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hey frndz hw are you all sry i was busy in my bro's engagement so
couldnt update but now my college has started ...... n goig to
go to munbai for 15 days ...if i got time there i will surelly update
daily... ok now no more bakwas read the part... here is d part
its a long one so read it carefully..... i wrote a longest part hope you
like it ... if u like it then do long comments.......

Part 3

samrat did his break fast then came out of the house n looking here n
there..he saw a lady was goig to gunjan's house having a heavy bag..
S(in mind):lagta haii ye lady gunjan ke ghar ja rahi haiii...
accha chance hai gunjan ke ghar janeka aur use milne ka is bahane
hamari dosti bhi badh payegi.. aur me use aur karib se jaan bhi pauga..
he went to the lady she is non other then buiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii........
S:hello aunty
B:namaste beta tum kon ho pehle kabhi yaha nahi dekha ???
morena me naye aaye ho kya??
S:nai naiii aunty me naya nahi hu yahi rehta tha bahut saal pehle but
ab mumbai me rehta hu ... wo apki padosi sheelaji haii na me unka
pota hu samrat....
B:oh to tum sheelaji ke pote ho ...
S:laiye na aunty me apki bag utha leta hu aur apko ghar tak chhod deta
hu .... aap bahut thak gayio hogi na....
B:sabse pehle to beta tum kitne acche ho aur tumhare sansakar bhi
kitne acche haii....itne uche khandan aur amir ghar ke jo ho warna
aaj kal to koi apne bhi kisi ke liye itna nahi karta.... n smiled
samrat also smiled n took bag from her hand header towords her house
B:beta tum mumbai me kya kar rahe ho??
S:ji aunty me padh raha hu.. college me..
B:sabse pehle to muje aunty mat bulao tum muje bui bulao......
S:ji aunty .. i mean bui....
then they entered in the house samrat was looking here n there
in search of gunjan but didnt find her
S:bui kya aap yaha akeli rehti haii????
B:wese to me akeli hi hu kyunki mere apne kehne ke liye yaha koi nahi
hai siway us manhoos ke ......
S:ji????/
B:nahi beta kuch nahi aao na betho yaha
S:ji bui... n gave her bag back to her...
B:me ise rakhke aati hu tum yaha betho n then
B:gunjan paani lana
as soon as he heard gunjan's name he smiled as he succeed in his
mission....... n bui went from there to kept her bag in her room
after a while gunjan came with a tray having a glass of water ...
she was walking slowly ... lowering her eyes.......
as soon as samrat heard the voice of foot steps he turned n looked
in the direction of sound ..... n totally memorized by her beauty n lost
in her.... he stood up n started to walk up to her ... gunjan saw him coming
towards her she stopped n seeing him she was totally socked.....
samrat stoped at a distence he was lost in her n gunjan also lost...

samrat's POV:
wow koi itna januable kaise ho sakta haiii itna simple aur fir bhi itna
beautiful.... Aisa lagta haii jaise koi angel aayi ho aur apni khubsurti
se sabko apni aur khich rahi ho... jo muje majbur kar rahi haii apni
taraf aane ko .....aur me khud ko bhi nahi rok pa raha hu.... mumbai
me itni ladkiyo ke sath rehta hu aas paas rehta hu par kabhi kisi bhi
ladki ko dekhke aisa feel nahi hua ... jise dekhke Dil bole ki she is the
one for me....... jise dekhke lage ki ise paane ke baad aur koi khwahis
hi na ho....

gunjan's POV:
oh no ye to wahi ladka hai jo subah river ke paas mila tha aur usne
meara hath pakda tha aur ye wahi haii jo muje dekh raha tha jab me
kapde sukhane chhat pe gayi thi...par ab ye yaha kya kar raha haii???
agar bui ne ya kisi aur ne dekh liya to bui muje nahi chhode gi....
muje use dur rehna hoga chal gunjan jalde se paani de aur chali ja
yaha se ise pehle ke wo tujse koi sawal puche ...tuje aur bhi kitne
kaam haii....

then she came out of thoughts.... n saw samrat was staring at her ...
G:paani
S:............
G:ji paani
S:........ still in his thoughts....
G:paaniiiii she said a bit loudly coz of this samrat came out of
his thoughts
S:hm?????
G:paani...
S:sry wo mene suna nahi n took glass to drink water
n she immidetly went from there b4 samrat could ask her any thing
S:shit ye to chali gayi muje ise baat karni thi......
he was about to go behind her but bui came to him
B:are samrat tum kaha ja rahe ho
S:kahi nahi bui bas wo me chalta hu muje der ho rahi haii dadi mera
intazar kar rahi haiii
B:ji beta aur aate rehna aur ise apna hi ghar samajna
samrat smiled
S:ji bui ab to aana hi padega..
B:ji??
S:kuch nahi bui me chalta hu
n went to his home.....

In shergill villa
dadi saw him coming
D:are samrat kaha tha tu??
S:kahi nahi dadi wo.... kahi nahi yahi tha..
D:accha thik haii
S:dadi me apne room me jata hun went from there b4 dadi could ask
him dadi was confused.........

the whole day passed like this samrat was in his thoughts about
gunjan...... he again n again came out from his out only to see
gunjan but he could saw her as she was in her house n on the
other side bui made gunjan buzy in works.......
In evening .....
samrat was sad that he could see her .... then he smiled
as a thought came in his mind ....n went hurrily

D:are samrat kaha ja rahe ho??
S:adadi me aa jaunga time pe aap chinta mat karna ....
n went out of the house..... then after sum thimes he reached at
the bank of the river.... n saw gunjan was staning there.......
n also lost in her thoughts... he wakled to her n stood beside her
S:muje pata tha tum muje yahi milogi... me subah se tume dekhna
chahta tha......
gunjan came out from her thoughts........n socked to see him there..
S:itni socked kyu ho gayi muje dekhke????
she didnt want to talk to him n about to go from there samrat held her
hand
G:plzz mera hath chhod dijiye muje jaana haii.....
S:pehle muje ye batao ki tum mujse dur kyu bhagti ho???
G:plzzz mera hath chhod dijiye agar kisi ne dekh liya to.. problem
ho jayegi...
S:dont wry hume yaha koi nahi dekhega kyunki yaha koi nahi haii ye
tum bhi janti ho aur me bhi.. aur me ye bhi janta hu tume akele rehna
chahti ho is liye yaha aati ho.....
G:agar aap jante hai ki me akele rehna chahti hu to plzz muje jane dijiye
mera hath chhod diji ye...
S:itni aasani se nahi gunjan...
G:aap kya chahte hai???
S:mujse dosti karlo me hath chhod dunga...
G:ye kabhi nahi ho sakta plzz mera hath chhod do n trying hard to free
her hand but his grip was tight.. so she was not succeed....
S:kyu nahi ho sakta???
G:mene kaha na nahi ho sakta.......
S:pehle jawab do..
G:mere paas iska koi jawab nahi haii
S:to dosti karlo....
G:plzzz mera hath chhod dijiye n started to cry ...
samrat saw she was crying n immidietly left her hand...
S:m sorry... but she started to run n heard samrat's screammm
n stopped at the same point... n turned n saw himmmmmm
S:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
n held his leg ..gunjan rushe to him
G:kya hua????
S:saanp ne kaata... wo dekho n pointed towards snake ....

gunjan saw snake n socked to death....then samrat held her for the
support... gunjan couldnt saw him like dis she also support him
n put her arms around him... samrat felt sumthing strange n
constantly looking at her n forget his pain
on the other side gunjan was really worried as snake bited himmm
gunjan tore her dupata n tied it on his leg tightly.. so that
poison could not spread in body n then helped him to reach hospital
the whole wasy sam,raqt was staring at her worried face... n lost in her...
then doctor came n took samrat to the word....
gunjan was standing out of the ward... n waiting for doctor to came
after sumtimes doctor came n said everything was all right...
she felt relief n went from there without meeting samrat....

After an hour doctor came to samart's ward
Dr.:kaise ho???
S:m fine doctor but wo ladki jo mere sath aayi thi??
Dr.:wo to chali gayi..
S:chali gayi??
Dr.:ha jab mene unhe kaha ki aap thik hai to wo chali gayi...
S:oh .. by the way thasnk you doctoe muje bachane ke liye.......
Dr.:thank you to tume us ladki ko bolna chahiye jo tumhe yaha le kar aayi ...
kyunki agar der ho jati to poiso n pure body me fel jata.. aur tume bacha pata muskil hota..
S:ji doctor.. kya me ja sakta hu???
Dr,:nahi abhi tume rest karna padega.. aur medicine bhi time par leni padegi....
S:plzz doctor agar meri dadi ko pata chal gaya to unki tabiyat kharab hojayegi
is liye me nahi chahta ki unhe kuch pata chale....
Dr,:thik haii tum ja sakte ho wese to tum samaj dar ho apna khayal rakha sakte ho...
S:thank you doctor....

then he came to near his home n started to find gunjan as he wanted to thank her...
but he didnt find her,,,,,then he went at his house n saw hisa dadi had slept he also went to his
room n n lied on his bed.... n started to think about from the first time he saw her....
he had many questions about her which he wanted to ask to her........ n slept .....
on the other side gunjan worked so much after coming from hospital...n also
disturbed coz she was continuesly thinking about samrat's condition.... then lied on her bed
first she thought to read novel but then she changed her mind n slept .......


next day samrat wake up n came out from his room n saw his dadi was making break fast
he went to her .....
S:gun morning dadi
D:gun morning beta wese kal raat tu kaha gaya tha???? me to tera intazar karte karte kab so
gayi pata hi nahi chala...
after hearing this samrat remember last evening's incedent n rememberd gunjan
S:dadi ek baat puchu???
D:ha beta pucho na...
S:dadi ye gunjan muje dekhke bhag kyu jati haii???
D:matlab????
S:jab bhi me uske paas jata hu bhag jati haiii mujse dosti nahi karna chahti akeli rehna chati haii
na hasti haii dari dari si rehti haiii...... aisa lagta haiii jaise agar wo mujse baat kar legi to mar
jayegi....
dadi also became sad ....
D:aisa hi haii beta...
S:matlab me kuch samja nahi....
Dadi told himeverything about gunjan;s life ....her black life without happyness.......
samrat was totally socked to hear all these........
D:samrat.............................
S:dadi aap bilkul fikar mat karo uski life black jyada der tak nahi rahegi use white hona hi padega
me banauga uski zindgi white..... aap mere sath hona...
D:ha beta me tumhare sath hu... gunjan ke liye kuch bhi.....

then samrat again went to his room n think whole day n decided to meer her once n takled to
her once..... on the other side gunjan was totally buzy in her work n also worried for samrat
as she didnt knw anything about him after coming from hospitalll..........

In evening
samrat went to the bank of river n saw gunjan was sitting there n totally lost in her thoughts..
as she was always sad coz she hadnt anything to be happy.......samrat silently went to her
n sat beside her ..gunjan felt his presence n looked at her...
S:plzzz jana mat me tumse baat karna chahta hu??
G:par me nahi karna chahti hu....
S:plzzzzzzzz gunjan saw a hope in his eyes... so she couldnt refused him more
even she didnt know why she agreed..... both were staring at river....
S:thnak you muje bachane ke liye ...
G:hmmm n smiled a bit...... samrat saw she was sad... he wanted to share her sorrow.....
S:ye river dekh rahi ho kaise sab kuch piche chod ke aage badh ti haiii.....
gunjan got his pont n she thought dadi must be told him about her life....
G:ha ye nadi jarur apna sab kuch chood ke aage badhti haiii par apni pichli zindgi se naata to
nahi todti na...............
S:ye suraj dekh rahi ho aaj dub raha haii kal fir se aayega umeed ki nayi kiran ke kar....
G:wo bhi hamara bhram haiii suraj to wahi rehta haiii prithvi ghumti haiii aur hum insan
samajte haii ki suraj aata haii aur jata haii...hum insan bhram me jeete haiii.. aur jab bhram
toot ta haii to hum insan bhi toot jate haiii....
samrat look at her as she was so mature
S:lagta haiii zindgi se bahut kuch sikha haiii....
G:nahi zindgi ne bahut kuch sikha diya haiii.....
S:kya tum nahi chahti ki tumhari life bhi white ho jaye with full of all colours....
G:meri zindgi ka sifr ek hi color haii black aur is par koi colour lagalo nahi dekhega...
S:par gunjan tum....samajti kyu nahi ???
G:jab aap ke paas meri har baat ka jawab ho tab muje samjana....
ab muje chalna chahiye....
Ssamrat was unable to answer her.......gunjan went from there.......
S:gunjan me tumhari har baat ka jawab dunga......aur tumhari zindgi ka color change kar dunga..
tumhari black life ko me white karunga gunjan tumne kaha na ki koi colour black color ko nahi
mita sakta but white color aisa haii jo black color ko mita saktra haii...... aur me ye karke rahunga.
fir dekhna gunjan tumhari life kaise badal jati haiiii ....aur wo me karunga....
i promise....... n closed his eyes...........

precap:
samrat tried to make her happy but.......

its very long part i hope u didnt get bore.... if u like it plzz do comment i m waiting n want long
comment as i updated long part.........................
plz dont forget to edit ur comment if u made res.... m waiting for ur comments............😊

Love'😉
Radhi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyyy radhi
awwwwsum update
d bui n sam thng was realy nyccc
n den snake bite trak..
n am happpy dat sams dadi told him bout gnjn n her life
cont soooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm
Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful ..........
hope sam gets successful in making gunjan happy ............
waiting for the next part !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a superb update........so perfectly written.Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
amzinggggggggggggggg update dear
loved it to the coreeeeeeeeeee
just outstandinggggg
sajan roxxxxxxxxxxx
brilliantly written from starting till end yar
dialogues were really sweeeeeeeeeeeeet
i know it was a long update
but still continue sooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesume parttt!!!!! just rockinggg!!! lovedd it very very muccchhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but the precappp......hope samrat is alritee
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update......
waiting for the next part ...
thanx 4 pm....

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