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Kaheela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Tahani that was awesome girl!👍🏼

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Part 7

As he was about to leave still holding my hand, the tall guy with the curly hair turned and grabbed his arm" Abhay don't be a spoil sport, she has to do the dance", so the arrogant morning guy's name was Abhay, I thought, "let go of my arm" he said in a threatening voice!

As I stood there watching the two boys giving each other angry glares, like they are about to start a fight!, oh God now what! I thought , boys! They are such a pain!, now they will fight because of me! and who the hell this Abhay thinks of him self barging in like that, behaving like a true hero who is rescuing a damsel in distress, aka little moie!

Well I am no damsel in distress, I can manage to face my own battles, beside I didn't want the students to hate me because of this, and tag me as a problem creator, that too in my first day!! so I snapped at Abhay shrugging my arm and freeing my hand of his firm grip" what the hell! Who you think you are?, to interfere in my business?! Trying to be a hero eh! where was this heroic manners of yours, when you behaved rudely with me on the street?!"

He gets taken back from what I said, as he didn't see that coming!, he looks at me with a stir look now and says looking to others:"my bad, carry on guys!" then he looks again at me with a smug look on his face and he shrugs his shoulder and says:"its your funeral"

I look at them nervously and then slowly start to dance singing zara zara touch me touch me zara zara kiss me kiss me..etc I try to imitate Katrina's seductive steps, and seems I was doing a great job, since I could see that the boys were looking at me with their jaws dropped open! and the girls were looking with envious smiles on their faces, and then they started to clap and cheer, but my only focus was the intense grey eyes that were watching me, as Abhay was still standing and he was watching me with an expressionless face!, i twisted and turned and suddenly i lost my balance and fell on my face!

Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Awesome parts, Tahani and Ka7eela! Great work!!👍🏼

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Part 8

Abhay walked away with a smudged look. "OMFG! Are you all right, gal?" I heard a concerned voice ask. I looked up to see a beautiful girl with big doe eyes and short black curls, wearing a white sleeveless shirt over blue capris with an Ipod playing in her ears. She took off her earphones and reached for me. "Here. Let me help you." I took her hand, gratefully. "Hey! Thanks for helping me up," I smiled. "No problemo. Ragging problem?" she smirked, knowingly. I turned red, "Hmmm...ya they were kinda having some fun at my expense," I said grimly. "Seniors, I tell you. Let them even try to lay a finger on me and I swear I'll have them dancing around the entire college," she said rebelliously. "You're a fresher too?" I asked. "Yo, baby!" she said, "but i'm quite familiar with this college. Everyone knows me thanks to my sister," she rolled her eyes. I looked a little lost, I guess so she elaborated, "I'm Misha Dobrial. My sister Panchi, God knows how, is the most popular girl in the college. Or at least she was in her times." "Her times? Excuse me, I'm not 80 years old!" I heard an annoyed voice say behind me. I turned to face another beautiful girl, wearing totally opposite of what Misha was wearing: a well-fitted kurti over churidar-slacks. She came to hold Misha's ears, "Ya, so what were you bitching about me?" she asked between her gritted teeth. "Ow!! Birdie!! I meant you're a pass out. Just telling her about us," Misha said with a twisted face. For the first time, "Birdie" seemed to acknowledge my presence. Her face instantly lit up with a smile, "Hi! You're a fresher, too, like my sister? Hopefully, you're not useless like her. I'm Panchi and though I've left the college but the college is not ready to leave me. I've come here to organise the fresher's party for you guys. And you are...??" "Pia," I replied instantly, "Pia Jaiswal. I'm a fresher. First day today in college." "I can see that," Panchi pointed at my bruised elbows and indicated towards my dirty face and messed up hair, "I think we better get you cleaned up before your first class, right, Mish?" "Ya, you can't roam around like such a mess Pia," Misha agreed.
With both of them on my either side, we walked to the girls' washroom...

Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

SO LATE. SO LATE AS USUAL. DAMN DAMN DAMN.

Tahani, awesome part! I love the way Abhay came to his rescue.

And ka7eela, I loved the way Abhay left Pia on her own when she tried to argue. 😆 Is the guy with the curly hair supposed to be Kabir?

And Neethi, AWESOME part. Yay, Misha and Panchi entered. Great going. 😃

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
SO LATE. SO LATE AS USUAL. DAMN DAMN DAMN.

Tahani, awesome part! I love the way Abhay came to his rescue.

And ka7eela, I loved the way Abhay left Pia on her own when she tried to argue. 😆 Is the guy with the curly hair supposed to be Kabir?

And Neethi, AWESOME part. Yay, Misha and Panchi entered. Great going. 😃

Thank you!! As far as ka7eela's guy is concerned, exercise your discretion! Care to update?😉

Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ka7eela
Tahani that was awesome girl!👍🏼

tanx alot honestly i was sh**in it that it was really bad but tanx for liking it

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Chill_Out
Awesome parts, Tahani and Ka7eela! Great work!!👍🏼

thanks i was really scared of writing it but its good u liked it xxx

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Neethi that was awesome i loved it👏 now we have Misha and Panchi too

Akanksha thanks sweets, do you want me tell you about that guy, or maybe you should make him whoever you want in your update😉

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

good work u guys and owww pia finally found misha who is her usual self (as usual)

i can actully imagine the fight between the boys and pia dancing and her falling god we work quiet well toghether carry on doin good no fantastic work😊

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