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Posted: 14 years ago
"Mai aaya hu tumhe ley ne...zamane ko chorr kar...chalo saath mere...basayenge sitaron mein ghar..."
OMG !!! THIS THE BEST & CUTEST PROPOSAL I HAVE EVER SEEN ... MAANEET LOVE U BOTH FROM BOTTOM OF MY HEART.. U GUYS HAVE MADE MAANEETIANS LIFE FULL OF LOVE... GOD BLESS U BOTH... i'm damn happy after seeing this promo...

n 2nd reason for my happiness is that "BABA MAAN SINGH KHURANA KI KRIPA SE MEIN PASS HO GAYI....I CAN'T BELIEVE....MAAN KE CHAKKAR MEIN, MUJHE TOH LAG RAHA THA KE MAI TOH BADNAAM HO JAUNGI, PAKKA FAIL HOUNGI.....PAR BABA NE MERE UPAR APNI PURI KRIPA RAKHI 🤣 YAY!! YIEEPPPIIIEEEE!!! M SOOO HAPPY....RIGHT NOW WANTED TO HUG MAAN TIGHTLY😆 🤗

toooooo busy in my admission/registration n all... din't get time to update... will update from day after tom, so till then thought of giving u all a short update...

Recap :-

Geet: shaadi ke 1month tak aapne toh meri shakal bhi nahi dekhi... i din't complain coz mujhe pata tha aapke upar kya beet rahi hogi, but aapne kabhi yeh socha mere upar kya beeti....
maan felt guilty...he actually din't even think about her for once....

Part 9 :-

Geet cried out loud: aapne kabhi socha mai kaisi hoon... kabhi bhi mere baare mein poochne ki koshish ki thi... NAHI maan kabhi NAHI... mai toh aapki dost thi na, aap hi hamesha mujhe apna dost kehte the na... fir kyun aap mujhse itne door chale gaye the... meri kya galti thi... didi ki galti ki saza mujhe kyun mili...?? kyun maan??
maan din't like what just happened... he never wanted to make her cry... he just wanted her to stay away from him... he wasn't able to see anymore tears in her eyes
Maan tried to console her: geet
geet who was hurt, din't want maan to console her... she just showed her hand, telling him "not to say anything"
maan stops himself straightaway...
Geet: kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai...
Maan in pain: geet tumne mere baare mein socha tha...??
Geet: bohot... par kabhi himmat nahi kar payi aapse baat karne ki... darr lagta tha yeh sochkar bhi ke agar mai aapke saamne ayi toh aapko kaisa lagega...
maan felt bad... today he realised what geet must have been going through from last for months...
he speaks in his mind "mujhe toh bas sam ko chodne ka dukh tha par geet isske upar toh kya kya beeti....pheww MSK itna selfish kaise ho sakta hai...maine kabhi geet ke baare mein nahi socha"
Maan: geet
Geet: plz... kuch mat kahiye... leave me alone... mujhe pata hai aap chahte hain na mai aapko na dekhun... theek hai... mai apko aaj ke baad kabhi nahi dekhhungi...(tears rolled down from her eyes)
he din't like what geet just said n how she doesn't even let him speak anything...but he was the only one who wanted her to stay away n now when she made him sure that she'll be out of his way, that fact was unbearable for him... {oh god these confused men-manpreet thought}
Maan: geet mera yeh matlab.......................he hadn't completed his sentence when geet got up n walks toward the door n said
Geet: aapka matlab mai samajh gayi hun... aap jaisa chahte hai waisa hi hoga abse... & walks our of the room
maan sat there frozen... thinking what had he done...
"oh god she was just starring at me...dekh hi toh rahi thi, big deal...kya zarurat thi use unta sunane ki maan... ab khush... u made a big blunder out of all that...........................Damn why am i bothering...fine...its good for her...its better she stays away..." he got up n went to outhouse

next day

maan reached office...for a change, geet was already present...in past 3months this was the first time she reached there before maan...he enters with his full attitude, everyone standing in a row next to each-other, greets him... maan rushingly tells pari(head architect) to get blue-prints of latest project in his cabin, geet stood there with head facing floor, maan did notice her but din't say anything... he walks off in his cabin...
she din't even greet me...greet my foot, din't even bother to look at me- he thought
pari walks in his cabin...
Pari: sir files....handover to maan
Maan took it n asks: geet kab aayi?
Pari: 8:45
Maan: kyun.. i mean itni jaldi..
Pari: haan
Maan: kya haan
Pari: matlab sir.. kyun ayi yeh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata.. n mummers "agar aa gayi toh kya farak pad gaya...15min hi toh jaldi aayi hai, jo roz 15min late aati hai, uska kya"
Maan heard her but ignored: jao tum
Pari: yes sir..

4hours passed, she had already arranged all his meetings, made a list n placed it on his table too before he came, so that she doesn't need to call him or face him to tell... maan was done with his 2meetings, he hadn't seen geet from past 4hours, which was unlike in their daily routines now.. he got restless coz he got use to of her glimpse.... he walks towards her cabin to see her... geet notices him from the blind approaching her, she hurriedly gets up from her chair n rushed to pari's room... maan enters in her cabin, n finds no one...
where is she- he thought
he disappointedly left n went into his cabin...

Pari: what hap geet?? tum itni bhagti hui kyun aayi??
Geet nervously: nahi.. kuch nahi..
Pari: is evrything ok?
Geet: yea...

geet poped out from pari's cabin n looked for maan...he was nowhere to be seen...geet asks someone, he tells that he's in his cabin...she sighed n went to her cabin...pari found her behaviour odd...
geet enters in her cabin n sits on her chair... n thinks "oye geet..tu kyu unse bhaag rahi hai..woh nahi chahte the ke tu unhe dekhe, toh tune aaj unhe nahi dekha..par ab agar woh tere saamne aayenge toh tu subeh ki tarah apni nazre neeche kar liyo..par usne chupke bhaagne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.."

meanwhile maan noticed her from the blind, shook his head seeing her cute faces which she made while talking to herself...maan picks the reciever to call her
Geet's phone rang, she picked it up at one ring without noticing: hello..
maan called her... but finds her line busy
Phone: Pizza Helpline
Geet confused: what??
Phone: pizza order karna hai...
Geet: sorry wrong number...
she hungs up....n mummers "kaise kaise log phone karte hai..construction company pizza kabse banane lagi...."
phone again rang...this tim it was maan
Geet picked it up furiously: bola na.. yahan pizza order nahi hota.. ek baar mein samajh nahi aati kya.. construction company hai yeh...
n cuts it...
phone rang again
Geet picked up: mujhe bhi pizza khana hai ab... chilla chilla ke bhook lagne lag gayi... agar pizza helpline ka number mile toh mujhe bhi phone karke bata dena...
Maan tauntingly: mere paas hai number, bataun???
Geet sat frozen: ohh teri yeh toh Dusht Danav hai.. ab kya karun..??
Maan angrily: kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai.. mere cabin mein aao...

Precap: geet trying her best to ignore maan

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
RESERVED...........................😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Fantastic Manpreet..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved every bit of it!

Geet ignoring Maan... thats gr8!😉

I'm lovin' it!😛

Continue with more!!!!

Love

Mina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh wow...first of all CONGRATULATIONS u cleared ur exams... Party 🥳

n for update, it was outstanding as always😆 loved it
Edited by iluvmaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it :) Added u as buddy... plz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
eet picked up: mujhe bhi pizza khana hai ab... chilla chilla ke bhook lagne lag gayi... agar pizza helpline ka number mile toh mujhe bhi phone karke bata dena...🤣
Maan tauntingly: mere paas hai number, bataun???😆
Geet sat frozen: ohh teri yeh toh Dusht Danav hai.. ab kya karun..??😲
Maan angrily: kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai.. mere cabin mein aao... 🤣 🤣

thanks for upate.........u pass ....congrats 🥳

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg...the last part is just too cute..gr8 update continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited my Comment!!!

Yippe 1st to comment! And ya...

CONGRATS FOR PASSING!!!! 🥳🥳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Edited my Comment!!!


Yippe 1st to comment! And ya...

CONGRATS FOR PASSING!!!! 🥳🥳



mina where have u been???...........miss u 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahaha loved the update... cont soon 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

gooddddddd loving it

plz make geet more strong to face maan dont want her to fall quickly for him again.

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