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Posted: 14 years ago
great update.......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago


Yipiie....OMG OMG Cant wait to readd..
I soooo wanna see geet's reaction to the truth
Fast..lol

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I was about to doze off but I'm sure I can wait up for this now!!!!! now all of a sudden i'm wide awake😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
ireally don't know if i have commented on yr last few updates but really had to tell u that they were awesum and always luv yr writting n would appreciates wht ever we get
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Posted: 14 years ago
no wonder this is my favorite time of the evening....I get updates YAHOO
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

no wonder this is my favorite time of the evening....I get updates YAHOO



mine too.. the only difference is its morning here 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi07



mine too.. the only difference is its morning here 😉



And jus past midnight here ;D
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 57

he pressed her on the grass harder she arched back..
maan naughtly keeping her eyes capative - what if I rape u now
geet shied..turning pink that if she could further.. he was suprised that she shied
and wispered aap ko mujhe rape karne ki kya zarorat hain very softly
he bend closer in a jerk & rested his head on her neck..his hand freed her hand
suddenly...she snaked his back..moving towards his shoulders..he had suddenly dropped his
complete body weight on her..geet mumered yeh rape ki baat seriously to nahi le
rahe hain
..her hand reached his shoulder & she left wet and slushy, she lifted
her hand & looked at her fingers it was all red ..his blood, she was shocked, she lifted his
face that was burried in her neck, kya huwa aapko tears endlessly flowed, she shook his
cupping it in her hand his eyes were closed, she immeditaly slidded away from him
tried to turn him to know what happened, she could see him hurt on his shoulder
which was bleeding furiously and he fell unconcious


raj came dressed in full uniform like a commendo, had a gun in his hand &
pulled her with his right hand, dragging her away from maan. she was in so much
of shock she did'nt register it was raj she stood where she was.
raj shook her - GEET its me raj, challo yanha say
she looked at him & then at maan with tears in her eyes
raj dragging her forcefully away - he is fine goli useke shoulder ko choo ke nikali hain
she snapped her hand from raj & took maans head in her arms rubbing his hand
raj looked at her in suprise & confused at her protectiveness about maan
raj - GEET away from him now & pulled her away
geet - raj lekin woo
raj - he is fine..
raj pulls his sleevs end forward & wispers looking around - tango reporting..target secured
need ambulence airlift for target.
geet looks at raj confused holding on to maans hand
raj - I repeat MAAN SINGH KHURANA secured need immediate medical attention
she leaves his hand in shock hearing Maan Singh Khurana
two helicopters lower towards them, few more soliders drop down from the helicopter
that had a plus sign & lifted maan on the strecher, secure the belt around him &
one off the person dressed similar to raj shows a thumb up signal to the
pilot of the helicopter...his strecher was lifted & securely attended to in the helicopter
by the Dr. Naina A singh.
raj checks her wound which was bleeding & wipes it with his hanky she pushes his hand away
raj makes her sit in the other helicopter.
raj - tumhe mana kiya tha na MAAN SINGH KHURANA se milne se
geet - lekin
raj - u know it is such a senitive area, woh to mujhe tumhara radio message mila thats why I could trace u guys.
geet - woh terrorist tho MAAN SINGH KHURANA she ate her words
raj - but what the hell are u doing with MAAN SINGH KHURANA
geet - tum unse mile ho
raj - are u kidding?
she looked at him confused
raj - he is the MAAN SINGH KHURANA, he is next to president as of now in the security listing, even if I want I can't meet him
her eyes almost popped out
raj - I am incharge of his security from Indian army. he has the black cat trained Prithivi as his
personsal security, pata nahi how come he is with out prithvi here. bade logo ke bade shauk
geet - prithvi !! that was the next shock
raj - jab se these terrorist are behind him, we have been tapping his moments
can u believe while listening to a radio signal of terrorist it was revealed
that ur are in touch with MAAN SINGH KHURANA, they had complete record of u too
as his weekness. I wondered what was all that, aab kuch kuch baat samjh arahi hain
geet - aise kuch nahi, I don't know MAAN SINGH KHURANA
raj smiled knowing her well now - right thats why ur on call with him the whole night
geet - woh to bachan she looked away
raj - why did'nt u tell me about both of u
geet changes the topic still quite angry & shocked - why are terrorist behind bachan nahi maan
raj - they want the Indian Army's ammunition requirment detail which only he has.
the only civilian to know that the detail.
geet - woh to unke office main bhi koi bata sakta hoga
raj rolls his eyes - tu sach main jhali hain
geet makes a baby angry face
raj - thats the part of the deal, he & only he has the requirement details no one
else would know it.

precap
raj in trouble

NEXT PART 58
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

eagerly waiting too :)

ooh Maan hurt atlast you made geet knew MSK :) now probably she would be dying to go be with him :)
Edited by cyberprincess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ayyooo.... so soon it ended...
stupid raj ..bcoz of him bachan ko goli lag gaya... nooooooo...
and y they r not taking him with them.....geet plz dont go without bachan...
i loved the precap........

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