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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zephyrr

so i have put up another installment, and this one's long! so beware!



Rachna- when have we ever complained about length? All that drunken state and all they do is sleep? Please wake them from sleep in the middle of the night and give us some more mushy AR moments. Have a weird feeling that No family thing for armaan is going to bite him in behind and I don't have a very good feeling about horoscope matching either. Bhagakar shaadi karva do!!!

Will comment more once you complete the update.

Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update

drunk Armaan Riddhima are hilarious 😆

Riddhima - "i want to have sex on the beach" 🤣 and Armaan thinking of it literally than as a drink
🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
zappy dis update was also awesome...
Kindly update it's next part....asap!
m still waitng..If possible den by 2day only...plssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey!!!
loved the part till now....the drunk couple dat they had become........continue soon
tc
luv
nandini
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey zappy
wowwwwwwwww yaar awesome part👏👏...............awwwwwwww aramman took her for ride n actually she enjoyed ride soooooooo muchhhhhhhhh..............i jealous about ridz........now she want sky drive n all.................ridz enjoyed every bit of her freedome.such awesome..........yeah armaan ideas n thinking always different but superb..........loved armaan desciption fri their marriage wowwwwwwwwwww.............beach n simple marriage...............hahaha armaan dn't what do pandit in marriage????????
it was hilarious😆👏😆..........loved dunken armaan n ridz😊.....i loved so much drinken ridz always😛...........OMG they sang twinkle twinkle poems it was soooooooooo fuuny..............
tihs so hilarious..............

she was so lovely n innocent when she drunk
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz complete it ASAP
Edited by shilpI007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love talli armaan and ridzy!!!!😉
they r sooo gud mahn!!!! :)


awesummmmm update... loved it lyk antng!!!!! best best... evn the date waala, and the Pandit je!! 😆

nd the bike race was superb!!!! <3
update sooonnn... nd thank u fr such a wonderful update!!!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
For installments 1,2 ,3 and 4....
Dilruba was a show stealer.........
OMG! His Hindi was hilarious.... I just couldn't stop laughing.... And the best line being "Baby nahi,,, Bhabhi bol" from Armaan.... that was so typically Armaan.
And the cutest thing was Ridhima's tantrum of not living in a hotel... That was just so cute and how did even Shashank expect Ridhima to not even visit Armaan's apartment... And what will be his reaction be when he comes to know that she didnt even check-in into the hotel?? I just hope that just accelerates their wedding like any father would probably think! LOL!!!!!!
And then the apartment, Ridhima embarrassed him enough about his "items" like he had the night before... That was a good comeback....
And Amaan's past being explored... hmmm... that sounds pretty interesting...
Would like to know more about it.....
Then the hospital, Helen seemed like a mother figure to Armaan... I'm glad he had at least someone to take care of him during those days....And Raina, stupid intern!😆
But I loved his thoughtfulness for Ridhima.... That was indeed very very adorable...
And the dress, like i told you that I have one too so no comments on how awesomely awesome that dress fits....
And about the Tiger Sky Tower...
I have no words...
That place was so cool......
Somehow, I love watching any city's aerial view...
And the lines you described about how Ridhima felt when she saw below were so true...
The feeling of liberation and freedom is something wonderful to feel...
And since, we dont have any Tiger Tower here, I usually feel like that at Marine Drive in Mumbai....
It just gives me that feeling about wanting to fly away with no bondage....
And the kiss they shared there would be the most romantic one with a view like that behind them...
OMG!!!!!!! its so much like a fairy tale.. or rather something better than that.....
The beachside restaurant-So So SO ROMANTIC!!!!!!! I would love to have a day like that with someone like Armaan by my side...... Everything was just so perfect and yet its little human imperfectness...
Also, I was going to mention about them not going out on a normal basis before but i thought I'll mention it after their return from Singapore.... And there, you mentioned it!!!!!!!!!!😊
Their conversation about marriage was really cute... And I like Armaan's idea of marriage more than the normal shaadis.... I agree with Armaan when he says "too many people, lots of oily food and too much noise" I would rather prefer a court marriage but Armaan's idea was even better....
I hope their wedding is like that....
The Bike Racing was so much fun...
You described the little details so well that it felt like i was there in place of Ridhima...
And it feels exactly the same when you get on a bike for the first time....Armaan and RIdhima getting drunk and singing nursery rhymes was so cute...
And the last emotional conversation was heart-touching...
It was just a plain awesome day in Singapore!!!!!!!!
Brilliantly written!!!!!!
I wonder whats remaining now!!!!!
But obviously waiting for it!!!!!!!!

Muaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh to you for such an awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anokhee!😃

Edited by Anokhee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update! The way you showed that entire Tiger Tower thingy, was beautifully written, especially the kiss part with the sunset backdrop! How romantic! But at the same time, it wasn't unrealistic or anything, you made it so fairy-tale type, but yet stuck to reality! Contradicting but true!

And that entire drunk scene...I wonder how Armaan'll react when he wakes up in the morning...And I could just picture the two of them singing the nursery rhymes...I especially loved 'Johny Johny!'...That was funny! 'Drinking Vodka', 'No papa!' Lol that would be funny if Shashank was in the picture as well! Even that whole 'Sex on the Beach' thing! Hehe! 🤣


And that emotional talk in the end...I could see Armaan saying all those things...It was so touching...He was acting like such a cute child, and I felt like crying when he cried! He's shoooooooooooo cute! My baby!

I loved how you described everything! Just beautiful! Keep it up! Good work! Update soon! x x
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW
WOW
I feel like i toured the city with those two myself
The writing has THAT much of an impact

The emotions, the description of the scenery, the underlying remembrance of the sad days and they peace they find with one another- its so well described

Rachna tum genius ho! You make one feel like a part of this story
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing part Rachna <3

I lovee the part that I dont know what to say anymore .From them going to his apartment and her coming to know all the pain he has gone through just because of how empty the house feels ,her knowing about his items and their discussion about his past was all so beautifully written .I love how they both are understanding each other more by every day,which is needed.Then helen and Armaan were damn cute and the fact that Riddhima's getting to know his side of pain by coming there with him is what is so well put in by you.It was due that Riddhima know his side of the pain like how witnessed hers.The suprise by Armaan was brilliant ,I sure knew it'd be something out of the box and it was LOL .Only Armaan can do something like that .It seems their coming to Singapore was a boon it seems they've come here to correct anything thats imperfect in each others lives.
Loved the bike racing idea and how Riddhima has started to experience a life she always wanted to with her love by her side !
The drunk scene and nursery rhymes were the most adorable part showing their innocent and adorablr side once again.
The highlight of the part as obviously the last bit when Armaan shares those feelings he never would in his normal state.
I believe that since they are at the place which supposedly gave them so much pain and have come full circle by coming there after having won over all the adversities they might have a heart to heart and talk about all that they had to go through here,so that when they are back shadows of their past hurt them lesser .
Its beautiful how you express human emotions so beautifully,from ,passion,pain ,fear to love and the kind AR share.
Its a known fact that hard times leave an effect on everyone and that follows them what may come and the way you include it in the update makes it even more applaudable.
You are an amazing writer and thats an understatment !

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