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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -moona-

OMG......Both Parts Are Fantastic..

Love them...
And Finally after long time i updated Amrita DI...
And Loved mayank sudden Confession...
and By God Mayank is very possesive...
Even in case of Samrat...😳
And Eagerly waiting for the next Part Di...
Contiue soon....
and Dnt take long break Di

Hey Thanks Moona....😃
m glad dat u liked deir confessionEmbarrassed
wil update soon Moona....
n haan Happy Birthday dear...!!😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

aw.......so sweet di...kya confession tha.....loved it.......

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

loved it!

thnx fr dpm...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

superb update dear!

loved their confession 😳
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: valiyah27

Finally confessed...................awesome update....................beautifully written..................cont soon n plsss pm me.......................!!!

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Originally posted by: aancchal

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

it'a amazing FF dear the last 2 parts were mind-blowing add me ur pm list plzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

So frnds m back agn with another part... i know that its a short part bt cnt help it cos of time....sorry....😳i hope dat u wil all like it...pls have a look n do comment as dey mean a lot 2 me....

So here is the another part....

n before dat i wud like 2 wish my frnd belated happy birthday...HAPPY BIRTHDAY MOONA😳😳....dis part is for u dear😊
part 8---

She just nodded her head n suddenly hugged mayank. N she was crying out of happiness.

"I love u Sir" she said crying.

Mayank wid his fingers lifts her head by chin.

"nupur now m ur boyfriend, u cn call me mayank....tumhaara haq hai ye.." n smiles gently.

Nupur feels shy n agn lowers her head...

After a day dey return to Mumbai...both were very happy....nupur was very excited to tell all dis to samrat...after returning back dey had taken rest 4 a day n 4m next both were joining the office agn.

Nupur was very happy 2day..she was humming a song n dats khuda jaane...samrat notices thatn thought to tease her...

"kya baat hai,koi aaj bahut khush hai...gaana shaana gaya jaa raha hai" he says in tesing tone.

nupur understands dat he is teasing..so she felt shy..bt 4m inside she was very eager to tell all dis to samrat n cnt resist telling...so she blurts out evry thing...

"haan sam aaj mai bahut khush hu.."

"to kya apne bhai ko nahi batayegi ki khush hai tu...huhh!!"

"u know sam,mayank proposed me n..."

"n wat nupur,wat did u say"sam was so excited.

"n i said YES...." n she agn felt shy n lowers her eyes...

"oye hoye...!!! ab finally tum dono saath ho...aaj m also very happy..." n he hugs her.

N dey share a very warm hug....samrat was very much happy 4 nupur...he really cares 4 her a lot....

"ahem ahem..!!!...bhai behen ka pyaar ho gaya ho to kya mera no aa sakta hai??" mayank coughs fakely standing at the cabin's door n smiles.

"achcha ji...bhai k saamne hi behen se flirt..huhhh...!! shaadi k pehle nahi chalega ye sab JIJAJI" samrat tease him wid xtra effort on the word JIJAJI.....

"oh ok saale sahib....agar aapki permission ho to kya mai nupur se baat kar sakta hu..."

"ummmm.......ok....!! jao tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge ki kitna achcha saala mila tumhe..."

"ok nupur...ab mai chalta hu....baad me aaunga....tab tak tum zara nipta lo jijaji k saath.." sam says 2 nupur n winks...

Saying dis leaves....

Mayank came forward towards nupur...nupur feels shy...she lowers her eyes n plays wid her dupatta...

Mayank smiles seeing her nervous.....he comes 2 her and takes her1 hand n slips a diamond ring into the ring finger.. nupur sees at it amazed...n she den rests her head on his chest....

"nupur"

"hmmmm"

"i want 2 say something 2 u"

"kya??"

"will u marry me n be mine forever??" he asks her with such love dat nupur's all doubt abt the relationship got cleard...she doubted dat wil mayank agree 2 marry at such early stage,as she thot that he wil need some time regarding marriage... bt now she felt content n she was sooo happy 2 day...

She was just luking at him in surprise....

"i guess u need sometime nupur...never mind i wil wait 4 dat..." he smiled n starts leaving the cabin.

"YES...YES mayank i want to marry u,so that i wil only have all rights on u" she said n winked...

Mayank was soo happy hearing that he just takes her into a tight hug...n he kisses her on her forehead...

"waise tum mjhe itne surprisingly kyu dekh rahi thi"

"woh maine socha tha ki aapko shayad time chahiye hoga is relationship ko aage le jaane k liye...n i thot that u r nt prepared 4 marriage n dint xpect dat u wil propose me 4 it.."

He cups her face seeing her innocence...

"dekho nupur,jis din maine apni dil ki baat tumse kahi thi usi din maine tumhe puri tarike se apna maan liya tha,so isme doubt ki to koi baat hi nahi hoti....."

"hmmm"

"so chalo i shud leave now....warna office me sab kaheinge ki mayank Sharma ko pyaar k aage kuch dikh hi nahi raha...n especially wo saala..." he hints 2wards Sam..

"achcha tumne abhi se SAmrat ko ulta seedha bolna chalu kar diya.."

"Arey kyu ab saale ko saala bhi na kahu..?"

Nupur understands n shies...

"achcha ab mai seriously jata hu,kyuki shaadi ki preparations bhi to karni hai n mere ghar pe to koi hai bhi nahi so sab kaam mujhe akele hi karna padega..."

"or mai nupur ki taraf se hu..uski shaadi ki responsibility meri..." said samrat 4m behind...

Hearing dis nupur was so happy. She thot dat in dis small amount of time how much have God have given 2 her... a loving n caring brother n life partner... she thanked God silently.

"ok saale sahib.permission granted.."

"oye Mr. JIJU mujhe apni behen ki shadi karane k liye kisi ki permission ki jarurat nahi hai samjhe na.."

N all the three laughs. After dat mayank takes deir leave n goes 2 his cabin n samrat n nupur complete deir work.....

So frnds dis was the next part......

Waiting 4 the comments... n silent readers do press the like tab...😳

Amrita😊

Edited by RatiArTi - 14 years ago

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