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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Nice update!!!!!!
Kahin Maan match fixing ka toh nahi soch raha.........
But Maaneet were adorable..........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

👏 hope the beautiful sarrounding will being them close.................................. awesome part.....

libra25 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
REALLY HOPE HE IS NOT TRYING TO FIX HER UP WITH THE OTHER GUY..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy nadia .. just read all d parts of despair ... loved it ...

plzz ... maan ko jaldi theek kar do ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ... pm me ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it n the place they r going to stay is just awesomeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part!

Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!

in few mins it will be updated insha Allah
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Posted: 14 years ago
Naddy, update real fast. It is getting more and more curious and cute. I just would love to know how well they will try to get toknow each other as good friends and spend their one month with light heat=rted moments. i don't care whether they really consumate yet again at that beautiful location as long as as Maan is not sure about his health condition. As we are aware his current condition (walking with the help of clutches) is nothing but his stubbornness & will power but still he needs real rest as he has hurted his backbone. Surely they can not take chances though Maan thinks of his kids feeling bad to find their papa on Whreel chair or something, I feel it is not good since it might make him immobile due to excess stress on the muscels and bones. In any case, geet could be pregnant due to their passionate 2 nights😉😉😉😉
Please update fastttttttttttttttttttt
Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago

despair 37

Geet: was just looked at sunset . she didn't noticed Maan went in side the cottage."Maan look at the sun how beautiful it is looking" when she didnot get his reply she turn back "Maan"
she looked at the cottage .."he went in.." she walk in "i was so busy in looking at sunset totally forgot him, he must be tired"
she walked in there was dim light ...
Geet: Maan where are you? looked in bedroom


Maan: i am here in sitting . she walked in
Geet: this place is so beautiful.
Maan: hmmm
Geet: are you annoyed from me
Maan: no
Geet: phir kya baat ha ... she looked at his cup he was drinking tea.
Geet: Maan: why you didnot called me to make tea for you?
Maan: Geet I should have habit of doing my this by myself.
Geet: got he is again stress out
Maan: i made for you too.
Geet: thanks. she picked up hers. uff such a lovely place even a unromantic guy will not be able to stop them self to fall in love.
Maan: pretend he had not listen it.
Geet: Maan what will you like to eat for dinner.?
Maan: you check what is in fridge make it . tomorrow you go to market & buy grocery .
Geet: ok .
Maan: Geet i want you to start painting , you paint different paintings then i will make a gallery for you.
Geet: but Maan i am not a professional painter. who will come to my gallery?
Maan: i will for sure come , & i don't care for others.
Geet: looked at him ..."yeh kaise pyar ha Maan ka kabhi tou iss qadar haq kabhi ...she thought" she walked to kitchen.
Geet: Maan
Maan: ha
Geet: aloo ha
Maan: tou
Geet: will you eat aloo paratha
Maan: yar make any thing i am just hungry
Geet: ok she quickly boiled aloo in cooker .
Maan: was busy with his files
Geet: why you didnot told me before that you are hungry i was just standing like that out side
Maan: sorry galti hogai
Geet: smiled she made quickly on dish out ..."Maan you start i will make other"
Maan: i can wait for you you make all then we will have together.
Geet: smiled ... this guys is amazing he had tea himself , now he want to have dinner with me..."Maan"
Maan: kya ha Geet?
Geet: whose cottage is this ?
Maan: yours
Geet: how mine
Maan: actually our new project with Veer is behind this hill. as you liked this place i am planning to buy this cottage.
Geet: no need we can visit when we want to.
Maan:Geet i don't like to ask some one or borrow i just take it ..
Geet: Maan really i sometime don't understand your logics
Maan: am i so confusing ?
Geet: yes. totally nuts at time
Maan: smiled ..by the way how much you are making only to of us are here.
Geet: oh i thought you are hungry you will eat 10 or 15
Maan:Geet
Geet: Jee..washed her hands .
Maan: wait let me close all this
Geet: placed plate on table."if you don't mind i will fed you . you just see your files.

Maan: looked in her eyes "if i mind"Geet: then. eat your self

maan :smiled you are so cute i can't stop ..paused
Geet: please complete
Maan: kuch nai... ahhhh he open his mouth
Geet: placed a nawala in his mouth,
Maan: ate it ...you too eat.
Geet: started eating. she use to place one in his mouth one in her.
Maan: sss.... it is to hot..
Geet: wait let me bring water. she was about to get up
Maan: could not stop him self more he just grab her hand
Geet: kya..let me bring bottle .
Maan: no you kiss
Geet: what ? bit shocked
Maan: yes you kiss
Geet: are you ok
Maan: yes i am
Geet: koi..
Maan: no one is here accept lord & a few wild animals & moon.
Geet: just felt help less . "you are impossible Maan"
Maan: ok i am mr impossible , any problem. you kiss
Geet: Maan eat sugar.
Maan: your lips are more sweet.
Geet; uff she pinch him.
Maan: aik tou mein bemaar hn aur doosra tum.
Geet: Maan finish it ...
Maan: first you kiss .
Geet: ok she closed her eyes as she knew he will not listen her.
Maan: enjoyed her restless .. "geet i asked you to kiss i will not"
Geet: uff Maan..Dadi ,beejee, Meera didi , Tanu ,Ved. where are you all see Maan teasing me
Maan could not stop laughing he just kissed her lips .. he just didnot let her go till she pushed him away..
Geet: Maan..took a deep breath
Maan: i was scared you don't start calling Adi. pinky & nakul.
Geet: you... finish it.
Maan: what? kiss? kissed her again
Geet: Maan: i think there is some thing in this paratha that why you are out.
Maan: smiled ate from her.
Geet: good boy.
Maan: will you take me out for a walk?
Geet: sure why not ..
Maan: ok you cleanup i will close these files .
Geet: ok ten mins.
Maan: ok...
Geet: washed dishes & cleared the mess...Maan take your medicine
Maan: i am fine
Geet: stop it Maan take it or we are going back tomorrow .
Maan: blackmailing
Geet; yes if someone do like this with me i blackmail.
Maan: swallow all tablets .."uff Geet they are so bitter yuck."
Geet: got his intention "buhot kar lee sharat aap na ganda bacha "
Maan: smiled
Geet: get up

Maan: please give me my laptop.
Geet: bring his bag... Her diary drop from the side pocket. "yeh yahan"
Maan: looked at her "hmmm "
Geet: why you lie to me ?she picked up
Maan: i just wanted to know about you .
Geet: but it is bad manners to read others diary.
Maan: i just wanted to give you back.
Geet: you don't like to borrow ,right... she for the first time got angry ....
Maan:Geet: really i forgot, i just open it once.
Geet: what so ever you are sick.i never let anyone touch my dairy,just dont talk to me" .. she was about to go out
Maan:Geet wait don't go alone he picked up his crutches ...
Geet: was out
Maan:Geet you know i can't come ... he shouted ... he didnot saw the bag strap his crutches stuck in it he fall down.. as it was wooden floor it created loud noise .
Geet: heard it she just ran back..."Maan "
Maan ;was on floor
Geet: are you ok ... placed his head in her lap .
Maan: looked at her tear eyes ...
Geet: see blood is coming out of your forehead... she was about to get up he hold her hand
Maan:Geet i am fine.
Geet: but this blood .she wipe with her duppata.
Maan: stop crying.
Geet: i am sorry
Maan: i should say sorry you are saying .
Geet: i just over reacted
Maan: but i did wrong.
Geet: hug him tight in her arms .." but you are mine you can read my every thing"
Maan: could her her racing heart."why you love me that much?"
Geet: i don't know. i just said i will look after you & i myself didnot thought you need my support.
Maan: Geet please bas karo .i hurt you that why you....
Geet: please get up.she help him to stand
Maan:see i am ok. actually i was stuck in this..that why fall down
Geet: sorry
Maan: smiled ..
Geet: why are you smiling... she locked the door ..walked to bedroom
Maan:i thought i had to say sorry to you & what not.. but you just forgive me in...paused
Geet: pushed him to bed "i have not yet forgiven you, i just ..."
Maan: stop her saying other word...
both kissing but thinking at there places
Geet: how silly i am if he would have got hurt .
Maan: if i am not able to walk properly will i need her support at every min... if you had gone far how would i searched .
They were tired or hiding their feeling from each other just closed their eyes & slept.in each other arms..
so close yet so far.....
To be cont
do comment & tell me how it is. i want look comments this time please... might be no update tomorrow ..
waiting for comments.

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
part 36
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
meera is so sweet
part 37
maaneet r sooooooooo cute
loved maan
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Edited by ARMAANKSGFAN - 14 years ago

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