Fate has it all set-(MG) FF # 1 - Page 47

Created

Last reply

Replies

821

Views

414.7k

Users

81

Likes

5.7k

Frequent Posters

Firegurl thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
tooo good
fantastic
thnx 4 pm
SaJan-SaJan thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
ha..ha..
poor dev...
he learned it hard way never 2 mess wid geet n maan....
loved d update...
do cont soon..
thnx 4 d pm..
trishap thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
wen is the next update dear
smj1977.shruti thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
Part 40

Geet gave a saree to NT to wear,

NT was shocked the saree was too revealing,
Geet sighed, Di just go and wear it and take this jacket also, after drapping call me I will help you tuck the Pallu,
NT quite hesistantely took the saree,
mean while Geet also wore a similar saree,
NT called her and she tucked the saree and made NT's hair is such a way that from a distance both sisters look alike,
any one can confuse,
she then asked NT to wear the jacket, and herself marched in that saree,
NT paused, Geet you should also take a jacket the saare is far too revealing,
its ok di conviced Geet showing her the jacketI have it and will certainly wear it as and when needed you not worry
Maan just smiled at her eveil plans
Dev waited and waited
Geet send Maan and followed after a long 30 mins with Nt,
Maan started feeling sorry for Dev, but he could not do much before her sherni, he was helpless

Dev first saw them coming Geet very cunningly draped the jacket upside down, and Dev could not make out that the two were similarly dressed,

Maan had told the family that they will come till 12 at night, the 2 couples drove aimlessly,
Dev seated in front with Maan,
NT behind him and Geet behind Maan, not allowing Dev to have much view of NT,
Dev and NT held their hands covered by the seat lest they know that the other couple was very observant,
they settled on the river side caf, and chatted aimlessly Geet making sure to keep NT busy with her

After an hour Maan asked Dev to bring camera from the Car, then followed him saying I will take Geet with me you have some time with NT,

Dev was happy,
Maan went back and took NT with him saying he will show her some spots of nice view and take her pictures,
Geet complained of tiredness and refused to company them

When NT and Maan were well out of sight, she reversed her jacket and stood in such a way that Dev will only see her back when he arrives.

He heard Dev's steps and smiled cunningly
Dev just stopped inches away
She jerked her head as if in deep thought
D: NT atlast now I have you, how much I am dying to talk to you since your arrival
No response
D: NT you listening baby
She giggled, he was confused {fact Geet and NT have very similar voices, they are sisters after all}
D: NT turn around sweet heart let me see you, I did not even get a chance to properly see you
She stretched her arms in quite a sexy way
He was just stumped, NT never acted so seductively, may be she also was feeling as he was feeling
He went forward and hugged her from back
She turned around instantly
He was shocked, Bhabhi aap?
Yes main, aur yeh kya kar rahe the tum
Actually I thought, I mean, you just looked like, mmm, ummm
Looked like what?
I mean
NT, and who gave you the right to hug your fianc, look we are in India, here you are not allowed to hold even your fianc's hand which you did all the time in the car
Bhabhi, sorry (gloomy Dev)
What sorry? Hey cheer up you wanna hug her, its simply alright
Bhabhi!
Yes Devarji yes, but you should not hug your Bhabhi, you know this na,
He just rubbed his forehead
Maan came with NT, what's up
D: bro you said Bhabhi will go with you
M: oh, actually she was tired and NT said she's ok with going with me, and after all she is my saali
D: but bro
M: but what Dev, any thing wrong {Maan you are a good actor, you all the time knew this will happen still pretending, poor Dev}
G: no Maan, its quite late lets go, come Di
M: yes, Dev come let's go
NT sat on the back seat, Dev went to open the front door, Geet slipped in, devar ji you go sit with your fianc.
Dev on the 7th cloud, happy
G: waise mere Pair (feet) yahan hain
Dev bows down to touch them
G: bachche ki shaadi jaldi ho
Maan took a longer route at the back seat NT was initially hesitant,
but Geet took her hand and placed it in Dev's hand, and said Di courtship ke time jitna jor se haath pakroji utna hi Pati baad mein kaboo main rahega, NT blushed

M: and DW we will not see you twp love birds, you trust me, NT

NT just blushed more
M: hey Geet you never blushed, why?
G: I did not get enough time to practice blushing and Mr. if I were blushing and shy , then till today you won't have been even able to touch me, waise I am sure yeh dono shaadi ke baad bhi aise hi sharmate rahenge
After a long time Geet winked at Maan and said kuch karo in dono ka,
M: ok
He stopped the car and wnet out with Geet,
telling the couple to sit their and geet to NT and Maan to Dev, Kiss her, let him kiss you
and went saying will be back in 20 mins jo karna hai kar lo, aur karna zaroor, or else will regret forever for missing this chance, last chance

pls hit the like button if you like it
pls comment
pls bear with me if I did not got up to your expectations
leave you comments
part 41 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1556213/fate-has-it-all-set-mg-ff-1
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
mrk-1 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
this geet and maan are some thing yaar..loved it awsome oone
sweet cherry thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Loved da update
Do continue
It was amazing
SaJan-SaJan thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
omg... geet n her plans... superb..
finally maaneet left dev n NT alone...
maansee thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

ye sherni to lomari ka dimag rakhti hai. loved it.,....................

AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
aww geet is too naughty.
poor dev.
continue soon.
preethia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
wow kya bhaiya bhabhi hain.......................loved the update.......

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".