*Khushi's One-Shot* RTMC/DV SS Part 4 Pg 16 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for sharing ..awesome dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
nicely written , i like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
wow di👏
simple, sedate n sweet.......😳

one small incidence but dat really works😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
a really beautiful os oh my god u made me fall in luv wiv arjuhi even more simply luvd it! ❤️👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was sooooo sweet...

soooo amazing...

gr8888 job...........

thnx for the pm..............

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushi909

Hey Guyz M Bored Of Writing FFs So Thought Of Writing One-Shots, So that I get Rid of Updating The FFs , So Here's My First One-Shot On VEER-NANDINI......................Hope u all enjoy it.





From the very Begining, the girl's family objected strongly on her dating this guy. Saying that it has got to do with family background & that the girl will have to suffer for the rest of her life if she were to be with him.

Due to family's pressure, the couple quarrel very often. Though the girl love the guy deeply, but she always ask him: "How deep is your love for me?"

As the guy is not good with his words, this often cause the girl to be very upset. With that & the family's pressure, the girl often vent her anger on him. As for him, he only endure it in silence.

After a couple of years, the guy finally graduated & decided to further his studies in overseas. Before leaving, he proposed to the girl: "I'm not very good with words. But all I know is that I love you. If you allow me, I will take care of you for the rest of my life. As for your family, I'll try my best to talk them round. Will you marry me?"

The girl agreed, & with the guy's determination, the family finally gave in & agreed to let them get married. So before he leave, they got engaged.

The girl went out to the working society, whereas the guy was overseas, continuing his studies. They sent their love through emails & phone calls. Though it's hard, but both never thought of giving up.

One day, while the girl was on her way to work, she was knocked down by a car that lost control. When she woke up, she saw her parents beside her bed. She realised that she was badly injured. Seeing her mum crying, she wanted to comfort her. But she realized that all that could come out of her mouth was just a sigh. She has lost her voice......

The doctors says that the impact on her brain has caused her to lose her voice. Listening to her parents' comfort, but with nothing coming out from her, she broke down.

During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,.....it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang. She does not wish to let the guy know. & not wanting to be a burden to him, she wrote a letter to him saying that she does not wish to wait any longer.

With that, she sent the ring back to him. In return, the guy sent millions & millions of reply, and countless of phonecalls,.. all the girl could do, besides crying, is still crying....

The parents decided to move away, hoping that she could eventually forget everything & be happy.

With a new environment, the girl learn sign language & started a new life. Telling herself everyday that she must forget the guy. One day, her friend came & told her that he's back. She asked her friend not to let him know what happened to her. Since then, there wasn't anymore news of him.

A year has passed & her friend came with an envelope, containing an invitation card for the guy's wedding. The girl was shattered. When she open the letter, she saw her name in it instead.

When she was about to ask her friend what's going on, she saw the guy standing in front of her. He used sign language telling her "I've spent a year's time to learn sign language. Just to let you know that I've not forgotten our promise. Let me have the chance to be your voice. I Love You. With that, he slipped the ring back into her finger. The girl finally smiled.


Plz Leave ur comments n suggestions, whether i shud continue or not.

Love

Khushi.

hey khushi...the concept and few parts (INCLUDING WORDINGS)are EXACTLY same to my OS KHAMOSHI on RN dear...look i dont mean to blame you or anythn,as we read so many things, it may happen that those things get repeated as we write...but watch out. I hope you will check out my OS and make necessary changes to yours.waiting for you to respond... Here's the link for my OS:
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Khushi, Loved your One Shot Dear!👏 👏..Carry on!⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi
khushi
the up is really very sweet
arjun is soooooooooo understable while arohi uffffffffffff really crazyyyy
but i liked the part sweet and cute
plz write something on RN also
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
beautiful part👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

hey khushi...the concept and few parts (INCLUDING WORDINGS)are EXACTLY same to my OS KHAMOSHI on RN dear...look i dont mean to blame you or anythn,as we read so many things, it may happen that those things get repeated as we write...but watch out. I hope you will check out my OS and make necessary changes to yours.waiting for you to respond... Here's the link for my OS:


ohhhhhhhhhhhhh i really dnt noe that u hv written sum kind of OS i hv never read urs so i hv no regrets that it resembles urs ...................i hv a read a book n found sum thing thr so putten in a short story ..............plz dnt mind but sweety 😳

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