MAYUR FF...The Lost Magic. - Page 37

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Posted: 14 years ago
ooh!!!!!!!!
wow !!!!!!!!
well this relation ship will get it's magic back with both mayur efforts
n beauty will be added with ur words .............
well done mehak ...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow mehak it ws too ood yr n nw m eagerly waitng for tomorrow😳
oh wow da way mayank tried to save deir relationship ws brilliant n now its nupur turn😉
loved it alot n good luck for ur next exam...👍🏼
simply mindblowing.......👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update hun mayu such a sweetheart 😍 eagrly waiting next part with mayur romantic roller coaster thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 10 & 11 were awesome. Will post a longer comment after the exams....😊
Hope ur exams went well and Good luck with ur upcoming exam!
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Part 10

Loved how u described Nupur (white flower, etc…)

"mayank couldn't refuse her innocent pouting.." – aww….so cute!

Nupur getting excited at the sight of McDonalds reminded me of my little cousin…lol

"M..dont worry..they will be like you.." – how sweet of Mayank.

"A man can give his wife the highest degree of regard, when he want's his children to be like her,. Men are very possessive about their children, and if they think they should be like his wife, then it means they consider their wife the best.." – I agree but a lot of men are not like Mayank.

"N..mayank, plz kisi aysi jaga chalety hain jahan bus dono hon." – I loved this … first both were disagreeing but then Mayank gave in and now Nupur, shows that they do understand each other but just needs some time.

PART 11

Glad to see that Nupur wasn't shy but poor Mayank's arm…lol


"M..well main ne socha k atmosphere meri psnd ka hia, tu khana tu tumhari psnd ka hona chaiye.." – aww…Nicely done, Mayank!!

FB about sensuous calls – LOL! I can just imagine Mayank's face.

Even though I understand Nupur's dilemma, she was kind of rude to Mayank, who had tried so hard to reduce the distance. Poor Mayank!! It was so sad to see Mayank hurt!

Mayank had bought her all 10 sarees? Man, he is so sweet and caring but he got hurt. But it was nice to see Nupur's changed attitude….wish Mayank had been awake to hear her apology.

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsesum re....
marr dala...😆
continue soon!😊

wish you luck for ur exams n do pray for me too!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I cant wait for tomorrow's update.. just loved today's update.. especially the Saree part
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww.... ths was the best part by far kinza!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!! 👏just awsome!!! it is sooo heart touching!!!!!!!!!1 loved it!!!!!!!! 😍
grl u have to continue soon PLZ!!!!!!!!! i m sooo looking farward to the nest part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing!! superb part!!!
loved it!!
waiting eagerly for next part..
cont soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
luved the whole part...
superb
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Mehak...cant wait for tomorrow's update...first i want to see Mayank's reaction when he wakes up to find Nupur snuggled into him...lols...will be a sight to see....sorry i mean it will be awesome to read...waise sight to see is also proper...considering you write so vividly that i can picture everything as i read😃

Update soon😃

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