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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Hi. Just read all the parts-brilliant FF. Hope Mayur come together soon and loving Samrat in this.
Please add me to your pm list.

Please pm me when u update.
Edited by Alisha-MJHT - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
aww that was a cute update
so sam is on misson mayur......
waiting for the next part....
do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

"waha madam ko bura lagta hai agar uska boss uske haalchaal puchne nahi aata hai n yahaan boss ko bura lagta hai agar madam unhe call karke nahi batati hai n use nihaarte bhi hai apne cabin me baithe baithe."

"in dono ke sur milane k liye kuch na kuch to karna padega...!! chal beta samrat apne kaam pe lag jaa.."



hahahhaa i really loved it

sam - i m with u on mayur mission

hey amrita lovely update dear

i really enjoyed the whole update

wanna to c mayur together.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
lovely part!
awwww it was so cute.....the way she felt not seein mayu n mayuz reaction.omg😳
n sam ki last line....gr8! lukin fwd to it!
do cont soon!
n thnx for the pm!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
heyy amrita thnx alot for the pm...
and very very nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
wow superb!! kp updating more!! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Thank u guys 4 all ur precious comments...m posting the next part n u keep commenting ;-)

Part 5

Next day in office

Samrat goes 2 mayank's cabin...

"may i cum in mr.mayank Sharma?"

"arey samrat tumhe kab se mere cabin me aane k liye permission ki jarurat padne lagi??"

Samrat enters n gets seated.

"mayank mujhe apne project k liye delhi jaane k liye tumhaari permission chahiye"

"ummm...samrat aaj tumhe kya ho gaya hai?? Tum mujhse itni formality kyu kar rahe ho? Maine kabhi tumhe kaam karne se roka hai?"

"ummmm...wo actually mujhe tumhari 1 employee ko bhi saath le jaana hai na isliye permission maang raha hu"

" i hope wo nupur na ho" mayank thot 2 himself.

"kise??!" asked mayank hesitatingly.

"ofcourse nupur yaar!"samrat said smiling mischeviously.

"oh...ok!! u cn take her wid u...bt uska khyaal rakhna kyuki abhi hi recover hui hai weakness se" mayank said showing concern 4 her.

"o oooo....mayank Sharma apne employee k liye itna concerned...!! kya baat hai mayank, aakhir chal kya raha hai tumhaare dimaag me?" samrat said teasingly.

"arey mujhe kya hua hai?! I m alright samrat..."

"u cn tell me mayank,afterall m ur good frnd."

"aisa kuch nahi hai samrat jaisa tum samjh rahe ho."

"mai kya soch raha hu mayank?"

"samrat mai nupur se pyaar nahi karta hu..!!!!" mayank said frustatingly....he dint realise dat wat he said jus a sec ago.

"okkkkkk......maine to aisa nahi kaha ki u love nupur..."

"wo wo..wo."

"mayank u hve 2 accept d truth dat u love nupur...kab tak bhaagte rahoge?! After all 1 lifepartner ki jarurat sabko hoti hai...or fir nupur jaisi life partner ho to life mai kis baat ka tension..!"

"par wo to thik hai samrat par tum bhi to nupur se......"

"kya? Kya kaha tumne?"

"u dnt love nupur?"

"yaah i love nupur bt..."

"bt wat samrat?"

"bt as a sister...she is my sister,my best frnd, my family."

"okk sorry samrat maine tum dono ko galat samjha."

"arey its ok mayank.....ab ye sab chod,ye soch ki tu usko kaise bolega?"

"wo sab thik hai sam bt kya wo bhi mere liye feel karti hai??"

"yaah mayank, she also loves u bt she doesn't tell... she is scared of u....."

"scared of me?"

"or nahi to kya...dinbhar tu use daant ta hi toh rehta hai..daregi nahi to kya karegi?!"

"hmmm..."

"Waise mere pass 1 plan hai nupz se sachchai bulwaane ka.."

"or kya hai?"

"actually mujhe apne project k liye sach me delhi jaana hai....to mai ye soch raha hu kit u chaleja meri jagah with nupur...mai office se leave le lunga to wo shaq bhi nahi karegi ki mai kyu nahi jaa raha...den in delhi u both wil get ample time 2 knw each other....n i knw nupur...agar 1 week wo tere saath rahegi to pakka use realisation ho jaayega ki she loves u...."

"waah samrat lagta hai puri PhD ki hai loveology me..."

"hahaha....now mayank i shud leave nahi to nupur mujhe dhoondte hue yaha aa jayegi."

After 2 days mayank n nupur leave 4 delhi. Mayank picks her up 4m her place n both goes 2 railway stn. Den deir train arrives n dey get settled in deir compartment wich was in AC 3 tier. Both have got upper birth infront of each other. It was night journey. Nupur n mayank hve gone 2 sleep. At abt 1am mayank got up 4m sleep. He saw 2wards nupur who was uncomfortable cos of sumthing. He followd her gaze wich was in downwards direction diagonally....he saw a man was staring at her with bad eyes. Mayank's blood boiled after seeing dat man...he wanted 2 kill dat bas***d....bt he dint want 2 create any scene due 2 wich nupur wil b more uncomfortable....... so he jus asked nupur 2 xchange their berth.... nupur quietly followed his orders. She was nt able 2 get down as her salwar got stuck in her legs, so mayank took her in his arms n helped her 2 get down. After keeping her on floor both had an eyelock... in deir eyes only she thanked mayank 4 protecting her n mayank told her no 2 worry as he wid her. She smiled n she goes 2 his berth..nw both were sleeping peacefully.

Dey reached delhi.

so guys dis is my nxt part.....
hope u wl like..😊
do comment, m waiting😃
i hve read all ur comments...dey r amazing....cnt reply individually cos of net problem....so sry..bt u keep commenting...
note-2day i wil post an OS on MayUr,dat wil b romantic one.....i think i wil name it The Wedding Night..😉
Edited by amritaluvarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

will do pms later i mean in an hour..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
wow..
i read the second part..
it was so nice..
loved reading it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
read 3rd part...
loved it..
superb update

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