U r my Life Nupur..!!updt,pt8=pg22

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Hey frnzz.... dis is a simple story with some mayur moments wich i wanted 2 c in da show bt CVs dint show us...dis story has different backdrop...simple light story with nothing new in dat bt some good mayur moments(as per meJ)

1st part is jus introduction 2 da settings of da story.... dis story wil be short..nt 2 shortJ.....i wil try 2 update as many parts as possible dis week....cos i wl b back 2 my hostel next week i.e. on 19th....after dat i wil b inactive 4 a considerable period.... bt wil complete my story in dat time n wil publish as soon as i get back 2 home......

I hope u all like it.....after reading da story pls comment dat if i shud continue or nt....if the comments r +ve den i wl publish da next parts wich i hve already wriiten... so guys do read n comment.n yes i thing i wanted 2 tell is dat my English is vry poor,so my vocab n language is vry simple in da storyJ

So dis is my story... :)

A girl was walking up da stairs wid sum files in her hand...she was walking fast 2wards her boss's cabin...she knew dat if she doesnt reach in time den she cud be fired 4m da job...dis had happened many times b4 bt she manages 2 reach on time in his cabin.. bt 1 thing she don't understand dat y her boss is so rude wid her only....he is so sweet 2wards other employees bt y her only???

She does her work wid utter sincerity,she has neva dne anything wrong in her job...she was other employees fav...she is d best colleague dat any1 wud hve,bst employee dat ny employer wud want bt y her boss is so pissed off her...dis is d nly question dat she is nt able 2 answer...

2day she is vry sure dat she wud hve 2 leave d job bcos she is late already....bt den also she is trying 2 b in time...

As she enters his cabin she saw his angry face luking 2wards her wid bloodshot eyes...she was scared...

"Welcum!! Welcum!! Miss nupur bhushan....thank u 4 cuming dear..!!!" boss said wid sarcasm.

"Sorry sir...!!pls dnt fire me..nxt time dis wont happen...pls sir,sorry sir..!!" nupur said scared.

"Arey..!! y u saying sorry....?? i shud b sorry na..keeping u as my employee was my biggest mistake.!" Boss said.

"Rehne do na mayank kya tum bhi is bechaari employee ko scold kar rahe ho?? Dekho na kitni dari hui hai" said sum1 sitting on da sofa on side of d room..

"Arey Samrat tum employees ko nahi jaante...jyaada sir pe chadao to inke bhaav bahut badh jaate hai.." said mayank luking 2wards nupur

Meanwhile she ws standing luking 2wards d floor..

Samrat signalises mayank 2 calm down...

After controlling himself mayank started talking..

"Nupur ye hai tumhare new boss...Mr. Samrat Shergill.."said mayank

"Gudmrng Sir" nupur bend down to greet samrat n he reciprocated her wish with a smile.

"well nupur aaj se hum saath kaam kareinge n i hope ki tum apni responsibilities ko achchi tarah naibhaogi" samrat said

"don't worry sir...i wl try my best"

"Ok nupur! U cn go nw n yaah,send 2 cups of coffee 4 us" said mayank interrupting dem

"Ok Sir! Thank u"

She lefts

"U knw samrat,dis girl has immense capability bt she doesn't utilises it 2 her fullest n i wanna bring out dat 4m her"

"achca to isiliye tum us se itni rudely baat kar rahe the,so dat she get more scared"samrat smirked

"Oh no no!! Its nt lyk dat yaar....i jus don't wanna show her i care 4 her"mayank said sincerely

"Ahem..Ahem..!! sirf care hi hai yaa or kuch bhi hai"samrat winked at him.

"u r nuts samrat!! Har 1 cheez ko complicate karte ho."mayank felt embarrassed.

"Nywayz let me shw u ur cabin"mayank takes samrat with him.

"Wow..!! cabin to achcha hai...mujhe lagta hai mai yaha kaam se jyaada aaram hi karunga."samrat says while sitting on da chair.

"Hmm...!! ok sam i hve 2 leave nw...meet u later.!! U cn get further details 4m ur secretary nupur...she wil xplain it 2 u" mayank said while leaving 4m dere..

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"Come in" mayank said as he heard the knock on his door.

"Arey y u bringing coffee?? Don't u hve any work 2 do"mayank said angrily 2 nupur as she brought coffee.

"sir wo mujhe peon mila nahi to maine socha ki mai hi le jaau..bas iske baad mai apne work pe hi concentrate karungi.

"ok..keep a cup here n gve 1 in samrat's cabin" mayank said softly.

"ok sir"

"come in" samrat said

"sir coffee" said nupur wid tray of coffee.

She kept coffee n was about 2 leave bt sam stopped her.

"sit nupur"

She sits.

"so nupur tell me abt ur qualifications"asked samrat.

"sir i hve dne my graduation in commerce n postgraduation in marketing n i hve been working here since 1 year as a secretary to mayank sir n 4m 2day urs" she said smiling.

"hmm...!! so everyday since 1yr u r getting scoldings 4m mayank" he said smiling mischeviously.

"yaah sir..i mean more often." She understud dat he is joking.

Den dey started talking sme informal talks. Soon after she was free wid him,n was talking like a frnd.dey were laughing,joking n kidding.Actually samrat is a kind of happy go lucky man. He doesn't take much tension of his work. His funda of life is "jab tak zindagi hai usko has k jiyo n sabko hasao n maze karo, God is dere 2 take care of u n ur work". He is jus opposite of mayank.

He was very much impressed with nupur. He cme 2 knw abt her skills,he came 2 knw how much she is talented..her dedication,her sincerity n nupur was impressed by his behaviour,he was such a wonderful person...soon dey became vry good frnzz...

After abt an hour mayank was passing by samrat's cabin. He saw nupur n sam talking. Dey were talking so freely like dey met after ages,like dey r best frnzz...samrat was cracking a joke and nupur was laughing her heart out loud.. he felt sm thing..dnt knw bt he dint like her talking with samrat like this. He din t like deir closeness. He dint understand how 2 react...he just left from there fuming in anger.

"ok sir i shud leave nw. Otherwise if mayank sir c me talking n nt doing ny work,he wil fire me" said nupur.

"ok dear! As u wish(winks)...n yaah send me da malhotra industries files as soon as possible..i shud get acquainted wid dat 2." Said sam smiling.

He saw nupur retreating figure n smiles at her innocence.

At evening evry1 has left 4m office. Only mayur n sam r dere in office...sam was dictating sumthng 2 nupur n mayu was working in his cabin. After sometime mayu took his coat 4m da chair n left his cabin to leave 4m da office, n while he ws passing by sam's cabin he saw SaNu working. He sneaked into his cabin n asked sam dat wen wl he leave. Sam said dat jus in 15mins or half an hour..mayank felt strong urge 2 stay back in da office n leave wen both leave..he felt 2 possessive 4 nups..its nt like dat he don't trust sam or anything like dat bt he dint like deir intimacy. So he said dat he 2 forgot sumthng 2 complete,nw hw wl complete dat n den wl leave...

After abt 20 mins.

"hey mayank! M leaving..wen wil u?"asked sam.

"jus now...achcha did nupur leave?" asked mayank.

"yaah she is leaving nw.!" Said sam.

"ok" mayu said.

In da parking, sayank were standing besides deir cars n were abt 2 leave wen nups came out of da office. She was gng alone.

So dis was my part1....i hope dat u all wil like it....pls ppl do comment here...silent readers,pls press the LIKE tab....

Thank u

AMRITA

Index
part 1 = page 1
part 2 = page 4
part 3 = page 6
part 4 = page 8
part 5=page 10
part 6=page 15
part7=page 17
part8 = page 22
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hazra66 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey wow..
amazing concept...
i love this ff....
pls continue soon..\
its realy interesting....
keepp it up....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Amrita
OMG it was a wonderful start
i loved each n every bit of it
its really very interesting dear.
u describe the whole things beautifully
mayanks possessiveness abt nupur, his anger, sanus scene everything was perfect
i want to read next part asap
plz plz do cont it.

i m sure u will get more response for this ff
dont worry just keep it up and plz post next part soon
and add me to ur pm list


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey the concept is really gud........
i really liked it........do cont soon!
plz do pm me wen u update!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww amrita awesome story yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updtae sooon


thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hay amrita the story was awesome👏
do cont soon👍🏼
~4m another amrita😉~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice start dear😃

Liking the jealous Mayank😆😆

Continue soon and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow very nice, possesive mayank....
plzz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept!
would love to read it
continue soon
nd plz add me to ur pm list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amrita plz update next part soon.
i m waiting for ur update.

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