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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Roopali😃
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Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Superb part..... loved it

Thanks dearie... glad you enjoyed😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Looks like I'm late...I got my lappy back in time to catch ur next update but now became late in commenting on the previous one...anyways abhi latest update ki baari hai 😆......its a pleasant one....though the present track hasn't made much of a progress from its sad aura....I liked all the flashbacks....and I want to see something along those lines happening between Maan n Geet in the present too...I know its a long way to be there but yaar pls jaldi karo na....kab tak inn dono ko aise tadpaavogi alag karkr.....poor Pammi maasi is so sad....at least consider her prayers 😆.....do something that makes Maan doubt that what he saw is not the actual truth..... plsssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssssssssss.....ab itne pyaar se maang rahi hu jaldi aisi update post karde...yeah I know it might not be the immediate next one but try to be soon......😃

The comments for the previous part will follow in sometime today......😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe poor geet she's trapped in her ugly past but her family are helping her to get out of it and good to know anu still has faith in her and is determined to find out what happened and awe the past brij is a jerk and poor geets mum and dad and the party scene was cute when geet entered and oh arjun was the guy that saved her and awe maans reaction when he found out that she hid that from him well this part is significant to the present anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Looks like I'm late...I got my lappy back in time to catch ur next update but now became late in commenting on the previous one...anyways abhi latest update ki baari hai 😆......its a pleasant one....though the present track hasn't made much of a progress from its sad aura....I liked all the flashbacks....and I want to see something along those lines happening between Maan n Geet in the present too...I know its a long way to be there but yaar pls jaldi karo na....kab tak inn dono ko aise tadpaavogi alag karkr.....poor Pammi maasi is so sad....at least consider her prayers 😆.....do something that makes Maan doubt that what he saw is not the actual truth..... plsssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssssssssss.....ab itne pyaar se maang rahi hu jaldi aisi update post karde...yeah I know it might not be the immediate next one but try to be soon......😃

The comments for the previous part will follow in sometime today......😆

yes you are late😡.... my turn to use the red gusse wala emoticons😆 Chal finally you have your lappy back... good good somewhere toh progress is happening😆
Yaar needed to build up on the present na before i start taking things forward... wohi toh kar rahi hu.. explaining their state of mind in a month's time... it will progress now😃... prayers are always answered bachcha and so would Pammi Masi's....
itna pyar se maanga hai toh main mana kaise karu? but Maan will get a 440 volt ka jhatka one day😆... i will try to be soon...
and would wait for the due comments😆
Edited by euphoric - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
the way you write, always amazes me. awesome concotion of present and past always connects the story beautifully.you r an amazing writer. could feel the pain of geet .awesome update.story is going very interesting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...

Feel sorry for both Maan and Geet, what happened that Geet left Maan, will they ever meet
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe poor geet she's trapped in her ugly past but her family are helping her to get out of it and good to know anu still has faith in her and is determined to find out what happened and awe the past brij is a jerk and poor geets mum and dad and the party scene was cute when geet entered and oh arjun was the guy that saved her and awe maans reaction when he found out that she hid that from him well this part is significant to the present anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

Thanks a ton Shamima😳
hmm she's coping to come out of the mess but then ugly circumstances leaves nasty scars na...
glad that you enjoyed the update...
the party is still on so there are more scenes to roll out there... hope you enjoy them
will try to post the update soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
i liked the update but loved the flashback part... its so happening... 😆 ... i like Anu shararat n all... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaar 44o volts....???Are u kidding me 😲???ye kis kaam ka hai...yaha hum baat kar rahe hai THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA ki....yaad hai na..?toh kam se kam 10,000voilts toh lagenge hi...ab current ke maamle mein kanjoosi chod de aur de daal ek aisa hi zor ka jhatka...par jor se haa...dheere se degi toh iss arrogant n attitude bhare aadmi ke dimaag mein kuch nahi ghusega 😡.....ek scene dekh li aur chala gay waha se ki Geet ne usse dhoka de diya....ghadha kahi ka....usse toh aur bhi jyaada volts ki jaroorath hai dimaag thikaane laane ke liye......
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