Falling In Love With You- A Sajan FF - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: aashizin

hey dear superb promo gosh can't wait for sajan's first meet and thanks for pm do continue soon

thanks aashi will continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: --Aditi--

nyc concept..

thanks for the pm...
plz cont soon..
sry for late reply!!
will read the update and comment on it!

thanks aditi for liking it🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: --Aditi--

nice promo...plz cont soon..

thanks for the pm

thanks for liking it🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

heyyyy deepti
amzinggggg concept
n superbbbbbb promo
cont sooon
n
thnx 4 d pm

thanks richa will continue soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: chilluppp

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee ff dear

sorry for being late
loved it yar
really amazng character sketch
lovely concept
n promo
omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
have nothinf to say
do continue sooooooooooon plzzzzzzzzzz

thanx sara...will continue soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

sry for d late rpy...but luved d concept n promo...waiting 4 ur pm.thnx a lot...plz do continue d ff even after der marriage.....................want a lot of der after marriage lovey-dovey scenes.........

thanx sam for liking it..will sure do that😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sg-muskaan

hey Depi.!!
awwww another SG ff!!!😛Congoooooooooooo
superbbbbbbb concept n CS!!!👍🏼
i loved all d characters..Awsome yaar
coming 2 promo..fabbbbbbbbbbb
no doubt dear u r such a good writer
will b waiting for d first part!!
do con soon!!!!
thanx 4 d pm...🤗
luv
Muskaan



thanks muski
will continue soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
hi guys....this is chapter 1....this part is dedicated to ria, manji, nishi, anu
hope u guys like it

CHAPTER 1

Somewhere…

A voice: gunnu mujhe ek kiss chahiye…..

Another Voice: ammu nahi …ab nahi koi dekhlega

V1: yaha par koi nahi…pleas doo na…

V2: (blushes) ok lelo…par jaldi haa..

he comes closer n holds her along the waist…n was abt to kiss her ….n suddenly a alarm starts ringing….the guy wakes up suddenly….

V1:oye ye alarm bhi na hamesha wrong time par bajta….kitna acha sapna tha…..gunu ko kiss karraha tha……par ye alarm beech mein aagaya……….hayyeeee…….gunu kitna beautiful lag rahi thi….finally aaj ka din aagaya jiska mein besabri se intezar karraha tha…….aaj se shaadi ki tayyaria shuru hone wali hai…ab kuch hi dino mein gunu teri patni banjaayegi….

Yes guys this none other than our Armaan Malik….n he is been dreaming abt our gunjan…..

Suddenly a phone starts ringing…..Armaan comes out of his reverie…n picks up the phone absentmindedly till thinking of his gunu-))

A: hello…kon bolraha hai?(dreamily)

S: abbey mein bol raha hoon..samrat

A: hi Sammy…kya baat hai itni subah subah….tu theek haina…koi problem?...kisi Julie ke bare mein puchna hai tere ko????..need some advice from love guru?????

S: abbey tu bhool gaya??

A: kya??

S: mujhe airport se pickup karni thi..

A(shocked): OH SHIT…mein bhool gaya-((

S: KYA tujhe mein nahi chodunga…..tu bhul gaya…(angry)

A: chill samrat mein aarahu hoon bas paanch minute…bbye

S: accident karna chatha hai kya????...slowly aa ..ill wait

A: ok dude..bbye

They cut the call….armaan immediately changes himself n takes his car keys…n drives to the airport

Meanwhile in another mansion….in the hall…a group of women are surrounded around a girl…giving her opinions abt wat to wear that day…..

A girl: yeh wala(a pale yellow one)

G: nahi nahi….yeh bahut zyada simple….Samrat ko who pasand nahi hoga

Another girl: Gunjan yeh samrat kaun hai?? Aur kya who itna important hai ki uske liye tum itna sajne wali ho??

Yes guys the girl's name is gunjan…who was asking for everyone's opinion

G: who actually Bhabhi ka bhai hai aur ammu ka best friend….pehli baar hamare parivar se milne wale hai….woh bhai ke shaadi mein nahi aasaka kyunki who kaam mein busy tha…tho aaj pehli baar aane wala hai…..aur who bahut specific hai…kyunki who US se haina…isliye bhabhi chahthi ki job hi pehnu best pehnu thaaki who impress hojaye humse aur shaadi tak hamare saath rahe….warna woh ammu ke saath chala jayega

A girl: oh

A women passes by them n asks gunjan

W: gun tumne select karliya kya pehenna hai?

G: abhi tak nahi bhabhi mein bahut confused hoon ki kya pehnu….mujhe pata nahi ki apke bhai ko kya pasand aayega???

Yes guys the other person is nupur

N: oho gunjan….kitna time lagayegi…..ab Samu ata hi hoga….

G: ek idea...apke bhai ko kaunsi colour pasand hai???

N: hmmm white

G: wow same choice mujhe bhi yeh colour bahut pasand hai….mujhe mil gaya mujhe kya pehenna hai….

N: kya

Gunjan takes a lehenga out of the heap….n shows it to nupur…..

G: yeh kaise rahega

N: wow gun nice choice…yeh samrat ko bahut pasand aayega……pata hai samrat ko white kitna pasand hai ki aaj bhi dudh peeta hai….aur pata hai gun

G(stops her in the middle)..pata hai bhabhi…aap bahut baar kehchuki hain ki Samrat waisa hain….woh pehenta hai….ki meine byheart karliya aapki Samrat ki choices ko…ab mein jau change karne??

N: haa jaana

N gunjan leaves from there…..nupur is very happy

N's POV:

yehi to main chahthi hoon gun ki tujhe samrat pasand aajaye aur armaan ko bhool jaye….mujhe pata hai samu ko tum pasand aaogi…..tum dono ek dusre ke liye perfect ho…..aaj se yehi hoga mera maksat tum dono ko milwana taaki tum usse bhool jao

(I know guys ur curious y nupur doesn't want ammy's n gun's marriage…reason baad mein bataungi..suspence..till then njoy the romance)

Lets go to the airport now

A guy is waiting with luggage in hand outside the airport…

Suddenly Armaan comes n pats him on the back….. n he turns…guys he is none other than Samrat

A: hi dude…sorry yaar for coming late

S: no problem ammy

They Both hug…

S: Congratatulations dude…teri shaadi hone waali…hai

A: thanks yaar…thanks for coming….mujhe laga tu nahi aapayega as ur busy with ur work

S:yaar meri best bud ki shaadi hone waali hai..to kaise nahi aata…works come later

A: thanks dude… chal chalte

They both go towards the car n they sit n armaan starts driving the car

On the way

S:kahajaa rahe hai

A: nupsie ke ghar

S:wat nahi yaar…chalo na tumhare ghar chalte hai

A;strict instructions from nupsie ….sorry yaar I can't help u

S; yeh nupsie bhi na

A: tujhe problem kya hai waha rehne mein…

S: who kya haina….naye log hai…I feel uncomfortable

A; chill dude very nice family…ull sure like it

S:hmm ok

Meanwhile back in Sharma's Mansion…..

Gunjan comes out of the washroom waering the dress….sees herself in the mirror n starts blushing as she was thinking abt whole time whether samrat will like it or not

She was wearing this

"yeh mujhe kya hora hai….jab bhi uska naam leti sharmaane lagti hoon…tu bhi na chal sab tera intezaar karrarehe honge…"

She comes in the hall….comes near nupur

N(shocked n happy seeing her): hayye mein marjaawa kitni soni lagrahi hai…(samrat usse dekhkar hi pagal hojayega….)

G(smiles)Thanks Bhabi……Samrat aaya??

N: nahi…thodi der mein aata hi hoga…

G:ok… Bhabi mein kuch help kardu???

N: hana kyun nahi…yeh le..take this taali aur jakar garden so sajadena…tu hi bahut achi tarah sajati hai…..

G; thike bhabi

Gunjan takes the taali..n starts walking towards the main door….

Meanwhile…..

Samrat n Armaan have just entered the house…..

S: wow yaar…nupsie ka ghar bahut acha hai

A: sirf ghar hi nahi …log bhi bahut ache hai…bahut acha family hai…

S: sirf family achi hai…ya gunjan achi hai(says naughtily)

A(blushes): sam!!!!

S:oye hoye tu Sharma raha hai…..(laughs)….kuch to baat hai gunjan mein…

A(blushes again)…tu ek minute ruk….mein nupsie aur mayu ko leka aata hoon(runs away)

S:bhaag gaya saala….

On the other hand….gun is walking with the tray…talking to some one other side…she is so busy busy talking that she doesn't notice sam n that he is on her way..she still keeps on walking without luking….Sam is luking on some other side….suddenly they clash…..she is about to fall when sam saves her by holding her by the waist....seeing sam the talli slips from her hands n all the rose petals fall over them…..they have an eyelock…..

G's POV:

Thank god he saved me……..nice eyes…wow kitna handsome hai……he is soo hawt(blushes)……hayyyeeeeeee…kitna pyaara smile hai(seeing his smile)

S's POV

wow beautiful eyes(smiles seeing her blush)….soo beautiful…..i wish I could touch her…..

On the other side Nupur is smiling seeing this….

N's POV:

Mera kaam hogaya……un dono ki lovestory shuru hogayi…..guf job nupur

I know guys I left on a cliff hanger…par I had no choice im busy..im going to Saudi tomorrow..

Ill try to continue this soon

Do comment..Sory for any errors…..

Hope u like it

Luv ya

deepti

Edited by deepti_mohit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Nice.....hmmmm why does nupur want sajan??? awesome update sajan first meeting was awesome continue soon...!!!

-Amna
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiii deepti yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy u updated woohoooooooooo m so so happy now lol n thnx for dedicating it for me aww so sweet <3 anyways wowwwwwww wat an update so woww nups want sajan to fall in love dats y she telling gunji all sammy's likes n all wowwww n den hehehe ammy dream lovee da nicknames of ammy-gunji lol hehehe n den ammy-sammy talk loved it n den hayeeeeeeeeee sajan 1st meet wowwwwwwwwwww loveeeeeeeeee it do continue soon

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