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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cute update dear😃 So Mayank is now jealous....hmmmm😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys thanks 4 all ur wonderful comments

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@secret_me- thanks dear😊 n ur welcum....

@monaloverati-oops m so sry mona...u r nt in my buddy list na so i think i skipped...😭 m so sry dear...nxt wl take care of it😊.....me 2 want such track in mjht...hope dat in MJHT3 CVs wl give us such a track....😊😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey my dear frnzz m back wid a update....thanku all 4 commenting in my last part n luking forward 4 dis part also.....

Here goes my update....

Part-3

Mayank leaves 4m dere wid a different feeling in his heart. Her respect was increased nw more in his view. How she lives alone in dis cruel city n dat 2 wid dignity. She has never crossed her limits in any respect otherwise girls in such cities wud do anything 2 get a luxurious life. Infact in office also many of da female employees of mayank had offered him 2 share bed with them so dat dey wud get the position of secretary of him. But mayank was a gentleman. He is man whom every girl desire 2 b wid.

"kya nupur ne kabhi nahi socha hoga mere bare me?"asked himself.

"kya soch raha hai mayank????!!!....wo kyu sochegi tere bare me??!! OR TU KYU SOCH RAHA HAI USKE BAARE ME ITNA????!!!!!!!!!" he ws shockd at his thinking once agn.

"us se dur reh mayank" he warned himself.

"Itne bhi bure nahi hai sir..." thought nupur.. "haan gussa bas thoda jyaada aata hai,baki to koi kharabi nahi hai..."

"WAT!!! Wat did it hot just now????!! Baki toh koi kharabi nahi hai??" nupur apne dulhe k bare me analysation kar rahi hai kya,jo tu ye sab soch rahi hai? Pagal ho jayegi kisi din"

"us sadu boss se jitna dur rahegi, utni sukhi rahegi samjhi" thot nupur.

"chal chal chal...sochna band n kaam shuru" thinking dis she went 2 kitchen 2 make sumthing 4 herself.

Next day she reached early. She was doing work in her cabin wich samrat had given 2 her. After some time mayank arrives. He sees her working in her cabin.

" jab mere under me thi tab to kabhi itni jaldi office nahi aayi...or aaj to mere se bhi pehle aa gayi...!lagta samrat se kuch jyaada hi achi frndship ho gai hai." He thot.

He furiously goes 2 his cabin n starts working. After sometime samrat also arrives. While going 2 his cabin he goes 2 his cabin he goes 2 nup's cabin wich was in his way.

" good morning nupur." He wished her gudmrng with a sweet smile.

"good morning sir." She also wished him with a very cute expression.

" don't call me sir...cal me samrat or sam,whatever u like.."

"ok sir....ooops samJ i wil cal u Sam"

"Dats better"

"achcha kal wali file lekar mere cabin me aana"

Samrat den goes 2 his cabin humming some song n twirling keys of his car.

Meanwhile mayank was watching dis 4m his cabin... he was so much angry with samrat,bt don't know y????

"samrat aajkal kuch jyada hi flirt karne laga hai.....!!! ye bhi koi baat hai ki apne employees ko apna naam lene ki permission de do...! bevkoof hai..!!" he smirked.

Dis was daily routine... now daily nupur arrives earlier dan both mayank n samrat.. daily hi mayank ko gussa aata hai..par kuch kehta nahi hai... daily samrat comes n wish nupur goodmrng....after dat dey chat 4 smtime n den goes 2 deir work....mayank roz hi ye dekhta hai n apne aap ko kosta hai ki kyu nupur ko samrat ki secretary bana diya...??? n den in da evng daily hi mayank nupur ko ghar pe drop karta hai jus cos samrat na nupur ko drop kare.... but he feels good 4 dis i.e. 2 drop ko ghar pe drop karne me... bt dey both don't talk much...jus formal talks n daily thinks "mujhse baat karne me pata nahi kya tax lagta hai jo ye mujhse baat nahi karti...samrat se to has has k baat karti hai"...n daily mayank nupur k haath ki bani coffee pita hai....

Nupur also feels gr8 with mayank..daily she waits 4 mayank 2 leave office...jab tak mayank ka kaam over nahi hota,she doesn't leaves...koi na koi kaam nikall leti hai...fir jab tak mayu kaam karta hai tab tak nupur bhi kaam karti hai....n den both leave office 2gether....n daily she thinks "evng me kitna achcha behave karte hai,par din me pata nahi kya ho jaata hai,1dum sadu."

Both were not able 2 define deir feelings.. n dey also don't wanted 2...

One day since morning nupur was nt feeling well...infact she was not well...due 2 exertion her health deteriorated....dat day wen samrat wished her gudmrng,she didn't reciprocate so cheerfully.....n in da evng she didn't invited mayank 4 coffee...mayank felt smthing lost 4m his daily routine...

"aaj coffee nahi pilaogi nupur" he asked so sweetly..

"oh !! i forgot sir...aayiye na andar..mai aapke liye abhi lati hu.." she replied lost smwhere.

Den she made coffee..bt aaj mayank ko pasand nahi aati bt he didn't say anything...

So dis was my next update...hope u all liked it...do comment cos ur each comment means a lot 2 me....

Thank u

Amrita

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
amazing update amrita plz update soon

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Amrita
nice part.
thoda chota tha, but ok...............very nice.
love mayank's thought for nups.
how dare u forgot to pm me😕😭😡
next time se pm zarur karna, nahi to 😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update Amrita!
plz continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
This was sweet...Mayank kept getting more jealous....i likes the tax waali line...mujhse baat karne mein kya tax jaata hai uska...lols.....

Poor thing Nupur....health issues....now i hope Mayank realises this and takes care of her😳 cant wait for that😃

Awesome dear....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww the update was so cute........
mayur actions were really cute!
do cont soon!
n thnx for d pm!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Amrita
it was very beautiful update
hahahaha poor mayank - he is getting jealous abt sanus frship
hmmmmmmm both r feeling something special 4 each other.
good going amrita
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
awsum amrita jus prfect! 😉 I wish arti cum bck onscreen 2gether once again!!

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