He felt bad for her and sit on bed near her n watch her crying .

Geet felt some one presence around her and without think any twice she hugged the person very tightly.

" dont worry, no one goin to harm u i am here" he said with full of trust

Geet look up and see a most handsome boy.Her eyes met his blue one.

" i dont know how to thank " she said with a low wisper

He smiled at her" u dont have to sweetheart" he said in husky voice.

They shared a awkward silence and to broke the silnce

he said." well hi i am ........

To be continued.............

i know i know i am very bad n u all must have guess but plz make it secret for others.

So here the next part.i will try to update my both FF as much as i get the time.

Thna x to all of u guys to liking my FFs soo much.

plz do long coment and dont forgot to click like button.

love uu

salina

Edited by salinashah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
i seriously thought that it was maan but never guessed it wud b vicky..........is he someway related to maan..............or is the saviour guy maan?aisey suspense mein chidthey hain kya?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Ergh NT and Vivek jerks but I think that's our hero maan who saved geet and now falling for her innocent beauty anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

loved it

continue soon dont ignore this ff😒

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
wowwwwwwww awesomeeeeeeeee
hope d guy who helped was maan n waitingggggggggg
is baar jaldi update kar ba plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
read in one ago love it core super pls cont soonnnnnnnn pls do pm me

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