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komlika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

awesome update👏...........do continue..........excited to read next part..........wonder how they will meet again😍 ............do add me to PM list 😊

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

@ ixray: yes...kayamath is what i originally wrote it for

JAZ

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nikipuki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Wonderful start, you've already drawn your readers into the story.

First I was going to complain that you haven't updated your other SS before starting this FF but I checked and you had updated so double bonanza for me.

So, is there really a spot near the Malibu Public Library that offers the view you describe in your story? I live in SoCal so if it does exist maybe I'll check it out 😊.

Keep writing and frequent updates please.

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Kads

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

The start is nice
Do continue

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

wow!!it was so beautiful..

love it..

do continue plz.thx

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

@ niki: yes!! there totally is!! at least i think its the malibu library...lol...but there is a spot in malibu...its my fav!! they've got like only one stone bench that you can sit on...but the view is superb!! where in socal do you live?

JAZ

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

It was magical....... Its like me too living those moments wid dem..... Loved it........ I can't wait 4r next updation

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

I love this story! I remember reading the Premeer version and I cried and a fan of your writing! Can't wait for the next part continue soon please!!!!👏👏👏👏

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nikipuki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: jnawaz
@ niki: yes!! there totally is!! at least i think its the malibu library...lol...but there is a spot in malibu...its my fav!! they've got like only one stone bench that you can sit on...but the view is superb!! where in socal do you live?

JAZ

hmmm....then I got to check it out....live in OC