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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1051

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG
I know its too early to ask for another update since you just updated yesterday and im sure you need time to think about the next part and write it down, but im still asking 😛 Can you update sooonn pleasee! Im dying to read the next part!

devu

I tried writing something today, but couldn't finish the part...And I'm packed now tomorrow, have loads to do bcoz I've an exam on Monday, so I guess next update will come only next weekend! Sorry!

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1052

Originally posted by: Dmg8594

I tried writing something today, but couldn't finish the part...And I'm packed now tomorrow, have loads to do bcoz I've an exam on Monday, so I guess next update will come only next weekend! Sorry!

NEXT WEEKEND :O Thats like YEARS away...lol

Oh man, lets hope i can wait that long, but again, exams and school comes first ;) So all the best for that girl, and try to surprise us with an update earliear if you can 😃

OR you can always post an incomplete part...for greedy readers like me 😳

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1053

I don't wanna post incomplete parts anymore! I feel guilty becoz I can't update very fast after posting an installment and plus it breaks the flow of the part...So I'll just put up the entire thing next weekend! 😳

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riddhima11

@riddhima11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1054

hey...

i do not have any words to describe my feelings right now...

you actually made me cry...

is this some joke armaan's playing on riddhima..

i feel sooooo bad for her..

n that last everything will change.. was sooo heartbreaking...

you have done a very good job.. you are such an awesome writer... everything you wrote was soo amzing...

in the jwellery shop.. i felt soo damn angry at the happenings.. n the beach thing was super duper good...

continue soon.. i will be waiting for the next part..

take care

-pari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1055

Originally posted by: Dmg8594
I don't wanna post incomplete parts anymore! I feel guilty becoz I can't update very fast after posting an installment and plus it breaks the flow of the part...So I'll just put up the entire thing next weekend! 😳

aw fine.... *grumbles* i'll wait....waise i like installments par if you really dont want it then fine............

when will weekend come??

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caprigurl

@caprigurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1056

The part was beautifully written yaar. So well worded and so emotional

But i must confess it made me soooo sad to read it :-( leaves a hollow feeling especially towards the end- this is too much for the girl, even if its half of her own making :/

But then thats wha the part was about so thats testimony to how well you've managed to bring out the depth of the situatuion

But abb happy kardo thoda saa toh :( i hate heartbreak parts where only one side knows abt it LOL i 'm a kid

Super eager to read what happens next.!

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sahitya87

@sahitya87

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1057

hey

I am ur silent reader im commenting 4 d first tym

that was an amazing part, no need to say ur an awesome writer 👏👏.

I read this FF again n again, its not tat i dont understand first tym, but it is relief to read

I think armaan is playing a game wid ridz n i thnk he is pulling d game too long

im really feeling very bad for ridzy yaar...😭

does he really cant sense ridz feelings r is he just pretending,....not able to gues😕

i think u need to introduce a new character in ridz life n make him jealous...as he is already so possesive about her😉...may be he will open up like tat

I cant really stop thinking wat is goin to happen next.....plz update soon 😊

All the best 4 ur xam

lol

sahitya

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Aditi

@Infinite_Flame

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1058

completely luved the part..👍🏼
sumwhere down the line ...hav a feelin dat dis r all the situations made up by arman n oders 2 mak her confess..
waitin 4 dem 2 get 2gether.. .😳
hop 2 catch d next update soon... .😊

-aditi