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Posted: 14 years ago

dear it ws very nice...lovd geet's attitude towards life...she doesnt cry bt lives happily for her son..n i really lovd it tht imran says maan - papa...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 n evn geet doesnt hv any prblm vth tht...dnt knw why she doesnt hv any prblm vth imran calling maan - papa??? bt i like it..n i m nw waiting eagerly for the next part...plz continue soon dear..

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Posted: 14 years ago

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue, we are waiting for the update

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Posted: 14 years ago
keyama....aur kitna intezaar karvaoogi....plz update....
Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh Gosh!!! no update yet! when r u updating gal?
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey keyama plzzzzz update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nw i m realising y d nam of dis ff is intezaar..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update........
plz pm me the next part soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago

yipeee...... party!!!🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago


*~Intezaar~*

part 15

Imran wakes up early looks at his mum. She was sleeping peacefully. He decided not to disturb her. He starts playing with some toy.

After 1 hour...
Geet slowly wakes up smiles at Imran.
Geet- beta... Ap mama ko ku nahi zagya?
Imr- ap .... Bohot.... Arem se so rahi thi.
GEET laughs and takes him on his lap. Let's go. It's time for you to brush your teeth.
Imr- ok mama.

Both gets ready and makes there way to the restaurant. Maan was already there waiting for them with breakfast.
Imr- pappa.... He runs in mans arm. Geet smiles.
Geet- good morning.
Imr- good morning pappa.
Maan- good morning beta. Maan gives him a bear hug and a kiss.

Maan loved him to bits. He was jut too sweet. Maan never let's Imran down. He shared a weird bond with him. Really surprising!
Geet- have you orders any breakfast?
She decided to break the happy moments between them.
Maan- I wasn't sure what exactly you fancied. I only knew imrans fab.
Geet- oh! So you have orders for you two and not me?
Maan nodes.
Geet gives him a disappointed look.
She walks off to order something for her.

After breakfast Geet and maan quickly clear out the problem. Then eventually plans a day out with Imran.
Imarn was delighted to see round the though park specially with his mamma and pappa. He was over exited. He couldn't stop laughing.
Geet was over joyed. Imran always staid quit. He hardly spoke. Geet looks at him in tears. Remembering Prem. She hides it. Imran was exactly like Prem. The way he spoke. The way he smiled. Geet didn't show him his Pappas photo yet. Specially as he is too young. She is waiting. At least when he is 10. Maybe he will understand more.
Geet had no future plan. She is only 24! '..(ty puth xxx)
Gauri and everyone was worried sick about geets state. She is too young to spend her life alone. But for now she needs to recover from prems memory.

Maan- Geet! Geet!
Geet snaps out of her Prems thought.
Maan- are you ok?
Geet nodes.
Maan- I ....
Geet- let's go. I am fine.
Geet smiles sadly and walks off holding imrans hand.
Maan looks at her. She never smiled after Prems death. Only time she smiled which also was a force... Was in front of Imran. That was necessary. He was a maamas boy. He loved his maama to bits. Geet never left anything for his upbringing. He had everything.
Imran- when I grow up I want to be like you pappa.
Maan smiles- you already are.

Maan smiles at him. Maan was a idol for him. He would even dresses up like him. With his small tuxedo. Or sometime his Jensen and top.
Geet laughs at him sometime. If she decides to change his style. He would moan.

The day went really well. Geet a usual kept her talk to minimal. Imran was weird in that way. He would hardly talk to his uncle and aunt! Or to be precise his cousin. But with maan... He wouldn't stop.

2 days have went well. Imrans day went extremely well. It made his day.

They are on there way back...

Maan- are you alright geet?
Geet- ha ku?
Maan- I never seen you smile.
Geet- that's because you have never seen me smile.
Maan felt Guilty for some reason.
Maan- Geet....
Geet- there are nothing to get worried about. I don't think I have any happiness stored in this lifetime.
Maan smiles sadly.
Geet- I must done something bad in my past life. She mocks her luck. No wonder I Am in this situation.
Maan- acea mat kaho Geet. Me bhi khi na khi is ki liye zamider hu.
Geet- don't say that. Ap galat samaj rahi ho.
Maan- me Kuch....
Geet- don't blame your self. It's my luck.
Maan- why don't you marry again geet.
Geet- no! I will never. Prem is part of my heart. I would never give this space to anyone. No one..... Meri zindgi seref uski haqe hi. Meh prem ki liye sari zindagi bhar intezaar kar salkti hu.... I am always his and will be his.

Geet looks out of the window. Far as her eyes goes she could only see Prem. Only Prem.... He have touched her soul. And Geet always wanted to be his. Forever.... Uski liye akrhi pal tak au intizaar Kari gi.... Akrhi pal tak.
A small tears dropped from he eyes. She was helpless.

Maan- you need to move on Geet.
Geet looked at maan. Confused. He him self couldn't move on. How could he expect her to move on. Specially knowing how much her and Prem was in love but for him it was one side love. He was willing to wait for her even knowing she will never love him. How could he expect her to move on.
Geet- ap batiye.... Have you ever managed to move out of Sammera?
Maan looks at her... She just made him feel her pain. Her anger, frustration... Those lonely moment that he goes through every second.
Maan- Geet.... He wasn't sure what to say. He was speechless. For those two days he have completely forgot sam. But now... His old pain just came back.
Geet- I knew you are the only one who could understand me. Per me kabhi .... I could never let anyone els take my Prems place. Never.

Imran was sleep in Maans arm.
Geet takes him as shiv came to pick them up from the airport.
Maan brings a gift out for Imraan.
Maan- he really wanted that.
Geet- thanks.
Shive takes Imran on his arm. Geet Gives maan a force smile and leaves with shiv.

Next day...

Maan staid in the bed. He didn't feel like doing anything. He was lost in Sammeras thought. Like something weird happening to him. Nowadays he hardly thought about her. he thought More about Imran. Some odd reason he always felt connected. Seeing Geet in this state he always blames him self. It's all because him. Blaming him self wont solve anything. Nothing.
Maan forces him self in to the gym. His life was in depression. His family through him out. Hardly anyone is there for him to talk. His mum and dad refuses to talk to him. He haven't spoken to them since geets marriage. They were in shock about her 2nd marriage and more shock when they hard Prem was dead.
Geet still sees his Dadi now and then. But maan never. Maan have to ask geet about dadimas health. She refused to even see his face.
He was hated by basically all of his family.

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Geet sat there thinking something. Her mind was blank. She wasn't sure what exactly was going through her mind. It was always like this. Her life just went through a strong two years ago and the effect was still there. Killing her slowly. She couldn't give up. She have to fight for the sake of her son. He was the only reason.

Her thought was suddenly distracted by a phone call. It's Dadima.

Geet- hello Dadima.
Dadi- beta... Do you remember you suppose to have dinner tonight with me.
Geet- ha Dadima. Intact Imran was really exited about this. I will be Tere on time.
Dadima- thanks beta.
Geet smiles and hangs up.

It's 7pm. Geet makes her way to the house.



next- maan geet & imran round dadimas house'


sorry for late updates' back to regular updates again :D

xxxloved all the comments pls pls pls do leave some ovely comemnts and of course the LIKE BUTTON


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update. But I feel really sorry for geet as she is too depressed. Try something like kuch na kaho where the kid takes abisheck as his father. I hope u like my idea.

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