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Posted: 14 years ago

Hiiii my dear frnds........hw r u all????

So m updating next part 2day i mean now....so here my nxt part goes....

Pehle i wud like 2 thanks all the people who clicked on LIKE tab.....

.n i think last part was not gud as i hve nt received comments much...if u donot want me 2 continue dis FF den pls tell me 2 discontinue it.

so here is the next part

In the mirror he saw a goddess clad in red off shoulder dress of full length with a matching necklace n matching ear rings n bracelet n her sea like wavy hairs were left open.

He was jus mesmerised bythe scene in front of him..... he was jus ogling at her....

And on the other nupur was also shocked 2 c mayank i mean she daily sees him n daily he luk nt less dan a handsum hunk bt 2day he was in party attire....he was luking different....he was wearing red colored shirt same as of nupur's dress color wid grey shiny tie n black pants (i don't know wat wud the combination wl luk like. U guys imagine according 2 u.) his hairs were perfectly gelled....

Nupur's heart skipped a beat seeing mayank in such an attire.....

Both were just lost in the moment wen suddenly mayank's cell rang......

Dey both got out of the trance n mayank answered the call "hello"

"hello sir gud evng...sir wo party start ho gayi hai n sab aapka hi wait kar rahe hai"

"ok...hum aate hai"

After putting the phone he said to nupur "chalo nupur sab hamara wait karrahe hai"

Nupur was hesitant now also because afterall dey r acting 2 b husband n wife... mayank jus assured her by his eyes dat everything wud b alrite.....

After dat dey stepped 2wards 2wards the party wid hand n hand....as dey came down whole party attention was shifted 2 dem....dey were luking like made 4 each other....all were praising dem. By hearing comments nups was getting red as if she was really his wife n seeing dat condition of nupur mayank was smiling 2 himself.

"congratulations Mr. N Mrs. Sharma 4 the marriage" 1 of the business partner said

"Oh!! Thank u Mr. Oberoi" said mayank smilingly

"aap ne to chup chap shaadi kar li or pure industry me kisi ko khabar hi nahi di"

"woo...actually itni jaldi me sab kuch hua ki mujhe khud hi samajh nahi aaya"

"par aise nahi chalega Mr. Sharma...shaadi bhi kar li or koi party bhi nahi di... 1 party to banti hi hai"

"haan bilkul bilkul...." said mayank a bit hesitatingly n luking 2wards nupur... n she jus smiled n so mayank felt relaxed.

After sometime after having food Nupz felt 2 go 2 washroom. All dis time MayUr were behaving dat dey were really husband n wife...she said mayank dat she is gng 2 washroom n left 4m dere. Wen nupur was leaving a drunken person was staring n he followed her 2 teh washrum. Wen she came out he started 2 misbehave wid her. He was keeping his hands on her bare shoulder. Suddenly his hand severely stabbed by a fork n it started bleeding....wen he turned back he saw mayank whose eyes were full in rage n were crimson red.

Nupur also saw mayank flaring wid anger. She was crying. Mayank severely beated dat man so much dat he was near 2 death. Den nupur stopped him 4m killing him. Dey both left the party n reached the hotel....

"tumhe samjhta nahi hai kya ki koi tumhaara picha kar raha hai"mayank shouted on nupur after reaching .

"k..kya?"nupz scared.

"kya kya...u shud be aware abt ur surroundings..pata hai mai kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha"

"oh...sorry sir..aapko meri wajah se pareshaani hui." Said nupz hurt.

"offo nupur!! Tum hamesha har cheez ko galat hi leti ho"

"haan hamesha mai hi galat hoti hu...mera jeena hi galat hai.."said nupur very angrily.

"tum pagal ho gai ho nupur....mai to sirf pareshaan ho gaya tha kyuki......"he said keeping his hands tightly on her shoulders.

"kyu...kyuki...???"asked nupur.

"kyuki....I LOVE U NUPUR" said mayank instantly.

"kyaa???" nupz shocked.

Mayank realised wat he said just now. Now he knew dat its not possible 2 hide his feelings 4 long n he sud confess now.

He kept his 1 hand on her cheeks n slightly caressing them.

"haan..I love u....n i want 2 give u all the rights on me, of me n abt me...i want u 2 be the claimer of my body,soul n my life forever...i want 2 to be wid me forever n also i want all the rights on u,i want u 2 be mine n mine only....I WANT U 2 BE MY LIFE NUPUR....!!!"

"So wil u be mine forever till eternity??" asked mayank softly forwarding his hands 2 nupur.

Nupur was so shocked wid sudden confession of mayank. She was soooooo happy inside mayank. Her dream come true....

She just nodded her head n suddenly hugged mayank. N she was crying out of happiness.

"I love u Sir" she said crying.

So frnds dis was the next part......

Waiting 4 the comments...

Amrita😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely plz cont sooooooooooon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
perfect update dear..it was sipmy mindblwoing..
and dear...dont even think of dsicontinuing this ff...............pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was the most perfect one....lovely part ..a perfect confesiion "haan..I love u....n i want 2 give u all the rights on me, of me n abt me...i want u 2 be the claimer of my body,soul n my life forever...i want 2 to be wid me forever n also i want all the rights on u,i want u 2 be mine n mine only....I WANT U 2 BE MY LIFE NUPUR....!!!"
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zohul

lovely plz cont sooooooooooon :)

thank u dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

perfect update dear..it was sipmy mindblwoing..

and dear...dont even think of dsicontinuing this ff...............pls

thanks yaar..ur comments make me happy😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mahakmev

i lovedddddddddddddd it great

thanks😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

it was the most perfect one....lovely part ..a perfect confesiion "haan..I love u....n i want 2 give u all the rights on me, of me n abt me...i want u 2 be the claimer of my body,soul n my life forever...i want 2 to be wid me forever n also i want all the rights on u,i want u 2 be mine n mine only....I WANT U 2 BE MY LIFE NUPUR....!!!"

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thanks Fizaa for liking it 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Beautiful update
loved Mayur
i loved it..plzzz continue soon🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Amrita
after long time u updated this ff
the update was very nice
mayur confession was wonderful
loved each n every word said by maynk
good going amrtia
plz dont end this ff and do cont soon
take care

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