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Posted: 14 years ago
hai hai maan on a roll to impress geet.....very interesting.....cant wait for the next update...i know u updated yesterday only but pls can u update daily atleast......the story is going in a very interesting way.............cant wait fr longer..............thnks
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan has to drink tea with salt just for not reacting
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update cant wait for the next one plsssssssssss update sooooooooon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was to good geet was trying to get on neverve but he refused to how about geet join Mr. Khurana's office and there every body praising her
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amezing part maan drunk tea without telling a single word .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks for the lovely udpate dear..............

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update...loved it to the core...
poor Maan...bechare ko aur kitne papd belne honhe...who knows....awww Geet is so confused....she is trying her best to provoke him...let's see whether Maan is able to control his temper or not.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

not now or not today??

I hope u will give the daily dose😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-23

Geet is in the Kitchen and still thinking about Maan Sudden change behaviour..

Geet is in her deep thought Ramukaka told her to look after the milk'' and he went from there''.Geet is not listend what ramukaka had told her' she is lost in her thoughts''

Milk is about to fall down and Ramukaka comes and switch off the Nob.

Kaka: Geet kahan dhayan hain tumhaara'.

Geet: kuch nahi kaka vo bas'..

Geet is totally fustrated

Kaka: beta kya hua'. Abhi thodi dare phele tho tum bhaut khush thi ab kya hua'

Geet: haan kaka vo loo''and she stops'. Kuch nahi kaka '

Chalo kana lagadete hain '

Kaka: haan vo main yahi bolney aaya tha kii madam bol rahi hain kii kana lagaq do..

Geet ok kaka'..

Geet takes the food outside and as she agganging the plates she is watching Maan '.

Maan notice this and also looks at her'. and she turn her face'..

Maan smirks: mujhe papta hain tum bhaut puzzled ho mere is behavior sey.

All ladies comes to the dinning table and helping Geet''.

Heer: invites everybody for dinner'''.

Maan comes to Geet and said main kuch help karun '.

Geet no thanks said making a face'.. and leaves from there'.

Geet'. Shuld I ask him ' or not'..

she turns back to ask him whay is he doing all this '. And ask hey loose why'.. and Heer inturupt them'.

Guys bateenin baad main karna phele dinner kar leen''.

Maan: ya. Sure Bhabhi'..and both of them leaves from there''.

Geet'. Thank god mainey us looser sey pooch nahi '.. nahi tho vo mera bhaut maazak banata''''..

Geet ek baar aur try karti hu usko irritate karney kii dekhtii hun vo react karta hain yaa nahi

As all are start having dinner''

Mr. khurana: oye Hitler khana tho bada accha hai'.

Geet: raised her coller and said'.. thanku'

Everybody enjoying food'.

Maan really Dad khana tho bhaut aacha bana hain'..

Mr. Khurana: haan haan tujh ko tho aacha hii lagega'.

Heer: kyun aisa kyun'

Mr. Khurana: defend his words by saing' beta khana bana hii itna aacha hain'.

Everybody finised having dinner..

Geet: now its time for dessert'..

Mr. khurana: waaoo Dessert'.

Geet: Not for u Papa'.
Mr. Khurana: that's not fair Geet'.

Geet: now u are buttring me' but I am not going to give it to u'.

Maan: yes Dad she is right'. You will not have dessert'..

Mr. khurana: tu chup reh u looser'.

Geet laughs as Mr. khurana also calling him Losser'.

With Geet all start laughing'.

Geet: papa aap ko dessert milega yea looser kaun hota hain aapko naa kheny wala'..

Mr.khurana: thanku Geet'

Maan knows why she is doing his opposite'..

Geet placed the dessert bowls on the tray and said please bhagwaan ab mera plan kaam kar jaaye'.. (she take a bowl and pore about half a box of red chilli powder in it)

Geet brings dessert and gives it to Mr. juneja:

Mr. Juneja: waaoo Gaaghar (carrot) kaa halwa'..

Mr. khurana: waao gaagar kaa halwa come-on Hitler give it to me'.

Geet: wait Papa and she give a bowl to him '..

Mr. khurana: what is this''

Geet: Papa Gaagar kaa halwa..

Mr. Khurana: itna saa'..

Geet: haan bas itnaa saa'..

Mr. khurana: yea tho aisa lag reha hain jaise sample hoga'..

Geet: Papa have this much only'.

Mr. khurana: make a baby face'..

Geet: no papa not more than this'

Then Geet give to Maan but she din't give on his hand as she put the bowl on the table'

And then shegive it to everyone'.

All are enjoying it'..

Maan also take a bite and he is about to spit out it but he din't and swallow it down'..

Geet is now fully frustrated and she shouted what the hell'.

Everybody now looks at her''

What happen Geet why u shouted'..

Geet then realize that she is not alone threre and said noting actually I had put the milk on the Gas and forget about that.. and she excused herself and leaves from there'.

Geet how can one gulp a tea full of salt and now he swallos the dessert full of chilli power yaaak'. Why is he not saying any thing even he is not even react'. Why'. Now this is too much I really have to ask him'.

Maan is standing alone Geet comes to him and drag him to a corner'..

Maan: saw the had which geet is holding'..

Geet: also realize and leaves his hand..

Maan; what happen Geet whay u dragged me lige this'.

Geet: why are u doing this'..

Maan: but I din't do anything today'.

Geet: vahi tho tum kuch kar kyun nahi rahe''

Maan: tho kya karu he come closer to her and about to kiss her'..

Geet: main tumko yea karney key liye nahi keh rahi'..

Maan: tho'

Geet: Phele tho tum vo namak wali tea pee gaye aur phir tumney vo mirchi waala halwa bhi kahaya' aur tumney mujhe kuch kaha bhi kyun''

Maan: din't say anything and just listing to her'.

Aur mujhko pata hain kii tuko pata hain kii Sameera key party main joo bhi hua vo mainey kiya

Maan: ohh really'..

Geet: don't try to be over smart' tumko pata hain ki vo sab mainey kiya hain vo tumhaari girlfriend hain aur mainey uskii party spoil kari aur yea cut which is on your forhead vo bhi mere vajaha sey hain'.. phir bhi tum mujhsey lad kyun nahi rahe'.

Maan: ooh' tho problem yea hain kii tum mujhsey ladna miss kar rahi hoo'..

Geet: nahi batoo'. Kahi tum apni Girlfriend kii party spoil karney kaa badla tho nahi lee rahe''

Maan: puts his hand on her mouth and comes closer to her'.Geet heart beat is faster & faster & faster'maan comes more closer her heart beats are more faster'..he is that close to her that he can feal her heart beat'.

Maan: vo meri girlfriend nahi hain tho agar tumney uski party spoil kari to mujhey koi farak nahi padta aur rahi baat jo mainey tea aur dessert kayi (his hand is still on the Geet mouth) vo isley agar tum mujhko poison bhi doginaa tho main vo smile key saath pii lunga yea tho bas mirch aur namak hii tha and he remove his hand down from her mouth'. Geet is still there as she is in the shock ' Maan smile and about to leave and again comes near her and asked tumko mirch bhaut pasand hain''tum jo bhi prank karti ho usmein mirch jaaroor hooti hian'.she snaps back she dint say anything and just looking at Maan as she dint say anything Maan comes more closer but she ran from there as she cant bear that closeness''

Maan: sach main pagal hain'

In the Hall all are about to leave and searching for Maan'..

Mrs. Khurana: yea Maan kahan reha gaya'..

Mrs. Malhotra: shaayad baahar hooga'.

As they are leaving Geet comes to them''

Mrs. Juneja & mrs. Khurana: thanked her for the dinner and blessed her'.

Just then Maan comes there'

Geet notice him and act like as she din't saw him'..

Maan is looking at her'. and smiling..

Mrs. Khurana: beta tum yahan hoo huney samjha tum chale gaye'.

Maan: Mom main washroom main tha'

Mrs. Khurana: ok beta lets go'.

Maan: ok Mom..

He comes to Mrs. Malhotra and touched her feet.. she blessed him'

Geet is standing with her Maan is just starring her'

But geet din't'

Mr. malhotra: Beta aatey rehnaa''

Maan: aunty aap ney bola hai tho main jaaroor aaunga'.. and he pass a smile to Geet'..

Geet is still puzzled'.. and annoyed from his behavior'..

Geet leaves from there as she is avoiding him and comes to Mr. khurana and said him bye and hugged him'..

Mr. khurana: oye Hitler tu tho ghar aati hii nahi hain'.

Maan also comes there and said Dad main bhi issey yea hii bol reha tha kii yea tho Ghar aati hii nahi hain isliye humko hii yaahan aana padta hain'

Geet is starring him'..

Mr. khurana: beta aaogi naa'. Geet is starring maan and nodes his head in no'.. and said aaungi naa Papa'.

Maan smiles to see her'.

Mr. khurana: kya matlab tum muuh sey to haan bool rahi hoo par apni gerden( neck) no main hila rahi hoo'.

Geet: I mean aaungi naa' aaungi'.

Mr. khurana: ok bye'..

And leaves from there''

Now Maan & Geet are there''only

Maan: tho tum mere Ghar aaoogi''

Geet: still rooted on the ground'' and said haan'.

Maan:smiles '.. ok .

Geet realize what she said'

And clear herself'.. Nahi aaungi vo tho main bas Papa ko haan bol rahi thi Maan comes close to her her heart beats are faster again and he said humaari baath puuri nahi hui thi and he comes more closer her heart beats becomes more faster and'.. she ran from there Maan smiles'. And leaves from there''

Same night''

In khurana menssion''.

Maan is just lost in geet & what happened on dinner'.

Maan: how come one could can talk with food'' she is really a child'..

Whenever I meat her I found a new thing on her'.. can I ever understand her'.

In Malhotra menssion'..

Geet also thinking all that haapen on dinner'..

Yea Looser ko kya ho gaya hain'.

I evoked him so much but he din't say anything to me.. why'.

Is he playing with me or is he really serious this time'' ohh God please help me out'..now there is only one way we have to be away from each other otherwise I'll get mad'' this looser is really getting on my nerves


Edited by geeta.muskan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update...loved the Maan is confusing Geet....
she is unable to comprehend why is he not fighting with her,,,,,,
haiiii he drank that horrible tea and ate Gajar ka halwa without saying anything....must say Geet is real terror....

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