Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 5

Originally posted by: namita25

well I just love the way you are penning down this story line.....would love to know what made geet leave maan.........n who was she getting married to......
waiting for the next part...

Thanks Namita... I'm glad that you enjoyed the narration 😃

Geet left Maan?? I think we are yet to discover that... will try and update soon

Sonia

Originally posted by: sneha0504

it is very interesting.. could you please add me to your pm list thankyou😊

Thanks Sneha... have added you in the PM list

Sonia

Originally posted by: sweet coco

OMG! It's so sad, but so good....can't wait to read the next part!!!

Thanks for appreciation sweet coco😃... i know i felt sad for them too while writing 😕

Sonia

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Wow that was very well put and loved the intense emotions towards then end and I wonder what happened and why geet is getting married to someone else and loved how you put the characterisation in this chapter so we undertand maans family anyways great update and continue soon 😊

Thanks Shamima... So glad that you enjoyed 😃

yes i wanted to draw a proper sketch for characters before i delve further into the story... was afraid though that it may get a too lengthy for everyone to read... so good to know you enjoyed 😛

Sonia

Originally posted by: payal956

Woah! Nice start :)

Thanks Payal... Hope you enjoy the upcoming parts too

Sonia

Originally posted by: sakadafi

Wow...you have penned out both the characters, their feelings so beautifully. Eager to learn what the story behind them is. Please do add me to your PM list.

Thanks sakadafi... I'm humbled 😃

Added you to the list

Sonia

Originally posted by: solicitude

Wow!!!!

Please add me to ur pm list!

Thanks solicitude... added you to the pm list 😃

Sonia

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

add me to ur pm list!

Thanks luvabbybaby... so glad that you liked it... added you to the list 😃

Sonia

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

beautifully written I can't wait to read more!👏

Thanks dear 😃

Sonia