MAYUR FF...The Lost Magic.

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Naina

@sumonetolub

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

yayyyy finally an update!......wow nupur finally making an effort as well 😊.......i thought after nupur came back from the shop with nothing in her hands becuz of the confusion, mayank would agree to go inside with her and help her choose a sari......nice update!......hope the next one comes soon.......naina

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

it was veryyyyyyy cuteeeee..... .sweettttttt & BEAUTIFUL

specially last part .........when nupur has an urge to mayank for time they can spend alone.

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@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

Lovely lovely so lovely and beautiful update

I really like the Mayank's complement to nupur

loved

Thanks for Pm and Best of luck for your exames

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Mehak 🤗

Part 8, 9, 10 just blew me away 🤪

Gosh, fabulous writing! The way the story is moving is just beyond amazing!

All the staring and the blushing and all those moments! ☺️

It was all just too wonderful <3

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Mahek it's so cute! 😍.
The update is fantastic as usual. Couldn't be any better!

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

loved the update Mehak. all the best for your exam.👍🏼.

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

amazing part yr please update soon

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#348

thank u so much guys..🤗..and my exams are going very well MashAllah..keep praying..🤗

PART 11

N..mayank kis asyi jag chalen jahan bus hum dono hon

Mayank could see the deep affection in her eyes, and realized that how spontaneous she had been with her advice, too spontaneous that she didn't even let her shyness to take over her, but most shockingly for mayank, that shyness was NOT taking over her, she was staring straight into his eyes, not blinking or lowering her eyes.

N..please

This time mayank cheeks started boiling hot, she was grabbing his arm, and digging her nails into his bare arm skin in midst of a hundred people.

But Mayank Sharma wasn't too easy to make nervous, he quickly shrugged off the blush and nervousness which was about to take over his mind, reminding him that he was a 27 years old adult, and the girl staring into his eyes, was no other than his lawfully wedded wife.

and as the blush went., he was able to notice the sweet innocence oozing out of her eyes..a smile broke his lips and he placed his hand on her hand which she was had almost half digged in his arm..He leaned forward, and managed to utter in a sensuous tone

M..sure?..

and she lowered her eyes, a shy smile breaking her lips, she left his arm and went outside the restraunt.

Thanks to the glass doors, mayank saw her going out and she stood beside the car, nervously playing with her bangles, and mayank smiled to himself.

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After almost 10 minutes mayank came out of McDonalds, holding two delivery packets.

N..yeh?..

mayank meanwhile opened the locks and nupur sat in, and mayank placed the packets on the back seat and himself sat on the drivers' seat..and he knew nupur was waiting for his answer..

M..well main ne socha k atmosphere meri psnd ka hia, tu khana tu tumhari psnd ka hona chaiye..

Another deep shyness, her cheeks growing pink and she could feel mayank's eyes frequently stealing glances of her.

She couldn't believe that she was being a flirt..GOSH!..she actually stared into his eyes and asked him to go somewhere alone. She was shying at her quick reaction.

She remembered, in the initial days of their marriage she used to call him in his office and talk to him in such a sensuous voice that poor mayank had to beg her to let him concentrate otherwise she will be the only sole bread - winner of the house, and she used to laugh her head off, preparing to call him in the next half and hour, but today she was feeling embarrassed.

Although in the past it was always deliberate and she loved having fun with mayank, but today it came natural, but the distance had grown so much that she had started feeling uncomfortable., weird thoughts started crossing her mind.

what if mayank took it the wrong way, what if he thought that she was talking about being physical, OH NO!..she was not, she just wanted to talk to him, she was cursing herself for being so stupid..But where was mayank going..to their home..no the path didn't lead to their home..some hotel..OH MAN!..where am i stuck, but wait a minute nupur..WHAT IS THE PROBLEM!..HE IS UR HUSBAND DAMMIT!..he has full right to be physical with u, what the hell is ur goddamn problem!..i don't know, her heart was shouting loudly to her mind..OMG!..she was so happy a moment before that mayank had given her the highest regard but now she was being so scared, she was being uncomfortable, OH GOD!..what if mayank comes forward to kiss her and she pushes him away..OH NO!..nothing can be worse, she just wasn't ready, things had started to soften and she made huge blunder, her fingers very nervously entangling in her duppatta..

as the road had very less traffic, mayank stole a glance at nupur and saw the nervous movements of her fingers, mayank sharma knew his wife, very very well, too well, that he could tell what her mind was speaking by just a movement of her hand, and he knew where her mind had gone,

M..GOD!..NUPUR BHUSHAN SHARMA CAN NEVER THINK STRAIGHT...sui hamesha ik hi jaga ja kar atkti hai..*he started laughing to himself*.

He had thought that they would go the beach, nupur loved beaches and he thought there would be no more beautiful place to spend some private time with his wife, gazing at her in the moonlight would no less than a bliss of heaven..

He was driving and nupur's movements become vigorous, and then mayank was struck by an idea, he took a sharp turn and the car turned at jet speed, making nupur fall on him completely..

she straightened in a moment and put on the seat belt which she had forgot in excitement and she saw mayank smirking..

THAT'S IT!..she thought..she was thinking right, mayank had interpreted her wrong, and she needed to stop him, she just wasn't ready for anything physical..

controlling her heart she managed to utter some words.

N..mayank

M..hmmm..

N..mujhe ghr jana hai

Mayank started smiling..

M..ku?..

She closed her eyes, she was getting irritated..

N..dekho mayank, plz, mujhe ghr jana hai..

Mayank wasn't shifting his concentration from the road

M.. first let me obey to ur command...hum dono akely main.

N..mayank plz mujhe ghr jana hai...

Mayank put breaks on the car, nupur was speaking in an agitated voice..

M..kia hua nupur?.

His soft voice was again weakning her, but this time her fear was too deep..

N..mayank main do din se office nahi gayi hon, aur mujhe kal jaldi jana hai, i have to review my files, samrat ne drafts k emails bhi bhejey hon gey, i need to check the,...i...i need to work..

WORK!..mayank thought he would face a nervous breakdown, the whole day long he had been trying to make things normal, and when he thought he was near everything, NUPUR NEEDS TO WORK!...his anger was reaching his eyes, making them fiercy red, may be it was his mistake, they had gone so far apart that nothing can bring them close, no attempt, he was just making a fool out of himself, she felt like kicking himself, he was the one who left his ego and wanted his relation to work, but she is just not interested , after everything what she cares about is WORK!...WOW!..

He was looking at her with boiling red eyes, and she was getting scared,then he changed the car gear with stiff hands and drove on jet speed to their home..nupur knew he was angry, but she was just so ..she herself didn't knew what she felt..why she did that..may be they had gone very far apart..

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Shy and hesitation are two sides of a coin, shyness is the beauty of a relation, but hesitation is the hurdle in a relation.
Listening to these two words may strike that they are synonyms, but they have a very minute differentiating line,and today nupur crossed that line between shyness and hesitation,
throwing their relation into a deep burrow..

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Mayank entered the home and nupur followed him, he went in the room , changed and quietly fell asleep, he just didn't wanted to talk to her, he felt very deeply rejected and hurt, he just closed his eyes, and tried focusing on tomorrow's hectic schedule.

Nupur entered the room, and saw him sleeping, a jolt of guilt struck her heart, but she shrugged it off, and went to change in her silk night suit, although he wasn't in a mood but she didn't wanted anymore rashes, she lied next to him, seeing him breathing calmy, all the events of today started flashing in her mind...it was a very beautiful day..mayank waking her up, his stares, their lunch shopping, Mcdonalds..wiat a minute..Mcdonalds, mayank had bought something and it was still in the car..

She sneaked out of her bed, wrapping a shawl around her, just in case some watchman might be there,

she went to take the food out otherwise it would rot, smelling badly..

She opened the car, and picked up the packets and called her watchmen to have them for dinner, the watchmen left with grateful smile, and she was about to close the door, when she saw huge box, lying on the base of the car, as if it was attempted to be hidden..

She picked up the box, and came in, she took it out of the shopping bag, and the box had the logo of the same sari house she went today..

She opened the box out of curiosity and it had saris!...the same saris she was admiring today..she picked up one and there was another one beneath, she took out all, they were total 10!..all 10 new exclusive designer sairs...the collections from which she couldn't decide from ...she looked at the ground, a bill was lying on the floor, may be fell from the shopping bag, she picked it up and as expected it signed

MAYANK SHARMA..

N..OMG..

her eyes filled with tears, and her soft hand caressing her dresses.all the events started flashing in her mind, the way he sent her to sneak into another shop and then he must have bought it...how could she forgot to notice....mayank had never given her an offer to shop more, especially after she had come spending a whole hour in a shop..he wanted to buy her a gift.. a surprise gift..

N..OMG..

she wanted to kill herself for being so insensitive towards the man who had so much unconditional love for her...she rushed to the room, mayank had slightly changed his posture..now he was facing the nupur's side of bed.his arm, under his head..she pulled away her shawl and lied next to mayank, tears were constancy brimming from her eyes as she moved bit more close, but with caution as not to wake him,..

she moved close, and slightly entangled her fingers in his hair, he now lied straight due to something he felt in his hair, nupur held his arm, and placed it around her shoulder and snuggled in his neck with tears falling and trickling down his neck..she softly planet a kiss on his bare shoulder, as he was wearing a vest.

N..i am sorry..

SHE placed her arm around his stomach, and although in sleep, mayank tightened his grip around her shoulders, nupur felt peace inside her sensing the tight grip..

N..i am sorry,

she raised her head, looking at mayank, he looked so adorable while sleeping, from no where a smile broke her lips, her tears were gone..and she kissed his neck ..

N..tomorrow ..get ready for romantic rollar coaster ride Mr. Sharma,

tears started brimming in her eyes again..

N..tum ne rishta bachaney ki koshish kar li hai mayank, now its my turn..,

She closed her eyes resting her head on his shoulder, she was completely packed in his arms, she welcomed sleep, as she had to manofy her husband tomorrow..

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#349

yipee first to comment.....

Not fair, u stopped it at such an interestin point... now u hav to make up for it by a romantic update... plz include some really sweet n cute/ cozy moments.... thx a lot for the pm... n do pm me wen u update next...

Edited by arjun_dez - 14 years ago