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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#641

simply awesome update...
loved it completely
keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#642

Hi,

Uff Maan has gone so crzy.........

but want can he do even..........

hope Geet will never loose her strength.....

and Maan should really concentrate on therapy..........

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#643

hiiiiiiiiiiiii

awesome update

loved it

poor maan

loved maaneet

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#644

Gr8 part. Ur maan doesnt have a mercurial temper, he gets normal within no time:-)

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#645

Dat sweet i hope maan get well soon atleast start recovering lil bit.

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#646

lovely update...................admire geet for her calmness and endurance..................

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Supriya

@priyanka86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#647

lovely updates..

pls add me to ur PM list..

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seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#648

Hi iam your new reader and i loved your ff very ver much. plsssssssssssssssssssss add me in your PM list and update soon.

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#649

MY MIND, MY IMAGINATION: despair 35

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Dr finished his therapy as they walk out
Geet: dr he is improving na?
Dr: looked at Geet "yes"
Geet: thanks to lord. Dr he wanted to stand on his feet today but i didnot let him
Dr: you did it right his muscles are injured it will take few more days to heal.
Geet: looked at Maan
Maan: was smiling as he liked how she was complaining to dr.
Geet; Dr please tell him too not to try
Dr: yes Mr Maan do listen to your wife.
Maan: ok
Dr: was a middle age man ."any other problem Mrs Maan?"
Geet: yes one
Dr: what?
Geet: Innocently asked "dr he really gets angry on small things . is it connected with his ..paused as she saw both Dr and Maan laughing as they got what she want to say.
Dr: Dr Mrs Maan i know him since he was a teenager as he is a donor of this hospital .he is a very active soul always on his toe .just not
Geet: i know that he is a very hard working guy .
Maan i think you have did alot of my complains to dr
Geet: i can share with him right uncle
Dr: smiled right beta .
Maan: sir she is just worried ,i really dont get my self why i get hyper .
Dr: i think Maan you should join yoga classes that will sure relax you
Maan: but i dont like yoga
Dr: ok just do some relaxing thing like join some painting class or music.
Geet; looked at him
Maan: Dr she is a good painter i can take class from her.
Dr: that too good it would be really nice
Geet: smiled
Dr: Maan you should not skip your therapy .
Geet: uncle dont worry i will make sure he daily come .
they thank him and went out
Maan: will you be my teacher?
Geet: sure
Maan: from when we will start our classes .
Geet: today evening
Maan: what will you charge ?
Geet: that i will tell you later...
Romeo helped him to seat. they headed towards office .
Geet: Maan i hope you are not tired.
Maan: no i am not
Geet: Adi asked me it is important for you to come to office today
Maan: i know we had a meeting with the client
Geet: feel relax as Maan was like before cool & calm
They reached office
Adi : hi sir .
Maan: hi
as they reached to the main hall
Maan: where is everyone as he saw all the desk empty.
Geet: i asked them to have half day today.
Maan: why? they reached his cabin
Geet: as i don't like you to feel uneasy
Maan: for how long you will hide me from world
Geet: kneel down "till i can"
Maan: let me face the world.made a baby face
Geet: raised her eyebrows pull his cheeks "kuchi kuchi kuchi nahi "
Maan: Geet he smiled you are getting naughty day by day
Geet: smiled you look so cute when you have long face i can't stop my self pulling your cheeks .
Maan: uff my cheeks
Geet: sorry
Maan: show me the files of the project
Geet: placed all the files in front of him .
Maan: smiled thanks .
Geet: aur kuch boss
Maan: nahi ji
Geet: ok ji
Maan was busy in reading files
Geet: coffee sir placed the cup on his table
Maan: a perfect wife
Geet; sir i am your sectary here
Maan: smiled ok miss sectary ask Adi when they are coming ?
Geet: sir i already asked they will reach here in 5 mins i asked Adi to bring them here.
Maan: ok
Adi entered with Mr Veer
A still image of Veer

( adding Veer as my mom is fan's of Veer😆😉)

Maan hi
Veer did not knew about Maan accident. "oh what happen to you "while shaking hand
Maan: just a accident.
Veer: you should have told me we would have arranged this after i have came back from abroad
Maan: Veer i dont want you to suffer because of me ..his face color changed
Veer: but
Geet; hi i am Mrs Maan (geet who was standing could not stop her self any more)
Veer: hi
Geet : i think we should start the meeting
Veer: sure
Maan : looked at Geet
Geet with eyes ask him to carry on .They discuses the project for hour as the deal was finalized both signed
Maan: my wife will work with you in this project
Geet: with shocked looked at Maan . but i
Veer: why not it would be pride for me to work with your wife.
Geet but i never
Maan: cut her i think Mr Veer i will look after from office the paper work for site she will accompany you
Veer: sure my pleasure
Geet: in anger looked at Maan
Veer: i my self wanted to say that how you will proceed .
Maan: i just dont you to pay for my suffering.
Veer:: Maan this project is a dream for me i just want every thing should be perfect.
Maan: that why Veer i understand you.how i will travel daily to visit site .Geet will for sure manage it
Geet: if you both have completed can i say some thing .
Veer; yes sure
Geet: Maan will handle this project . if you think he cannot visit site . its my promise to you he will be at site when you will need him . dont think he will stay on this chair for ever.
Veer: i just
Geet: i know you just wanted to say how a guy ..paused went out of room as she didnot wanted to cry in front of them
Maan: gave a smiled .
Veer: Maan your wife didnot liked the idea .
Maan: Veer sorry i just wanted to tell her you are my friend or our company had worked together on many project even then when it come to work there is no compromise. but she is not getting it.
Veer: i have a idea why dont you both visit my cottage you can stay there and work . it would be good for your .the site is hardly a distance from there.
Maan: ok i will ask her and let you know
Veer: Maan you are very lucky to have such a devoting wife .who fight for you at every place.
Maan: i am but she is not
Vee: cheer up just make up your mind and visit my place.
Maan: smiled
Veer: i better go now see you at the site.
Maan: sure
Veer left...
Maan : waited for Geet.
Geet: just walk to the roof of office she composed her self when she came back Adi told her Veer is gone.
Geet: ran to Maan cabin .."oh i am sorry"
Maan: hmm
Geet: i was rude.
Maan: hmm
Geet: Maan:
Maan: Geet we are going on Honey Moon tomorrow if you dont mind will you accompany me .
Geet: in shocked looked at him she thought he would be angry but instead of that he was smiling .
Maan:yes or no my larka wife?
Geet: yes .
To be cont. hope you liked it sorry for mistake . do comment and dont forget to hit like button.

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1643418/ss-darkness-part-18-at-page-22-17-august

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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago