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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

nice !

plz update soon
luv,
Sana

thanks sana :)
Tishuu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg i just realised my comment didnt show up!!!!!!
hawwwww
thats bad
very bad
tut tut
not good yaar
hmmmmm
soooo ok let me go back in time in my head and think back to what i wanted to say..........................
lool at vicky blowing their cover that Maan is holding her hand under the table - hehehe
and the swimming- awwwwww.....that was totally awesome.......awwwwwwwwwwwww that was truly luvable/adorable or the -ables lol.....
hmmm i wonder who vicky is talking to.....hmmm i wonder......koi girlfriend ka chakkar toh nahi?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wait i nearly forgot.................ur name..............hmmmm
well seen as Bhabz has nothing to do with my name........................I think i should do sumthing different from your name too - hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
lol
the first thing that came to my head and dnt laugh....was chiklet - lol i used to call my frend that.........ok how bout i give u a choice of 3 n u choose
theek hai
ok so no#1 is chiklet
ok i cnt think..........much.......hmmm I knew someone called Rabia and I used to call her Rabzi...../Rabz.........
so thats ur no#2 - Rabzi/Rabz
and no#3...........err...........ooooo i knw.....dnt laugh again......Kittu/Mithu
so lets go thru that again.....
no#1 - Chiklet
no#2 - Rabzi/Rabz
no#3 - Kittu/Mithu
Your choice......... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
QUOTE=Tishuu]omg i just realised my comment didnt show up!!!!!!
hawwwww
thats bad
very bad
tut tut
not good yaar
hmmmmm
soooo ok let me go back in time in my head and think back to what i wanted to say..........................
lool at vicky blowing their cover that Maan is holding her hand under the table - hehehe
and the swimming- awwwwww.....that was totally awesome.......awwwwwwwwwwwww that was truly luvable/adorable or the -ables lol.....
hmmm i wonder who vicky is talking to.....hmmm i wonder......koi girlfriend ka chakkar toh nahi?????

Originally posted by: Tishuu

oh wait i nearly forgot.................ur name..............hmmmm

well seen as Bhabz has nothing to do with my name........................I think i should do sumthing different from your name too - hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
lol
the first thing that came to my head and dnt laugh....was chiklet - lol i used to call my frend that.........ok how bout i give u a choice of 3 n u choose
theek hai
ok so no#1 is chiklet
ok i cnt think..........much.......hmmm I knew someone called Rabia and I used to call her Rabzi...../Rabz.........
so thats ur no#2 - Rabzi/Rabz
and no#3...........err...........ooooo i knw.....dnt laugh again......Kittu/Mithu
so lets go thru that again.....
no#1 - Chiklet
no#2 - Rabzi/Rabz
no#3 - Kittu/Mithu
Your choice......... 😊


Ohhhh BHAHZZZZZ....u crack me up.always..😆

since we are doing something different than our names then we shall delete #2...now #1 or #3 ..oh the dilemma ...what to pick??? choicesssss..hmmm😕
this is really hard but i think i am gonna pick.........DRUMROLL PLZZZZZZZZ
CHIKLET..loll....i laughed as soon as i read it...so i think my name should be Chiklet for u unless u like Kittu/Mithu better...cause i like both...so technically u still get a choice....

and getting back to the story....we shall see who he is talking to??? i don't wanna kill the suspense..i still have to write the part..i have had no time cause of uni

But guess what...i just finished my stupid yet last assignment but i have work till saturaday so i think i shall write on sat...

ohhh yaaa...u better update soon too cause i am waiting....
maankigeet4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
Tishuu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oooooooo Ok Ok Ok ⭐️
Well theres only one last option we have........😆......yes you have got it right
Picking out of a hat..............lool🤣
See I love Chiklet🤗 - hehe........it has a different sound to it...........
But then Kittu and Mithu sounds ooooooooooooo sweetu ish ....... lool
🤔
So My hat - well technically its a box in which I got a watch - with 3 pieces of Kimtu(u'll know y)😳 and 3 pieces of Chiklet
Then best of 5😃
if I get more of Kimtu then it'll be between
3 pieces of Kittu and 3 pieces of Mithu (😉Hence Kimtu - get it??)😉
and best of 5 for that..........then winner gets alll - lool👏👏👏
So I shall reveal your NEW name once you update........lool😆😆😆
as for my update.....or updates........😭😭😭I have uni work to do tooo and I just realised I should have been doing coursework and revising😭😭😭..........so I'm gna do my last few updates today/tomoz ish even though it's not upto where I wanted it😕......but then it'll depend on my work rate on when I update next.........ok I should go back......to typing more😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello all..i am back after a while..For some weird reason, i haven't been able to write but i tried and this is the outcome..it's short but hopefully it will help me write..the story is getting interesting..at least i hope so...here it is

Recap:

He walked to his bed and was about to climb in when he heard someone talking in whispers.

He wondered who could be up so late and walked into the hall. He heard the whispers from Vicky's room. He stood outside his room.

Chapter 6

Maan wondered what was going on with Vicky. He placed his ear against the door quietly and heard his hushed whispers " yes, I will soon. I promise. Ok, bye".

Maan couldn't stop himself as he turned the doorknob and walked in. He watched as fear flashed in Vicky's eyes. Something was not right and he knew it. He folded his arms across his chest as he questioned "what's going on Vicky ? Who are you talking to so late?"

Vicky knew nothing escaped his BB but he had to try. "Woh BB, actually a friend of mine called from the states and I was talking to him." Clearly, Maan wasn't convinced.

" And may I ask why you felt the need to have the conservation in whispers?" Vicky struggled to find his way out.

"Actually BB, since everyone was sleeping, I didn't wanted to disturb anyone." Maan simply nodded. He knew his brother was hiding something but he decided to let it go for the moment. Vicky walked up to BB and placed his hand on his shoulder.

"Don't worry BB, there is nothing to worry about."

Maan nodded again. " Ok, you go to sleep now." Maan shook his hand through Vicky's hair playfully and walked out. There was something off and he was going to find out.

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The next morning Geet walked into Khurana Mansion. She saw Dadi ma and went to hug her. "Good morning Dadi ma." Dadi ma smiled as she placed her hand on her cheek.

"Good morning beta" Dadi ma placed her arm around geet's shoulder as they sat on the sofa.

Geet looked around the empty hall and questioned "Dadi ma, where is everyone? It's already 8am and no one is here yet not even maan."

Dadi ma laughed " even at this old age, my grandsons never fail to surprise me. Vicky who was always the lazy one was up first and left early for something important. And my punctual grandson maan on the other hand who is always up at a certain time every morning is still sleeping."

Geet's eyes widened in shock. "no way Dadi ma ! As long I have known maan, he has never been sleeping this late." Dadi laughed yet again.

"It's ok beta, lots of things happen for the first time. Why do you go up and see if you can wake him up? I already gave up." Geet smiled and nodded. Geet headed up the stairs and entered maan's room.

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She walked in with her mission to wake him up but before she could even say his name, her eyes got caught on his face. She couldn't help but stare as she got caught up in his trance and he wasn't even doing anything. She sat at the edge of his bed and ran her hand through his hair. She was end up staring at him all day if she didn't wake him up. She walked over to open the curtains. She looked over to see the sunrays kiss his face. He squinted under the bright light and did a little tangle with his blanket, which ended up exposing his board chest covered with a little black tank. She was tempted to run her hands over his toned muscles.

She sat back on his bed and nudged his shoulder as she said, " Maan." Maan grunted, as he was disturbed from his sleep. He wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her towards him. " Maan, what are you doing? Please get up, Dadi ma is waiting for us downstairs." Maan opened half an eye and saw his Misiti blushing and struggling to get out of his hold. "Come up Maan, it's already 8:15 am. Why haven't you gotten up yet? Are you feeling ill? She brought her hand on his forehead. Maan shifted his weight to lie on his back and geet was still pulled against his chest.

"No Misiti, I am not feeling ill. There are actually two reasons for sleeping in this morning.

"Two reasons, really now? So let's hear them." Geet placed her hand on her chin and she didn't notice the fact she made herself comfortable to snuggle with him but maan did.

Maan smiled and started, "Well the first reason is that I promised you that I would start everyday with you and until we are married, I have to wait for you to wake me up so I see you first thing in the morning." Geet cuddled closer to maan as she heard his sweet words. "And the second reason is" she whispered. " And the second reason is that I was having the most beautiful dream about a girl."

Geet shot up straight and glared into his eyes. "Girl? What girl? You having dreams about some girl?"

Maan laughed, "You know there is only one girl in my life who has imprisoned me in her spell day and night and that's you, only you Misiti." Geet's anger went out the window as she felt herself melt like candle wax in her Prince Charming's arms. Maan took full advantage and did a roll to pin geet below him. Geet was shocked at the quickness of his movements. Maan winked " too fast for you, eh"

The redness of her blush started to sneak back on her face. She pushed against his shoulders without any luck. "Please Maan, let me go." Maan shook his head at her and he brought his face closer to his. Geet watched as his face was coming closer and closer by the second. Just as his lips were about to be caught with hers, geet turned her face to the other side and maan's lips landed on geet's ear instead. But Maan wasn't discouraged. He started nibbling on her earlobe sending shivers down geet's spine.

Geet felt her control slipping away as pleasure took over her body. "Maan, please" she whispered and she didn't know what she was even saying please for but yet again maan knew. She ran her hands through his body and pulled him closer. Maan pulled back to stare at her as he saw new boldness in her.

"Geettt, beta. Is maan up yet? Dadi hollered from the bottom of the stairs.

Geet bolted up as she heard dadi's voice. In the process, she banged her forehead with maan's. Oddly, they both reached out to the other to see if they were ok. "Oh Maan, what if Dadi comes up?" she pulled herself off the bed.

"Geet, why are you always ----------?" Geet ran out of the room before he could finish. "scared. Oh, what a start to the morning. He smiled as he took out his outfit for the day and went to shower.

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Later on in the day, Geet was sitting in her cabin looking over files. She glanced up and looked through the glass to see Maan's empty cabin. He had meetings outside the office today all day. The office seemed so lonely without him. "Maybe I will go home early today." She barely finished her thought as her cell phone began to ring. She picked it up without looking at the display knowing it would be Maan. "Hello Maan, how did you know I was missing you?" She heard silence from the other end. "Maan, stop playing around. I want to hear your voice." She heard the click on the other end as the line went dead. She looked at her cell. "He hang up, he calls and then he hangs up." Geet was upset. Her cell phone went off once again and this time she looked at the display and read "Unknown number. Why is he calling from a unknown number?" She picked it " Hello maan."

This time she heard someone breathing evenly on the other end. She knew as well as she knew her name that it was not Maan breathing on the other end. She got a little terrified. "Who is this?" When the person continued to breath on the other end. She pressed the disconnect button on her cell. "Who was it ? was maan or someone pulling my leg ?" Geet sat in thought as she tried to figure out who was calling.

No precap but any guesses

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Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

well written... waiting for next update as curious to know what wil happened next

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear finally after a long time .... nice update dear...loved it.. nw who was tat mystery caller...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part.
love it..
do continue plz.
thx

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