Maneet SS- Jab Mila Tu NOTE Pg. 98 3/20 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update.... & good story line...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG...
Loved it...
Maan's a driver??
Hehehe...lol
Awesome update
Lol..geet thought he could be a uncle..lol
Loved the update
Pls pls pls Continue soon
cant wait for the next one..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good start.pm me toooooooooooooQUOTE=desigirl_18]Part 1

It had been an hour of jogging in the park for Geet. She liked the feel of the light white snowflakes on her hands and face. The whiteness around her gave her a feeling of peace and she loved feeling the purity of nature on her skin.

However, the flurries had started to get heavier and snow was now blanketing the ground. She had stepped out of the house without a hat and scarf feeling that she really didn't need them, but now with the hood of her sweatshirt constantly being flown off by the wind her ears were becoming red and her dark brown hair with red streaks was untamed and all over her face.

She had jogged across a long distance and now was at the other end of the park, meaning 7-8 blocks from her residence hall. As she stepped out from the park onto the sidewalk her sneakers wouldn't stick to the now very slippery ground. She held onto a nearby post to gain back her balance.

While on other days she would just walk/jog back to her apartment, that seemed near to impossible in this weather, she decided that she should just take a Taxi. She had kept a sufficient amount of money in her sweatpants in case of emergencies. Thank God for that she thought!

She pulled out her hand, signaling for a yellow colored cab.

One pulled up and the relentless wind continued blowing her hair across her face and she entered the taxi not giving one look at the driver.

She sat down on the black leather seats in the back and said "Brittany Residence Hall, East 10th street please"..

She proceeded to fix up her quite disheveled appearance, after clearing away her hair from her face she looked up and saw the back of the driver.

It appeared that he was wearing a warm winter jacket, a hat and a gray scarf wrapped tightly around himself. And yet she saw he was shivering.

There was a glass wall between them with only a little window from which he could speak to her.

Geet noticed that it was rather freezing inside the taxi, and her teeth starting chattering as well.

Geet: Excuse me, but is there some problem with the heat in your cab?

The driver looked at her from his rearview mirror, but she still couldn't see his face.

Driver: Yes I am really sorry about that, actually had to go to the autoshop to get it fixed but the weather kind of ruined my plans.

Geet: Oh, it's okay I should be fine, my place isn't too far anyway she said trying to feign a smile. She was freezing and put her hands across her chest and continued to chatter her teeth.

The traffic was jammed and it was taking Geet forever to get to her apartment. It had already been 15 minutes and the damn traffic just wasn't moving. Everyone seemed to be driving extra slow because the roads had become very slippery. Geet's hands were all turning red from the cold.

The driver was noticing Geet for a while from his rearview mirror.

Driver: Seems you are very uncomfortable, he started opening up some drawers from the front and pulled out something. It was a red pashmina shawl.

He passed it between the little window, "maybe this will help you", he said.

Geet was surprised: Wow you just happen to be carrying shawls around in your taxi? She said, grabbing the shawl which seemed as warm as a blanket inside the freezing taxi and she wrapped it around herself.

Driver: Well you see people always happen to leave things behind in taxis and I just keep them here just in case they may come back for them.

Geet: Well I am glad that someone left this here, she laughed, her shivering now easing up.

Geet's eyes caught the digital reading in the front that read the fee, and OMG it just kept going up, because of all the minutes they were idle due to the heavy traffic. The price had already reached $5.50 and she wasn't sure she would have enough money to pay, oh no what would she do she thought? She told her mind to stay calm. , she was smart. maybe she could think up an excuse

Geet: Uh?before she could say anything, the driver said something that surprised her.

Driver: Aap Indian hain?

Geet: Ji?!! Her eyes rounded. Did he just talk to her in hindi?

Driver: Mainay pucha aap Indian hai?

Geet: Jee, jee, uh aapko kaisay pata chala? She was rather shocked, with her fair skin and streaked hair it was rather easy for her to pass as an American girl, and very few people recognized that she was Indian.

They continued to drive almost reaching her place now.

Driver: Apno ko toh nazrein lakho ki bheer mein bhi pechan leti hain?he said in a very husky voice. His voice was rather appealing and soft on the ears.

Geet: Ji?

Driver: Matlab pardes mein ab apne des ke hi log apnay hotay hai na?

She smiled.

Geet: Aap kafi achi baatein karthay hai.

She so wanted to see his face and tried to switch her seating in such a way so maybe just maybe she could get one look at him.

Then her eyes fell on the digital meter again, it read $14.25.

Geet: Oh shoot, I only have $10 she thought in her head.

Just then the driver turned into her street and she got ready to get off. She still hadn't seen his face and closed her eyes saying a little prayer, hoping that maybe she would get to see him, he seemed like a very sweet person and at the same time wondering how he would react to the fact that she didn't have enough money to pay.

She slipped the money from the little window between the glass and his hand went to grab it, for a second it looked like their hands would touch, but he grabbed the $10 bill from the other side not touching her hands.

Geet just waited for a second, wondering when he would say something about her payment being short.

But surprisingly he didn't and then he turned?and she saw his eyes?..a bluish green color. The rest of his face she couldn't see, his nose down was covered by that gray scarf. But those eyes, they had something about them a spark, a twinkle, they were deep like the sea and she felt she could stare into them forever. She was lost and didn't blink for a good minute.

And then he said something: Don't worry about it!

Geet: Huh? She said coming out of her reverie, and then realized he was referring to the money. Oh, thank u soo much, I am so sorry, I really owe you one.

Driver: Yup you do, he said as she opened the door to step out, aur waisay bhi ab toh mulakatein hoti rehengi, he winked.

Geet wondered at what he just said.

Geet: Lekin lekin, main aapko pechanun ki kaisay?? She said as his cab drove away.

She held out her hand and was just turning to walk into the building when she looked back towards the cab, and there they were those same pair of eyes staring back at her, lingering on her face, and for some reason that brought a smile to her lips.

She didn't know who he was, how old he was, for all she knew he could be a damn uncle's age, yea a very sweet uncle, she laughed at her silly thoughts. But for some reason she wanted to know him, she felt a connection to him..well maybe it was because of what he said about apnay des ke log being apnay and all?his eyes looked into hers, and how she wished that she could see the rest of his face, his expressions?.she sighed and turned back, what had gotten into her, going after a cab driver, sheesh, she slapped herself on the side of her head and walked into her residence hall.

Little did she know that as she went inside, the taxi driver smirked for he too was lost in thoughts of her and her silky brown hair and beautiful hazel eyes....as the two were lost in thoughts of each other, the sky cleared and the flurries stopped only to be replaced by the bright yellow sun, seemed like that ray of hope and happiness had finally entered Geet's life!!

Precap: Jaane pechane se yeh ajnabi ;)


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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww great story ..........so Maan is a driver.....Geet hasn't seen him yet.....hey plz add me to your PM list......would love to readt this story further..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for all the comments guys!!!😊

Part 2:

Geet entered her apartment with a smile on her face. She took the elevator to the 7th floor and entered her suite, which she shared with her two friends, Trishna and Sharon.

They all had their own rooms but shared a common living room and kitchen. As Geet opened the door to the suite, Trishna was just coming out of the bathroom. Trishna was tall with a model like figure and shoulder length black curly hair. She was wearing a white tank top and black pajamas. Even though she had just woken up, her hair was all in place and she also had light makeup on.

Trishna: Geet tu na kabhi nahi sudhregi, itnay freezing weather mein bhi nikal gayi jogging ke liye.

Geet: Tu bhi nahi sudhregi, itni freezing mein bhi tank pehni hui hai. You know the heating is terrible at this place, we soo need to complain. Aur haan what's the need for so much makeup early in the morning?

Trishna: Come on Geet, I love this tank, makes me look so hot, she said pulling her hair to a side and doing a modeling pose.

Geet just rolled her eyes.

Trishna attended NYU's Tisch School of Arts as an undergraduate. She was into acting and all. Geet and Sharon were both in the College of Arts and Science. Geet had met her at an orientation and they both decided to be suitemates.

Geet: Looking hot is not gonna make you feel hot stupid, she said to Trishna nudging her shoulder.

Aur waisay bhi it's not like Vikram is here to see how hot you look, and me and Sharon could care less.

Trishna: Oh please call my sweetu Vicky ok. And don't you know him, he can pop up anytime. Plus it's a Sunday today and he's not very busy.

Geet didn't want to get started because Trishna could go on and on about her boyfriend. She kept blabbing and Geet had to resist putting her fingers in her ears.

Geet: Ok ok Trish, I get ya, Vicky is the best bf in the world and you love him sooo much, now let me go and have breakfast.

She had taken off her sneakers and was now heading to the kitchen. She felt the shawl around her and was reminded of that sweet taxi driver. A dazed smile was plastered on her face as she entered the kitchen tightly hugging the shawl around her.

Sharon: Geet'Geet?

Geet: Huh..Geet said looking up at Sharon, who had her hair up in a bun, her glasses were on the tip of her nose, and she was wearing a pink pajama suit.
Unlike Trishna, Sharon was really into her studies and not the type to care much about looks. She was Christian and South Indian. Before she met Geet and Trishna she barely spoke any Hindi. But now after watching all Bollywood movies possible it seemed like she knew just as much Hindi as the other two, if not more, and her craze for Bollywood sometimes really worked against Trish and Geet, like now.

Sharon moved up towards Geet putting the spatula she was using to fry the omelette down.

Sharon: Oh wow she said feeling the shawl'Lal dupatta and all huh? She said winking. Geet you never wear such things so why today? She said while feeling the texture of the shawl.

Geet looked down and noticed it was no ordinary pashmina shawl, it had red beads all around shaped into hearts.

Geet: It's not a lal dupatta, it's a shawl.

Sharon: I know that! Duh?! Tere paas aya kaisay?

Trish walked in too saying "Haan Geet I noticed it too, you never had it before."

Geet: Woh'Geet closed her eyes remembering the taxi driver and his eyes'.oh those eyes'she came out of her reverie..Woh I was in a freezing taxi and the driver was Indian so he gave it to me. Some passenger left it before.

Sharon: Hmmm, interesting, she said examining it, doesn't seem old or anything, looks perfectly new and smells new too, she said bringing it to her nose.

Trish: OMG Sharon!!! Stop obsessing over a damn shawl now! And Geet Ahhh tell me more about the sweetu, was he hot?!!!!!

Geet: Oh come on Trish, just stop it!! You know I don't like talking about these things. And to answer your question, I only saw his eyes'.they were a blue green color.

Sharon: OMG OMG Hrithik Roshan eyes Ahhh.

Trish: Geet! Tunay mujhsay kuch nahi seekha? Eyes pe hi atak gayi'us kay biceps kaisay thay, Abs kaisay thay?

Geet: OMG Trish, for godsakes how on Earth am I supposed to see his Abs!? This is the freakin winter and hello I wasn't at the beach that some guy would be getting openly nanga puthanga. I was in a taxi and sheesh I don't even know how old the guy was!

Trish: Oh my sweet innocent Geet. There are other ways to see a guy's Abs. She winked, kyun Sharon? They both laughed and hi-fived each other.

Geet: You guys are the limit! Besharam #1 and 2!!! Puke..she said heading off to her room.

Trish called after her: Don't worry tera time bhi aaeyga!

Geet just rolled hers. I need to study so am off. I haven't forgotten that we have finals this week.

Geet spent a good portion of the afternoon studying quietly in her room. Then it was time for lunch and Geet came out of her room.

Geet: Hey Trish, Sharon I am heading over to Starbucks for some coffee, you wanna join me?

Trish came out all dressed up with high-heeled black boot and a nice sweater top.

Trish: Sorry babes I got a date with Vicky. He just got off from work.

Geet: disappointed. Fine ditch me like that she pouted.

Trish laughed and hugged Geet and left.

Geet: Have fun.

Trish: You know I will. She winked.

Geet: shaking her head. Oh God! This girl is impossible.

Geet: Sharon'you wanna come and grab a coffee,

Sharon came out of her room hands laden with books and fixing up her falling glasses. Ahh actually Geet I am heading over to the library to study with Jai. I promised him we would study together.

Geet: Fine guess it's me on my own then.

Geet left the house with a review book in her hand. She wrapped the shawl around herself. Then thought why am I still wearing this shawl. She then reasoned that "Ahh Geet stop thinking so much you wore it because it looks nice and is matching ur clothes too, yeah"..so she headed off. The sun was out now and it wasn't as cold. She walked down a few blocks to Starbucks.

She ordered her coffee which came out to $4.25 and looked around for a place to sit. There was only one empty seat.

A young guy with nicely gelled black hair was sitting at a corner table for two. He had his laptop in front of him so she couldn't see his face.

It was the only empty seat and she decided to walk over and ask for it.

Geet: Excuse me, is anyone sitting here? she asked.

The guy put down the screen to his laptop and looked directly at her. And again Geet saw those very same blue green eyes that had been haunting her mind since the morning but this time they were behind frameless glasses.

His face was very handsome otherwise too. He was wearing a black suit and dress pants and a dark navy blue tie on top of a light blue dress shirt. He smiled at her and Geet felt weak in the knees. OMG it was the most perfect smile ever.

Guy: No not at all please have a seat. Studying for finals I believe? He said looking over at her review book.

Geet: Yes.

Guy:Hmm yea, studying at NYU is not a joke.

Geet who was yet to get over his eyes, now noticed his voice. OMG his voice sounds so familiar too she thought.

Geet put down her coffee on the table. Why did everything about this man remind her of the taxi driver?

She decided to go to the bathroom and wash her face, she was just imagining too much.

Her review book and coffee was kept on the table and she excused herself. In the bathroom she fought with herself but his eyes and voice are so familiar. I know those eyes and can't be mistaken. Maybe he was wearing contacts! Contacts and glasses on top..really now Geet? Ugh she decided to just calm herself. Whatever she was just gonna get up and leave the place without looking at him.

Maybe her mind was just hallucinating after all that studying, the coffee should help she thought.

She went back to the table and the guy wasn't there and so wasn't her coffee.

Geet: OMG, damn chor kahin ka!! Ran away with my coffee. Then she noticed a little napkin folded neatly on the table.

She opened it up, it said '" I told you you owed me one, exactly $4.25 for that coffee 😊, MSK and below that was written his number.

OMG Geet let out a gasp'.so he was the taxi driver. Then Geet thought back...OMG that is how he knew I went to NYU, he dropped me to the residence hall himself. She looked down at the napkin! Nice way to get back your money mister, very clever, she smiled. But this guy was mysterious indeed''..

Precap: To meet or not to meet, that is the question?

Part 3


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Edited by desigirl_18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RES
wow awesome
🤣nanga pathugna!!!!
besharam #1 and 2 remind of of someone! :P😲
and wow fatti awesomeness!!!
yay tune update kiya!
never expected the coffee thing and the NUMBER in the end!!
wow!!



Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ooo very interestin n diferent ss
add me to ur pm list pls n update sooon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was fab meeting
Maan knew it was her but Geet was confused
Loved the way he got it 😉
Liked the trios convo
Tri is shameless n sha is also gng in that process😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey continue, u hv done a good job .....congo

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