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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

-truly magical-
part 55

they both dossed off again, there was nothing much to do that early in the morning
out there in that weather.at around 10am his hand inveriably snaked around her.

she shurgged in her sleep, her hands responded around him in equal desire. he
passionately moved on top of her burring his head in the left side of neck, she tilted her head
slightly to right making more room for him, their fingers laced, he ugerged to kiss her
his body was completly resting on hers,
he was hard & probably almost lossing it with her closeness. maan snapped back & pulling away, pushing his hair back. she shivered with sudden coldness around, she cuddled up in a baby position still in her sleep with one of her hand laced with with his. he closed his eyes, shutting his desires, he could not believe he could lose his control like this he felt odd & guilty, knew she may just regret it if she realized what they just did. he slowly untangles his fingers & rushed out.
he cut few logs to set the fire...which was just depicting his fire within
he set the fire & sat their, he could only feel her, her touch, her scent
he made some tea & scanned the place around to divert his mind
she came out streching her arms up unware of her little act of passion. her waist line
was teasingly visible as she lifted her arms. he could not miss glancing at the white skin, which seemed so smooth & perfectly carved inevitably tempting. she looked at him & put her
hand dowm immediatly - aise kyun dehk rahe ho she aked promotly
maan looking into her eyes - kyun mujhe haq nahi
geet - hain..nahi
he narrowed his eyebrows questioning
geet - nahi ..mere matlab hain ..nahi actually mujhe nahi pata
maan gets annoyed - have ur tea
he mumered aab main usse dehk bhi nahi sakta
she knew he was upset. all her ex-crushes hated her for being so indifferent
but she was already beyound her personal limits with him, way beyound actually
she had her tea looking at him, he ignored her.
geet mumered sab teri wajah se stupid..kya zarorat thi unhe kuch kahne ki, tere mooh
bahut chalne laga hain, dehk abhi naraz hogaye na
he packs the stuffs & closes the tent, she quitely helped him
he takes the gun & tucks in his pants & takes the axe & walks towards the jungle
holding the back bag. she lifts packed tent & rolled sleeping bag
she walks behind him. he walks in cutting the plants in front making way for them
to walk. they look around for any way out & food. they find some wild fruits
not sure if it was ediable. they still move on not venturing deeper in the forest
walking along side the stream hoping to lead toward any civilization
he stopped near a tall tree kept the belongings down
he climbed the tree, she stood down & kept looking at him, how easily he did that
she kept watching his thigh muscle bunched & released every time he stepped further
her eyes travelled little up behind & watched the curve of his hips..she cursed her self to
look away..abhi to unhe touk rahi thi..tu kya kar rahi hain. all that physical
perfection was distracting especially since it looked really muscline now with
all sweat & worked up toned curves & his stirn look. she could barely blink.

maan reached on top most brach & tried to see if there was any thing near by
that was visible. for there bad ..or should muskan say good luck. nothing was
seen. he climbed down & she kept looking at him with her mouth open..totally drooling ..
not realizing he was standing right infront of her & watching her
he ignored & continued to walk - yanha se kuch nahi dihkra we will have to go further
she did'nt respond. he lifted the back bag & continued to walk
she still stood mesmerizied
maan mumered ek to mujhe aise dehkte rahegi aur main dehkoon to uff
maan - moo band karo aur challo
she snaped out of her thoughts & followed him, making a baby face
geet - abhi bhi naraz ho
he kept quite . she tried manaofying him..he kept ignoring her
he was more angry at himself for not being able to control himself
she pulls him back holding his hand, he snaps & moves on

SANJEEVNI
prem meet up with armaan
prem rubbing his temple - I tried to locate her phone koi signal nahi I guess it is off.
armaan - she never does anything like that, tu ne bachan ko phone kiya
prem - haan, uska phone bhi not reachable aaraha hain
armaan - nahi yaar they both are not talking
prem - phir woh uske saath hi hogi
armaan - kya matlab
prem - she can't stay without talking to him, use manane uske peche gayee hogi
armaan - do u know bachan's office
prem - thats not big deal we can find that out
armaan - raj ko inform karna hain kya?
prem - pata nahi woh kaise react karegha

armaan reluctantly tries to reach raj & leaves a message for him
mean while prem finds bachan's office address
prem - OH FISH
armaan - kya huwa?
prem - bachan is the MAAN SINGH KHURANA
armaan - woh kaun hain
prem - THE KHURANA's yaar
armaan - kya bol raha hain, u mean the bussiness tycon I think usse to koi award milla tha na
they have their mouth drop open & looked at Maan's pic on some article
prem - he was so nice to us, no frils
armaan - nahi yaar kuch mistake hain, as far I know, even ministers wait
for an appointment to meet him
prem - after the ammunition deal to he is among the PM league
armaan - how come we never knew
prem - geet ne kabhi nahi bataya
armaan - yah geet ne bhi nahi bataya
prem - thats why he was able to give her that ring
armaan - kaunse the one she wears offlate
prem - yaar woh 5million pound ki hain
armaan cuffed - kuch jada nahi hogaya
prem - actually humari jhali ke samne to woh kuch bhi nahi
armaan - woh bhi to uspe jaan chitak thi hain
prem - are u serious
armaan - she definitly likes him
prem - i am sure kiss ke chakar main isse bhi reject kar deghi
armaan - nahi I don't think she will be able to say no to him
they reach KC & meet pinky at the recption
prem - can we meet bachan
armaan rolls his eyes - he means Maan Singh Khurana
pinky - do u have an appointment
prem - it is little urgent
pinky - sorry sir, next aviable appt is..she checks the sheet aftr 2months
but before scheduling the appt u need to tell me what is it regarding & his secertary
will let u know if it is possible
prem losses it & starts shouting at pinky
adi comes out running
armaan holds prem back ...raj calls then
armaan chup kar raj ka phone hain
armaan - hi raj
raj - how have u been?
armaan sounded little worried - woh
raj immeditaly - geet kidhar hain
armaan - actually
raj yells - where the hell is she
prem takes the phone from armaan
prem - yaar geet is missing since yesterday, she left home saying she is
going for some college camp, uska phone bhi nahi lagraha hain
adi wispers to pinky - maan sur bhi camp gaye hain
armaan head them
raj closed his eyes - tum log kaise dost ho
prem - yaar u know her
armaan takes the phone from prem & comes out
armaan - yaar these guys in bachan's office are saying woh bhi kanhi
camp pe gaya hain
raj - but I told her to stay away from bachan right
armaan kept quite
raj - u guys stay out of this, I don't what u to move
out of delhi, look for her in delhi, baki main dehkta hoon

precap
geet wooing maan in her own jhali way..sab sochu maan kya karen bechara☺️

NEXT PART 56
~pyar ka ehsaas updated PART 156~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Congrats on the new thread Muskaan!

Ye Raj kaun hai aur iski kya problem hai?
Yaar I only have on complain for you....naya thread pe pehla update par itna short kyu? Pata nahi but I was expecting it to be longer and more I guess. 😕
I hope you can try and update the next part before tomorrow. You ended Madhoshi too na isliye ise jaldi update karna please
Edited by pushpi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
bechara maan kitna control kar raha hai
hamari pyaari geet jhali ki jhali hi rahegi
ise jhali ko yeh bhi ache se nai pata ki
useke harkato se maan par kya guseregi
update soon

Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

congratz on 5th thread........

lovly update

wonder wat will happen

with all this fiasco whether geet will know her bachan is MSK

con soon......

Edited by dia_ditz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
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hey muskaan,

love uuuuuuuuuuuu sweetooooo🤗.......u r awesome👍🏼.......loved the update😊......seriously geet is a jalliiiiiiiiii😆...........want some passionate romance tommorow plzzzzzzz......cant wait for their romance😉........plzzzzz update soon as u ended madhoshi......plzzzzz give us more updates on this......plzzzzzzzzzzz muskan.......make us happy plzzzzzz.

with love--------vini😊
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
bechara maan geet ko dekho to prob na dekho to prob😆
so now they know bachan's identity.....
hope raj wont misunderstand maan
precap looks interesting😉
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Finally pls let them come out of jungle now plssssss i want her to know he is MSK plssssssssssssss abt 55 parts hoga na
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Hi,

What a fantastic update!!!!!!!!!!!!
Geet and Maan were too good,
bechaari Geet, or say bechaara Maan,
they are so good to each other,
i dont know how Maan will handle her,
i think Geet ke reluctance se Maan ko usse aur pyaar ho jayega,
Toh finally Geet na sahi, Geet ki mandali ko toh bachan ka sahi pechan mil gaya,
aur yeh Raj ka kya locha hai yaar,
he cares for her ya pyaar vyaar karta hai,
kuch bhi ho, Maan ke saamne toh sab bekaar hai,
he is simply too good for Geet,
What was the precap,
i am really worried for Maan,
i believe, if he coolly tells her not to woo him,
since he will not be able to control himself,
she may understand him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hai na,
warna woh kuch kuch karti rahegi, aur bechaara Maan gusse mein aag baboola hojayega............
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
to good loved, was a little short but still loved it..... make them confess i wana see mrs gmsk romanicing mr msk
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
lovely part Muskan...do post the next part soon
Mariam

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