The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. - Page 2

Originally posted by: kavyaa

zeffyyy post d nw link on TWOS 5 na.... bichare tere readers waha tadap rae han tere jhalak ke liye aur tu yaha behthi hai..... hehe jab unhe pata lagega ki naya thread khul gaya toh bhagdad mach jayegi.....😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: zephyrr

lol!!. seriously i forgot to post the new thread link there.. i'm so stupid..

hehe koi baat nai hota hai😛.... one more thing u forgot.... u forgot 2 post d pg no of update along d title of d thread on TWOS 5...😛😉😆
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congo shongo zappy diiiiiiiiiiii......da last part was sooooooooooooooo happening...AR nw has grown to bond without wordds..i luv AR and the way u have moulded AR in ur ff is soo charming..i fall in luv wid thema all over again...u have amazing and exceptional writing skills...and coz of wich reading ur ffs is really a pleasure in itself..whnever i recieve ur pms i make it a point to read it first thing in the morning..coz its better dan anything i can ask for...it just makes my day...zappy dii never ever stop writing for us..i cant afford to lose this AR...luv ya ...muah..

congwatss ! zappyy !! YAY !

Congratulations on the new thread!!!! Hope there are many more to come.

🤗 congratulations🤗

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😊 sixth thread😊

congratulations on the 6th thread...😃

oppsss...I m so late updating my coment this time ..I almost forgot to tell u how I felt about the part..😆

first off all..CONGRATULATIONS zeffffrrrrr...for having 6th thread of TWOS...WOW..u so deserve to have many more like this...keep up the gud work and all the very best....u r one just BRILLIANT writer ..well I have said this a million times till now ..but wat to do ..u r worth lot more aprreciation dear ...luv uu😳


well...needless to say .. as usual rocked with ur writing this time too ..arm's outburst then his guilt ...ridz realization and everything.... I luved it absolutely...u r showing ups and downs in AR's relationship so perfectly...BEAUTIFUL...😛

physical gestures r not sufficient all the time ...words r important too....I was thrilled reading ridz confession the way she spoke to arm about her fears ...her childhood and deep secrets ..BRAVO... this will surely strengthen their bond..as now arm's insecurities or his stupid thoughts will die down ...

I njoyed the part wen ridz got to know about his trip to that "haunting place"..LOL...even I felt she will surely shout and will b mad at arm ...but her reaction was a shock for me...she was too sad but I luved the way she controlled the situation and herself knowing that arm was felling guilty and blaming himself ..awww...AR's LOVV is different , very different...luv themmm

I luved SAY WHAT YOU NEED TO SAY ...in spite of the fact that it had less romance...still it was 👏

update next one soonn..and plssss snatch sometime from ur traning and ur Mr.armaan for us..pleashhhhh..LOLZZ..(can't keep my hands off from writing something to tease u...kya karoon majboor hoon..tehe)😆😛