FF: Maan&Geet: 120, Chandini's Rooftop - CLOSED

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

so finally maan saw geet...........
beautiful update........

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

I absolutely loved how you described Maans point of view when he saw Geet laugh!
loved the update :D

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

You did not just end the update there😡....You cannot....I forbid you!!

You come back Hasini and give us a proper update......Lest I die of the cliffhanger🤢.<Sorry for getting carried away...What to do...I am such a drama queen😆>

Brilliant update....I loved how you captured the whole scene where they are afraid that they are about to get caught! The fear, the tension beautifully captured- I could hear their hearts pounding.

I still cant get over the fact that you made Sasha the Madame of Rooftop🤣

Now that the physical veils have been lifted- any chance we may get to see the lifting of some mental veils too?

Can't wait for the next part....

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: -pixie-

You did not just end the update there😡....You cannot....I forbid you!!

You come back Hasini and give us a proper update......Lest I die of the cliffhanger🤢.<Sorry for getting carried away...What to do...I am such a drama queen😆>

Brilliant update....I loved how you captured the whole scene where they are afraid that they are about to get caught! The fear, the tension beautifully captured- I could hear their hearts pounding.

I still cant get over the fact that you made Sasha the Madame of Rooftop🤣

Now that the physical veils have been lifted- any chance we may get to see the lifting of some mental veils too?

Can't wait for the next part....

SORRY ...its simply too long Pixie...imagine if this is just the initial couple of scenes...sometimes I do get carried away. The next ones are even more difficult for me to write...as they.....

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

I shall be waiting...

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

ITS TOOO AWESOME LOVED THIS PART A LOT

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Omg..... Finally maan ney geet ko dekh liya ...... Me doing my happy dance.

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Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

its beautiful and i'm speechless.! 🤓

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

yeyy....finally maan saw geet...

n the lines by which u described everything were just marvelous... 👏

loved it...

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

hey great update dear........
finally maan saw geet's face n his feelings when he saw her face was superbbbbbbbb n both unknowingly attracted towards each other by fraction of a sec..............it was feel like reality.....
loved it..............looking fwd..............

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