Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: anuvenuch
the way you write, always amazes me. awesome concotion of present and past always connects the story beautifully.you r an amazing writer. could feel the pain of geet .awesome update.story is going very interesting.

Thanks dearie for appreciating my work...

I'm humbled😳 glad you are liking the narration and intermingling of the past and present😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: zaara2212
loved the update...

Feel sorry for both Maan and Geet, what happened that Geet left Maan, will they ever meet

Thanks a ton Zaara😃

they will meet and the rest assured😆

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: holyangel
i liked the update but loved the flashback part... its so happening... 😆 ... i like Anu shararat n all... 😉

thanks a ton dearie...

I know Anu is my favourite too😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: esha143
Yaar 44o volts....???Are u kidding me 😲???ye kis kaam ka hai...yaha hum baat kar rahe hai THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA ki....yaad hai na..?toh kam se kam 10,000voilts toh lagenge hi...ab current ke maamle mein kanjoosi chod de aur de daal ek aisa hi zor ka jhatka...par jor se haa...dheere se degi toh iss arrogant n attitude bhare aadmi ke dimaag mein kuch nahi ghusega 😡.....ek scene dekh li aur chala gay waha se ki Geet ne usse dhoka de diya....ghadha kahi ka....usse toh aur bhi jyaada volts ki jaroorath hai dimaag thikaane laane ke liye......

Esha sorry sorry... galti ho gayi... agreed 10000 volt ka toh kam se kam banta hai! 440 ka toh yeh ainve hi jhaad ke chala jayega... bewakoof kahin ka! Ek baar toh Anu ke lines pe soch where is her parents but no he has to sulk and drown in his own sorrows!

Just imagine... 10000 volt ka zhatka and Maan's hair standing all Einstein style😆 sorry no offense Einstein fans😉😆 but wouldn't that be a sight? i m already visualizing😆

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

Me too imagining that now...rofl 🤣

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#826

Esha... hush dadi Ma will run away with Nakul if she sees her pota like that... weak hearted woman you know😆

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#827

Hmm...par tere story mein toh Nakul hai hi nahi....fir..??😆

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#828

hmm... good point... i can develop a parallel track here by introducing Nakul to be Arjun's grandfather... and then... tadaa tadaaa 😆

Now imagine... Dadi and Nakul... on Kyun aage peeche dolte ho bhavron ki tarah... from Golmaal 1😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#829

OMG 😲😲....tu bhi na Soniya....pls aisa mat karna....ab tak jo tracks hai voh kaafi hai humaari neend udaane keliye.....Nakul aur Arjun ka daada....oh god...tu paagal ho gayi hai...lagtha hai voh 440 volts jo Maan ke kaam nahi aayenge voh tujhe lage hai 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: esha143
OMG 😲😲....tu bhi na Soniya....pls aisa mat karna....ab tak jo tracks hai voh kaafi hai humaari neend udaane keliye.....Nakul aur Arjun ka daada....oh god...tu paagal ho gayi hai...lagtha hai voh 440 volts jo Maan ke kaam nahi aayenge voh tujhe lage hai 😆

Ha ha ha... 440 volt ka jhatka mujhe? 😆

arre haven't you heard the mool mantra in advertising... "Think Out of the Box!" wohi kar rahi hu... socho agar main CV team main hoti toh Arjun-Annie nahi Dadi- Dada ki kahani roll out karti...

Savitrii... Swamiii... Savitriii... *hug* and then *thud* out of happiness... meet in heaven to come back in next janam... as Raj and Simram... ddlj yaad hai🤣

Main sach main pagal ho gayi hu😳