Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 50

Originally posted by: .muskaan

Ok.... do I need to say I could not stop laughing...?🤣

When I read the Bauji wala line I misread it as buaji instead of bauji n I was like now where did this bua come from😕...n being true to my stupid self I stopped reading and started linking this imaginary Bua with the mystery n I spent the next 2-3 minutes thinking about it n then I realised I should read further n then let my imagination go wild but but but when I read it again it hit me it was bauji not buaji... my damn reading...

Loved geet's jhassi ki rani avtar😳😃... she threw her sandal at him... yay just the right thing to do... in fact such people should be made to wander around the city wearing sandals as a garland and with black paint all over their faces and they should be bare feet n the road should not be metalled n once that is done they should be locked in a tiny cabin 10 times smaller than a normal elevater in which they cant even move their fingers and they should be starved to death wait a minute they deserve good company after their cheap deeds so for that some 100 mice should also be locked with them.

So like back to the update *got carried away*😆

Maan held her hand under the table😳... she should have pinched him with her nails😆 *hope she has long nails I mean girls like long nails I like them n I love nail paints in fact I'm crazy about them... just yesterday mom threw two of my nail paints coz she did not like the colours😔... come on dark grey n black are good colours but since I'm very stubborn I went to shop today n got 5 other nail paints😃... this is the reason I don't like bribing Mehak😆... I prefer making better use of money😆* god... I deviated from the topic yet again...

So once again like back to the update... 😆

Poor Geet... Maan is so mean instead of praising her he was teasing her😡... she did just the best thing by flattening his tyre😈... but you know what she should have also spilled water all over his seat😈... he so deserved it... yes I agree I am biased😆... I love Geet more... 😆

Had hai yaar ek tyre bhi khud nahi change kiya jaata... yeh kaam to even I can do... that is a diff thing I took quite some time learning from dad well not coz its tough but I wanted to sleep so I was half sleepy when papa made me lift that goddamn tyre n believe me its not that light neither is it easy to roll ... these are the things which make me thank god papa is in Rajasthan now finally I don't have to do weird things for him... 😆

His confession was beautiful😳😍... but I still love Geet more😆

One question before I sleep... ummm... care to tell me why are all FF writers obsessed with cliff-hangers🤔... you know what... u going to write so you know what happens next... it is us your sincere readers who suffer... 😭... but i like cliff- hangers😆 they make me curious... wait did i just write i like cliff hangers... no i dont pata laga with all this mystery already eating my brains you start giving the worse cliff hangers as well... so i dont like cliff hangers😆 why is she scared🤔

btw... why were u up so late in the night😡😆

Good nyt Di🤗

Originally posted by: pisces_pisces

heyyyy...

first time commenting on ur ff...it is very good....must say u are an amazing writer...

it makes the reader feel as a part of the story....u noe real life scenario...kudos to ur writing skills...👏

its just that as much as i want to enjoy the flashback(and i do too) but somewhere it is always at the bak of my mind that they are not together... 😭

waiting for ur udates all the time 😊

Originally posted by: puth

awesome update sonia.......loved the confession

Originally posted by: maanujaanu

AWESUM AMAZING UPDATE

DO CONTINUE SOON

Originally posted by: euphoric

Ms. Smarty Pants😆... you were waiting for update so that you may post your guess... aur mujh pe gussa kar rahi thi😡... you had reached the dead-end... admit it😆

you misread Bauji to Buaji😎... Babu get ur eyes checked😆

Yes... me a feminist type too... can't stand such pervos.... I liked ur idea of locking them with 100 mice... would be nice *rubbing hands deviously* he he ha ha haha 😆... count me in whenever u plan this against someone.... two can make a better company

I know me a little stuborn too but have a very bad habit of drifting off subject... dark grey shade would look nice... i also like black but never bought it for myself... my mom never would have allowed me to wear that and its not cool in office culture at all😆... must say for pocket money sake my bro has been very generous and he's a spend-thrift as his sister so i always would eat up on his share too😉😆

Ha ha ha... i m a nikkama when it comes to manual labour... how do u expect me making my hero do that... agar tyre badalte toh romance kab karte... the trip was ending honey😆....

Hmm cliff hangers interesting point... well as i said... CVs se seekha hai😆 kya karu yaar... need to ensure tht u would come back😉😆

Ab daant na band kar... luv ya loads🤗

Nooooooooooooooooooooo😡😆... I have not reached the dead end... just your update CONFUSED me... 😕

Let's see... the guess goes like this... 😆

Brij wants geet's property and hence forces her to marry him * which he fails to do* so there is some khandani property funda may be... may b when geet was born they made her parents sign some sort of papers which read something like geet will have to marry brij when she attains the age of 22... all i'm saying is there is a property angle to all the mystery... 😃

Till date all the FF's i've read have shown Vicky as a positive character so i'll make him negative in my guess.😆.. he sees geet... instant attaraction... wants her all for him... so creates a misunderstanding bet MG *which i'm yet to guess* but he does not know abt brij boy n once he gets to know abt him... wo patli gali se bhag gaya... he's a coward like dev you see....😆

This shows the condition of the youth of india... they prefer romancing instead of doing something productive... *but am I complaining... nah😆... who likes to do labour... so its fine😃

Btw your FF is already very gripping it doesn't need cliff hangers... now I want to strangle the cvz😡😆... look they are teaching u wrong stuff... kya hoga iss desh ka *sighs*

Main kab death rahi hum😳... i'm just eating footage u see😉... I am an innocent bachhi after all meri itni himmat I scold u... 😳

Originally posted by: Morning Star

a FF gorgeous like Geet.

dearest amazing writer, wanted to notify u this earlier but couldnt, u might have heard others better appraisals n comments so add my weak words too. i was so hooked up with ur this tremendous FF that i ddnt know i had already passed midnight and almost sunrise time( 4 :30 am) (from the first to part 11) and if that was not less, the entire day when i was free i just re-read ur FF with few other FFs whch i simply adore them. the way u articulate ur words is simply mind blowing. I feel like my literature would be enriched. although it is top to bottom an excellent work but I copied my favorite lines just to treasure the memory of this FF.( wont use it here but else where may be lol) i learnt more about the nature of Men ,lol, for i am a lil bit more closer to the character of Geet u have portrayed here.

wishing to get more from ur blessed treasure everyday